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Post by CrowxLeaf on Nov 23, 2007 8:40:22 GMT -5
Title: Together at Last Chapters: Don’t know yet, probably under 10. Author: Snowstar Pairing: Crow-x-Leaf, Bramble-x-Squirrel, Lion-x-Hazel Rating: PG Spoilers: Read up through and including The Sight. Summary: [glow=red,2,300]What would happen if they got back together?[/glow] Warning: Romance, Angst, ‘cat’ swears. (e.g. Mousedung!) Disclaimer: I don’t own Warriors. Beta: No Cover: Not yet
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Post by Chapter 1 on Nov 23, 2007 8:58:53 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300](Note: this is after Leafpool has begun to falter in her work. But Cinderpelt never had her dream about Starclan.)[/glow] Leafpool gently lept from rock to rock, carefully scaling the cliff that partly enclosed the Thunderclan camp. As soon as she was out of hearing range, Leafpool began to sprint towards the Windclan territory. At the border she sat and waited for her beloved. Suddenly, she heard a rustle in the ferns.
Handsome Crowfeather came into view. "Hello, sweet Leafpool," he meowed lovingly. Leafpool rubbed her head to his. "It is good to see you Crowfeather," she purred. Leafpool declared, "I am ready to come with you to join Windclan." "Are you sure?" asked Crowfeather. "Yes, I am sure," Leafpool replied. Then the two set off in the direction of the Windclan camp.
Crowfeather awakened Onestar and brought Leafpool to him. Leafpool proclaimed, "I wish to join Windclan as a warrior. Do I have your consent?" Onestar thought for a moment. "Doesn't Thunderclan need you?" he asked. "Cinderpelt is young. She will find a new apprentice. Until then Brightheart will help her. I want to join your clan, Onestar," Leafpool pointed out. "Very well," answered Onestar. "I will alert the clan at once."
"May all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here beneath the hill for a clan meeting!" yowled Onestar. When all the cats were gathered, he announced, "Leafpool has come to join us as a warrior. She is welcome here. I hope you will make her as comfortable as possible." Murmurs of disbelief arose from the crowd of watching cats. "Why, she's half kittypet!" protested Nightpelt. Crowfeather defended, "But she's half clan leader and half clan warrior!" A black tom spat, "She is not welcome here!" Onestar shouted above the rest, "She will stay!" And that was the end of the meeting.
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wildfire
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Post by wildfire on Dec 11, 2007 18:11:08 GMT -5
i think it has to have at least 10 ch.
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 11, 2007 21:50:30 GMT -5
OMG do you thinjk jaypaw or/ and Hollypaw are her kits!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I DO imean LOOK at all the evidence like leafpool being very plump at the end of sunset, Squirrelflight milk not coming, leafpool having that HUGE ubsession with Jaypaw, he wanting him to be a medicat. Jaypaw's and Hollypaw's coloring and somthuing else in suntest iread and her firey guilt when with sorreltail (that last one could have just been for Cinderpelt BUT STILL!)
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wildfire
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Post by wildfire on Dec 19, 2007 21:01:54 GMT -5
I think that Jaypaw and Hollypaw aren't Leafpool's children because, I think the other cats would have noticed Leafpool was pregnant, and all the cats were plump not just Leafpool, and Leafpool was so interested in Jaypaw because he started having visions and knew the herbs well and stuff, plus Jaypaw isn't colored like Leafpool or Crowfeather at all and Hollypaw's coloring doesn't mean her parents had to have been black, AND why would Tigerstar visit Jaypaw unless he was Brambleclaw's kit?
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heatherstripe
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Post by heatherstripe on Dec 20, 2007 0:02:31 GMT -5
Well i agree with rainstar because yes, hollypaw and are the same color of CROWFEATHER and lionpaw is the same color as LEAFPOOL. Lionpaw has amber eyes(leafpool has them) Hollypaw has a black-gray bcolor fur and green eyes(could have inheirated from Firestar or Sandstorm) and Jaypaw has black-gray fur and blue eye(like crowfeather) There is also other evidence when jaypaw was traveling and he thought the wind felt great on his face. Also that jaypaw is stubborn, short-tempered, quick-witted, and remarks like crowfeather. And that isn't enough proof i have more and more. go CROWxLEAF!!!!!
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Post by Snowstar on Dec 27, 2007 8:53:56 GMT -5
(Ps. Thanks for all the comments. Sorry it took me so long to get the next chapter. But here it is.)
It was the next morning at Thunderclan camp. Squirrelflight got up and stretched her paws out in front of her as she yawned. "I'm going to say good morining to sleepy old Leafpool," she thought.
But when Squirrelflight peered into the den, all she could see was Cinderpelt carefully arrangeing herbs. Squirrelflight questioned, "Have you seen Leafpool?"
Cinderpelt looked at her curiously. "No, I thought she went out hunting. She hasn't told you anything huh?" Cinderpelt meowed. Squirrelflight shook her head. "Don't worry, she'll come back soon," Cinderpelt reasured her.
Squirrelflight bonded over to Brambleclaw. She purred and flicked his ear with her tail. "What is it you want?" Brambleclaw playfully purred.
"Can I go out hunting," Squirrelflight asked. She then added, "alone."
"Sure," answered Brambleclaw. "Prey should be out by now." Brambleclaw knew Squirrelflight was onto something else, but he also knew he couldn't stop her if he tried. Quickly, he turned around and trotted to the center of camp to orginize patrols.
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Post by snowstar on Dec 27, 2007 9:13:49 GMT -5
Ashfoot wound her way around the warriors of Windclan's camp to sit at the center. "Leafpool, Crowfeather, and myself will go on the sunhigh patrol. That's not to long from now. Ever since the badgers were found on thundercaln turf, Onesta and I have felt the need for an extra patrol. So, at least until the badger trouble is gone, sunhigh patrols are a must." Soon, Ashfoot, Crowfeather, and Leafpool set out for the Thunderclan border. As they approched, Leafpool saw something rustling in the bushes. Suddenly, she knew what. "Squirrelflight!" she exclaimed. Ashfoot shuffled her feet, but kept her claws sheathed. "What brings you to our border alone?" she asked non-chalantly. "You know what!" Squirrelflight spat. "I'm here to rescue Leafpool!" Crowfeather growled, "She came by her own will. You know we wouldn't catnapp her!" Suddenly, a flame colored pelt flew through the air and landed in front of Ashfoot. "What's going on here!" Firestar demanded. "You will not take my daughter, Thunderclan's medicine cat apprentice, away!" "Father," Leafpool pleaded, "this is were I want to stay. Here as a Windclan warrior. Here with Crowfeather." Firestar recoiled as if stung by a bee. In shock, Squirrelflight's jaw dropped open. Another shape appeared from amongst the ferns. "Cinderpelt, I'm sorry," Leadpool mewed. "But my heart lies with Crowfeather." Cinderpelt responded, "I'm disappointed in you Leafpool, for not putting your feelings aside for the good of the clan. But I don't want you to be unhappy. So stay. Just don't excpect a warm wecome back if you change your mind." Firestar signaled to the others it was time to go back with a flick of his tail. He looked back at Leafpool, not with anger, but sorrow. "Maybe if I hadn't expected so much of her, this wouldn't of happened," he thought, shameing himself. Snowstar-white she-wolf with silvertinged muzzle. Leader of the Snowpack. Warrior saying-help me and I'll help you, fight me and I'll kill you.
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wildfire
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Post by wildfire on Dec 27, 2007 23:46:07 GMT -5
OH YEAH?? well Heatherstripe, explain to me how nobody noticed that while LEAFPOOL was inside the camp (where everyone could see her give birth to Jaypaw and Hollypaw) when all of SQUIRRELFLIGHTS kits came from OUTSIDE of camp with Squirrelflight. AND Squirrelflight remembers giving birth to the kits. Plus Lionpaw looks like Squirrelflight and Hollypaw's fur is totally black not gray black and her eyes could have been inherited from SQUIRRELFLIGHT, Firestar, or Sandstorm just as easily as if Leafpool was her mother, AND Jaypaw's fur is grey, AND a cats color doesn't always show who its parents were. There are plenty of warriors who look nothing like their parents. AND Leafpool gave up Crowfeather, and she was very clear about that. There's no secret meetings or attempts to leave the Clans or anything. And you never explained why no cat noticed Leafpool's non-existent condition
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Post by snowstar on Dec 28, 2007 7:21:38 GMT -5
Please, everyone. Give me a break! If you want to argue about this, here is not the place to do it. Thank you for understanding.
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shadow
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Post by shadow on Dec 28, 2007 9:59:32 GMT -5
I agree Snowstar, but I have one thing to say:
Wildfire, if you have read the warrior play, then you would know that Leafpool was going to tell Crowfeather something important, and then Crowfeather spilled about him and Nightcloud. leafpool, could have been pregnant.
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Minty
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Post by Minty on Dec 28, 2007 12:11:42 GMT -5
I use to think it wasn't true but, go to www.warriorscats.com and then to ask Erin. You'll see a question about if Hollypaw, Jaypaw and/or Lionpaw are her kits and the answer is pretty interesting!
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wildfire
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Post by wildfire on Jan 2, 2008 19:59:27 GMT -5
I've already read both of those things, but they don't change my mind. In case you haven't noticed, Erin never said, "wow, how'd you guess?" she only said that that was an interesting rumor, if she'd said "sorry, that's wrong" it probably would of brought some hopes down, and nothing in the book suggested that Lionpaw, Hollypaw or Jaypaw were Leafpool's children, and in an interview that everything in the book would suggest what happens next. Besides, if Leafpool had had something that important to say like, I'm pregnant with your children, I don't think she'd let it drop. Plus at least one of those kits would have had to have been younger than the others, because i'm pretty sure that Squirrelflight was heavily pregnant at that time and Leafpool was obviously not. I'm sorry, but I don't think any of those kits are Leafpool's. I'm not saying that it's impossible or that you have to think that too, I'm just telling you what I think. P.S. sorry Snowstar you're right and if any one wants to argue, just go to my post Lost in Darkness to do it.
P.S.S. It's under Multi-Chapters (though it should be under power of three rewrites)
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wildfire
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Post by wildfire on Jan 3, 2008 19:06:17 GMT -5
P.S.S.S. also, it would be nice if someone read it. whatever you think of me, don't take it out on the story.
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wildshadow
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Post by wildshadow on Jan 8, 2008 21:24:35 GMT -5
give it a rest wildfire... all the threads i've read in the last two days have you arguing to anyone who will listen on this subject, if you don't enjoy Leaf x Crow, then don't read FanFics on it--- not complain about it everywhere and Snowstar has the right to ask you, as she has, politely not to argue about it here.
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