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Post by Lightningstrike on Oct 17, 2007 20:59:21 GMT -5
Great story!!!!All you have to do is go into mult. chapters and post a thread titled:Sunset Island,then post your chappies!!!!!Hope it helps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-suddenly remembers-Thank you sooooooooooooo much for reviewing meh story!!!!!!!
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Post by Shadowstar on Oct 18, 2007 6:25:20 GMT -5
I dunno, I'd try copying, and then posting it in mulit-chapters.
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Post by Wildpaw on Oct 19, 2007 0:49:16 GMT -5
Thanks Lightningstrike and Shadowstar!! I'll try both of them to see which one works!! ;D Check in the Multi-Chapters soon!!
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Post by Shadowstar on Nov 1, 2007 22:18:01 GMT -5
I will!
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Post by silverfog on Nov 4, 2007 9:48:45 GMT -5
I'm not sure, but I think you just have to copy and paste it all and do 'New Thread" when you're at the multi-chapter section of ShadowClan or RiverClan fanfics. I know it's a pain, sorry!
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Post by Wildpaw on Nov 6, 2007 0:32:29 GMT -5
Thanks! Sorry I haven't posted for a while my computers been on the blink! ;D I'll post more tomorrow!!Don't have time tonight!! ;D ;D
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Post by Wildpaw on Nov 7, 2007 0:53:48 GMT -5
Thanks for all the comments!! Chapter 4 Splashwave The new warrior yawned, then jumped up excitedly as he realised that this was his first day as a warrior. He ran over to Reedtail, but, before he could prod her, Reedtail jumped up and squealed happily, waking up all the warriors in the process. "Thanks, AlarmClocktail! It was time to wake up anyway!" said Finchwing happily. Waveshore stretched and walked over to Reedtail and Splashwave. "Hey, guys, I wondered if you wanted to go hunting? You, know, it's a nice day and all...." "Sure!" said Reedtail "I want to catch a mouse, and a vole, a chaffinch,a........ Half an hour later, on the hunting patrol: "And a robin, and another mouse and a....a... A CHICKEN!!!!" "Excuse me, but a chicken? Chickens live on farms, not in the forest!" said Waveshore. "CHICKENS!!!!!" screamed Reedtail, running off. "I think the excitements gone to her head!" Splashwave whispered to Waveshore, giggling. "Tell me about it!" said Waveshore, sighing. Suddenly they heard a scream. Reedtail! They ran in the direction that Reedtail went. What they saw was a horrible sight. A badger was ripping Reedtail to shreds! Splashwave launched himself onto the badger's back, ripping and tearing and scratching and biting. He was vaguely aware of Waveshore doing the same. The, badger, outnumbered, raced off into the bushes. Splashwave and aveshore raced to Reedtail's side. "Waveshore, go and get Valleytail and Gentlepaw, NOW!" ordered Splashwave. Waveshore raced off. Splashwave looked at his sister. It was a pitiful sight. Blood seeped out of horrific wounds and his breathing was irregular. Suddenly he said in a rasping voice, "Beware of cats that you trust, as they are not always what they seem". OOOOOHH! Creepy!! ;D
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Post by Wildpaw on Nov 7, 2007 0:55:57 GMT -5
Sorry if I keep calling Reedtail a he!! I get confused!
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Post by Lightningstrike on Nov 9, 2007 17:23:11 GMT -5
Wow that is awesome!!!!!
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Post by ;R.o.c.k.y.w.a.v.e; on Nov 17, 2007 11:36:08 GMT -5
Pretty good so far...I wonder why it got rejected.
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Post by rabbitclaw on Nov 21, 2007 12:57:27 GMT -5
that was really good!!!!!! though i still don't get why it's called Sunset Island oh well.... you have your reasons i guess..... can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!! ^.^
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