Flowerclaw
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Post by Flowerclaw on Jun 11, 2007 12:00:21 GMT -5
Title: Flowerclaw's Life Chapter: 1 Author: Flowerclaw Pairing:LelandXFlowerclaw,LeopardstarXVoletooth Rating: PG Summary: Flowerclaw is a prepy young warrior of RiverClan with two great friends, Weedtail and Petalfrost, but when Leopardstar asks Weedtail who he loves, what will he say? Warning: N/A Disclaimer: I am not the owner of warriors. Beta: None Music: None Cover: img501.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled1ej1.pngHere is my first fan-fiction, but I've been thinking it up for a while.My main characters are Flowerclaw, and young calico, and her two friends, Weedtail, a brown tom, and Petalfrost, a silver she-cat. Flowerclaw pushed herself up and out of her mossy nest. She yawned,stretching her front legs, then her back. She must of woken late, for the RiverClan camp was swarming with cats. She turned to see her friends, Weedtail and Petalfrost, sleeping soundly. She decided to let them sleep, for they had only became warriors yesterday. She padded out of the den, trying to avoid walking on her sore paw. A fight with ShadowClan had left a huge scar down on leg, and a twisted paw. She looked down at the paw that dangled painfully in the air. She stopped and began to lick it, but Leopardstar's call rang out across the clearing. "Let all those cats old enough to catch their own fish gather here under Highboulder for a clan meeting." she yowled. Flowerclaw got up to rouse her friends, but as she turned around, she saw them come out of the den. She signaled for them to come and sit with her, and they padded toward her. "What does Leopardstar want now?" Weedtail murmured, his tail wrapped around his paws. "As some of you might know, a moon ago I took Voletooth as my mate. Now, as the time and need for more warriors arrives, Voletooth and I have made a decision that may affect the whole clan."she meowed, her head and tail raised high in excitment. "We are going to have kits!" A wave of uncertainty moved through the clan, though no cat said anything to challenge Leopardstar's decision. Weedtail's ears pricked up in confusion. "But clan leaders are not supposed to have kits! Isn't that against the warrior code?" he mewed. Petalfrost gave Flowerclaw an uneasy glance. Leopardstar twitched her ears. "Doesn't the warrior code say that a leader's word is law? Are you challenging my decision?" she meowed. "Who do you love, Weedtail? Go ahead,tell us." Weedtail took a step back, toward Flowerclaw. "I...I love Flowerclaw." he mewed.
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Flowerclaw
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Post by Flowerclaw on Jun 19, 2007 12:29:26 GMT -5
Chaper 2
Flowerclaw was stunned. She warily glanced around. She felt as if every cat was staring at her like a badger that had just wondered into cmap. She felt eyes burning into her fur, she felt like rushing into her den and forgeting all of this, but she knew she couldn't. She had to stay there for Weedtail.Leopardstar stared down at the two cats. Flowerclaw shifted her paw across the ground, hoping to have this over quick. Finally, Leopardstar spoke. "Alright. All of you are dismissed. Except Flowerclaw and Weedtail.
Flowerclaw felt a pang of sadness. It was her luck that Weedtail would pick her to embarrass in fornt of the whole clan. Petalfrost winked at Flowerclaw. "You'll be alright. Leopardstar's a tough leader, but she's not unreasonable. She won't exile you, that's for sure." she mewed, then padded into the warriors' den, but Flowerclaw knew she wasn't going to her nest. She knew Petalfrost would stand at the front of the den to listen to what Leopardstar had to say.
Flowerclaw approched Leopardstar with her tail tucked under. She had no clue what Leopardstar wanted to see her for, after all, it had been Weedtail who had started all this mess. She wanted to tell him how mad she was at him, but she tried her best to hold her tounge. Fussing would only make things worse. She knew that.
Weedtail sat down beside her, like he had done the greatest thing in the world. He glanced at her, and she slowly rolled her eyes. If only he had kept his mousebrained mouth shut! she thought. Leopardstar stepped foward. "What have you two done?" she asked her tail swishing ot behind her. "N-nothing, Leopardstar." Flowerclaw mewed. She kept her vioce low as Leopardstar had done, she obviously didn't want the other clan cats to hear. "I just told you that I loved Flowerclaw." meowed Weedtail, though everyone could have heard Weedtail he had spoken so loud.The other cats in their dens snickered. Flowerclaw dipped her head.
"So, you think you have the ability to just play with old Leopardstar anytime, huh? Well, I'm your leader,Weedtail, and if you can't accept that, then you are both exiled. Or better yet, Flowerclaw, you're exiled. That'll teach you Weedtail. See how long you can go without you girlfriend." she meowed. Flowerclaw's ears pricked. Why was she getting puished for something Weedtail had started? "Go now!" Leopardstar mewed. Flowerclaw got up, and with a flash of bravery, rushed over to the fresh kill pile and stole two voles and a fish.
Leopardstar said nothing as Flowerclaw left the camp for good. She was never coming back. Weedtail lashed his tail and stood up. "Leopardstar, if you can't live with my big mouth, then you're out of two warriors.Goodbye." he mewed, and did the same as Flowerclaw, grabbing one vole and two fish and rushed out of camp. Flowerclaw pawed him on his way out. "Bravo, Weedtail. Thanks for sticking with me." she mewed. Weedtail stared at her. "And?" he asked. Flowerclaw stared in confusion for a moment and then slowly meowed, "I love you,Weedtail."
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Post by Flowerclaw on Aug 16, 2007 19:57:05 GMT -5
Then, realizing she had just said the dumbest thing ever, she picked up her prey and raced into the river, getting out with a shake. She would never love Weedtail, and she knew that right from the beginning. Flowerclaw glaced back, noticing a sigh from Weedtail. "I guess you didn't mean to say that." he murmured, getting up and racing off, out of RiverClan territory. Flowerclaw watched him go, but she felt nothing.
Flowerclaw licked her paw and then noticed Weedtail's prey laying on the ground. The least I can do is take it to him. she thought, taking off, desparate to find some sort of scent trail. She carried the two pieces of prey in her mouth, trying not to clench down and make the pieces bleed, for then any cat could follow her trail.
Flowerclaw found Weedtail in a patch of grass, his head hanging low in discust. Flowerclaw guessed it was because of what she had done earlier. Flowerclaw felt bad, and she didn't really want to confront him after the way she had treated him. But Flowerclaw knew if she wanted to be even friends she would have to tell him what she really thought.
She licked her paw, setting the prey down on the ground. Flowerclaw lowered down and hoped he hadn't seen her. All she needed was just him saying something about her spying on him. If he found anything at all, much less her, she knew he might be a little forcefull. Flowerclaw picked up the prey and headed over toward him. Flowerclaw noticed another vole in his mouth, and she guessed that was why he never said anything to her. As Flowerclaw approached, she lowered the prey.
She thought she had the setting straight. Somewhere out of RiverClan terriory, but not somewhere where they had already set up another home. Flowerclaw grinned, but Weedtail just snickered, turning his head. Flowerclaw felt a rush of dissapointment roll over her, but then she pushed it away. She had to tell this cat what she thought, no matter what the cost. "What do you want?" he sniffed. Flowerclaw took one more step and started to reply, but her foot slipped harshly on a hole in the ground, and she tried to pick it back up. She heard another cat in the grass murmur something to another cat, but she payed no attention in her desparate attempt to free herself of the hole's cluches. But then, she found herself slipping, and with a screach of terror, falling into the hole. The cat in the bushes jumped out and ran after her.
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Post by Tigerfur on Aug 16, 2007 23:40:13 GMT -5
This story is FANTASTIC! ;D I hope you write more soon! ;D
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Flowerclaw
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Post by Flowerclaw on Aug 22, 2007 20:24:51 GMT -5
Chapter 4
Flowerclaw glanced at the young cat, watching him grab her by the scruff of the neck, then hauling her back up to solid ground. She licked her chest quickly, then she glanced at the young tom that had just saved her life. Weedtail started to move foward, but the other cat in the bushes revealed his teeth, and Weedtail backed down. Flowerclaw dipped her head in respect, but said nothing. Then, the young cat got up and mewed, "Come on, bra. You've got to watch where you're going. I'm glad I came here and found you;your friend obvisously wasn't going to help you." He spat the last words out, turning and giving Weedtail a supsicous stare.
Weedtail didn't seem too impressed, but Flowerclaw glanced at him with the upmost respect. She hoped Weedtail only found out it was because he had saved her life, not that she knew that the cat was one of the cutest toms ever. She had wanted to see him since she was an apprentice, but she showed nothing as she mewed," I know. I...I just thought I would give this rotton tom something to think about!" Weedtail knew something was going on, for he raised his tail up and started to get up. Then, carefully, he layed his paw on her shoulder. "Ow!" Flowerclaw called out. "That's the third time you hit me today!" she knew it wasn't true, but it sure was a way to get attention.
One of the cats, the larger one that had shown his teeth, stepped foward toward Weedtail, his eyes narrowing. "You like to beat up she cats? Well, we can't have that in this place!" He yowled, tackling Weedtail. Then, the cat that had saved Flowerclaw's life meowed, "Hi. I'm Leland." Flowerclaw nodded and then licked her paws. "I'm Flowerclaw." she murmured, then she turned to the other cat. "That's my dad,Duane. Though most call him Cat." he mewed, as if he was reading her thoughts. "That's Weedtail." she added, pointing with her tail toward her confused friend. "I don't think he deserves to be near any she cat. He treats me so bad." she twisted her tail around her paws. Then, Leland mumbled quietly,"Flowerclaw, you know, you're kinda cute."
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Post by Tigerfur on Sept 10, 2007 19:19:10 GMT -5
AWESOME chapter! Wow, it sounds like Flowerclaw can attract alot of toms, update again soon! ;D
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Post by Lightningstrike on Sept 10, 2007 20:06:43 GMT -5
yea!tis the upmost wonderful story ive read today!
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Flowerclaw
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Post by Flowerclaw on Sept 12, 2007 18:11:25 GMT -5
Really? WOW!! XDDD Thank you! ^^ I'm sorry, I'll have it up by Friday, but I can't update soon.
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Post by loudpaw on Sept 24, 2007 19:52:01 GMT -5
This is pretty good but I have to disagree with Leopardstars desicion, not the having kits one, but the one about exciling Flowerclaw and Weedtail. The real Leopardstar woulden't do that! She is fair! She wouldent excile someone because he/she said who he/she loved! But it was pretty good other then that.
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Post by hige on Oct 9, 2007 12:20:38 GMT -5
Hey, loudpaw, thsi story is really good!And stop with the mean comments. You said one to my friend AuroraStar, saying how much you hated her story, and now she won't even come on here again!
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Post by Someone on Oct 9, 2007 15:02:11 GMT -5
Cute story
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Post by Mossleg on Oct 10, 2007 15:12:26 GMT -5
I have to agree with loudpaw for the accuracy of Leopardstar part. And I'm a bit confused about why she's trying to alienate Weedtail. Weren't they friends, like, five seconds ago? She went from "I love you" to "[Weedtail] doesn't deserve to be near any cat." Is she bipolar, is she acting, or did I just totally miss something? That's just what I think, though. I do like the story, I'm just confused.
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Post by Flowerclaw on Oct 13, 2007 21:03:39 GMT -5
I have to agree with loudpaw for the accuracy of Leopardstar part. And I'm a bit confused about why she's trying to alienate Weedtail. Weren't they friends, like, five seconds ago? She went from "I love you" to "[Weedtail] doesn't deserve to be near any cat." Is she bipolar, is she acting, or did I just totally miss something? That's just what I think, though. I do like the story, I'm just confused. (Flowerclaw's pretty much acting stupid to get a tom's attention.) Chapter 5 Flowerclaw wanted to tell Leland what she really thought, but instead she kept her thoughts in her head and simply mewed, "Thank you. You are too." Leland bowed his head as if embarrassed, but then he picked it back up. "Thank you." Flowerclaw got up and began to wonder to where Weedtail was now laying on the ground, rather winded. "Why did you get me exiled?" she hissed. The least she could say right now was that she knew she was not telling a lie right now; she had a right to ask that question. If Weedtail hadn't challenged Leopardstar, she would be warm in her nest. Well, Leland's better than any nest of cource though. she told herself. Weedtail stammered. " I-I don't know what you mean Flowerclaw. I mean Flowerstar." he murmured. Flowerclaw twisted her head in thought, then it hit her. That little sneak! She knew what he was doing. It was simple. If he could convince Leland and Cat that she was beating up on him, then they would be mad at her. Not going to work. "Weedtail, are you delerious? You obviously aren't clear in your mind." (Flowerclaw heard a snort of disgust at this.) "Leland, I think we need to take him to some kind of medicine cat." Leland nodded. "Apparently." he meowed under his breath. "Come on and we can take him somewhere." and turning to Weedtail, he added, "You're going to have to walk yourself, bra." Weedtail nodded and stumbled to his feet, but wavered. Cat slowly picked him up, using his shoulder to nudge him up. They could all tell Weedtail was sick, and Flowerclaw knew why. The prey running in RiverClan wasn't as good as the leaf-bare wind came in, but it was even worse now that the Twolegs were posining the fish, or catching them and putting them back.
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Post by coalfur on Jan 14, 2008 20:37:05 GMT -5
Really great story. Aesome and astounding creativity, that what you've got.
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Post by Icewhisker on Jul 20, 2008 20:02:48 GMT -5
Good story, but I feel kind of bad for Weedtail...
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