Alternative Ending

frostlilly New Member GreyxSilver Posts: 10	Alternative Ending Dec 29, 2007 19:54:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by frostlilly on Dec 29, 2007 19:54:58 GMT -5 Time passes too quickly, and Bluestar wouldn't have the power to banish Tigerclaw from all the territories. Other than that it is ok.
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rosiepool New Member Pants are for squares Posts: 44	Alternative Ending Jan 27, 2008 4:07:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rosiepool on Jan 27, 2008 4:07:22 GMT -5 That's just mean Loudpaw!!! I don't know why they allow you on this site!!! Don't let Loudpaw bug you, Aurorastar. You're really good!!!! ;D
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Alternative Ending Jan 28, 2008 20:33:43 GMT -5

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Post by xshadowstormx on Jan 28, 2008 20:33:43 GMT -5

yeah it was definetly too slow... and kinda odd... keep writing though its pretty good

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Savila New Member Posts: 7	Alternative Ending Apr 3, 2008 10:15:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Savila on Apr 3, 2008 10:15:27 GMT -5 My only problem is that no one went to go help the kit.

courageheart Junior Member Posts: 52	Alternative Ending May 9, 2008 16:08:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by courageheart on May 9, 2008 16:08:43 GMT -5 i agree with savila,why did't anyone go help the kit?but other wise i love the alternate ending!its interestingly twisted,nice!
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Lightningstar Full Member "Anyone? Anyone?" Posts: 234	Alternative Ending May 10, 2008 17:41:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lightningstar on May 10, 2008 17:41:36 GMT -5 The other thing is, you've got the wrong book. Silverstream has her kits at the end of Forest of Secrets, not Fire and Ice.
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Post by frostlilly on Dec 29, 2007 19:54:58 GMT -5

Post by rosiepool on Jan 27, 2008 4:07:22 GMT -5

Post by xshadowstormx on Jan 28, 2008 20:33:43 GMT -5

Post by Savila on Apr 3, 2008 10:15:27 GMT -5

Post by courageheart on May 9, 2008 16:08:43 GMT -5

Post by Lightningstar on May 10, 2008 17:41:36 GMT -5

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