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Post by amberowlmoss on Dec 2, 2007 0:54:38 GMT -5
.::.Tittle.::. Fire X ?
.::.Chapters.::. Dunno, depends on how it flows, I suppose.
.::.Author.::. On this site AmberOwlMoss, but I'm known as Amberfoot and Anniku/Anku.
.::.Rating.::. PG, anything could happen.
.::.Spoilers.::. Just in case, make sure you've read them all, I guess.
.::.Summary.::. All the she-cats from all the Clans are trying to win Firestar over the rest of 'em.
.::.Warning.::. Some dead cats are alive, Bluestar is a deputy, and anything bloody could happen, but nothing will get descriptive too much.
.::.Disclaimer.::. Do you think I own Warriors? -.- No, I dun. I would be writing an official book, Dark River, instead of this crappy fanfiction! xD *Shot*
.::.Beta.::. Nope.
.::.Cover.::. Not yet, but maybe . . .
Dunno if this is the right area, if it isn't please tell me, and give me the correct area~ Thankee~ <33
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Post by amberowlmoss on Dec 2, 2007 0:59:38 GMT -5
.::.Chapter one, Patrolling.::.
Firestar lunged at the mouse, landing on it and killing it with a simply swipe of a paw, cracking it's poor neck. He wriggled his tail happily, pleased with the luck of prey. He gave silent thanks to StarClan, then turned back to Yellowfang.
Grabbing his prey, he propped it by Yellowfang. Here ya go." He meowed simply, yawning. Yellowfang kept her blush and purr back. "Shall we share?" She meowed, mild excitement showing. She knew she would beat all those other pieces of fox dung, Firestar liked her most. Firestar nodded. "Sure." He meowed, laying down to quickly eat the plump mouse.
Yellowfang sat down slower, taking her time with her bites, never wanting the moment to end. Her fur ruffled a little, and she turned to lick it down again, still holding her wild purrs and mild blushes down. "You don't have to act like a fan-cat!" She scolded herself, continuing her small bites of prey.
Yellowfang forced herself to yawn casually when she finished, licking her jaws and whiskers. "Thanks, Firestar." She meowed. "Did I ever mention you're a grand leader?" She meowed, her eyes widening in a flirtatious manner. Firestar's tail twitched, as he smiled. "Yes, but thanks, again." He meowed.
Firestar heaved himself up, starting to pad away towards the WindClan border. Yellowfang heaved herself up, a little embarrassed, but trailed after him nonetheless. Cinderpelt waited in the bushes, eyes following Yellowfang, who was trailing far behind Firestar daydreaming about him, she figured.
She hissed quietly, unsheathing her claws, and lunged. Firestar was too far to hear, and soon disappeared far behind brush. Yellowfang let out a Murrow! of surprise, falling down as Cinderpelt pinned her easily. "Do you, you rotten piece of badger dung, think you could've even tried to steal my Fiery away?! Huh?" She hissed, but somewhat quietly, so Firestar wouldn't return. She glared hole in Yellowfang's fluffy dark gray pelt, who looked somewhat scared.
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Post by amberowlmoss on Dec 2, 2007 1:19:23 GMT -5
.::.Chapter Two, Fight.::.
Yellowfang opened her mouth to yowl out for Firestar. Cinderpelt growled dangerously, placing a paw atop her muzzle. It only muffled the sound, but Firestar was too far to hear poor Yellowfang. "Brown and ginger kits? Creepy." Cinderpelt meowed in a menacing manner. She seemed to hover over Yellowfang, as though she wouldn't hesitate to kill her. But she wouldn't, no, Firestar would hate her for that.
Cinderpelt heaved her chest in and out, breathing loudly as he growl escaped, growing louder as she knew Firestar trotted along merrily father and father away. She raised an unsheathed claw, letting out a small yelp of a battle cry. Yellowfang kicked her back legs up as Cinderpelt lunged a little closer forward, unbalancing her.
She turned, dropping to the ground and rolling away swiftly. Yellowfang rolled on ground instead of crushing Cinderpelt as she had planned, she jumped up, already lunging. Seh skidded to a stop quickly, though, Cinderpelt was lunging and wouldn't be afraid to crash into her in her rage.
"We're friends, how could she do this?" They both thought.
Cinderpelt jumped up before she hit Yellowfang, landed on her with her back and crushing her a little against the hard sandy forest ground. She rolled off quickly, turning swiftly and grasping Yellowfang's side with her claws. She dug them in. Yellowfang was too winded at the moment to yowl in pain.
Cinderpaw started to slowly slice poor Yellowfang's flank, but then she jumped up, lunging just enough to tower directly over Cinderpelt, who was growling in anger. Cinderpelt snarled, and in a flash of fangs had Yellowfang's front left leg in her jaw's grasp. Yellowfang hissed in anger, grabbing Cinderpelt's right ear and tugging.
Cinderpelt bit her leg harder as Yellowfnag started to pull her ear off. Eventually it snapped off, and Cinderpelt jumped back, yowling and rolling in pain. She forced herself up once more, though, snarling, hissing, and spitting, Yellowfang had done the same.
They charged again, anger pulsing in there veins. Becoming one big furball . . .
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Firestar yawned, stretching. He flexed his claws one at a time, examining that he should sharpen them soon. He turned, his mouth open, to speak to Yellowfang, who had stayed silent the rest of the way to the WindClan border. He gasped, charging through the forest. Yellowfang was gone!
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Post by amberowlmoss on Dec 2, 2007 1:44:06 GMT -5
.::.Chapter Three, A Trip To Dogbreath's Den.::.
Ginger paws darted quickly through the forest, as Firestar's chest heaved, trying to get more air. He jumped into the clearing, eyes darting around wildly until it landed on a tumbleweed of fur. He jumped in there, immediately sending both cats, who had the scent of ThunderClan, flying in opposite directions.
He caught his breath for a while before raising his head, turning to the left. "Cinderpelt?" He meowed between huffs, turning his head the other way. "And Yellowfang?!" He meowed next, in surprise. They both had scars everywhere. "I think this dawn patrol just ended, what happened?" He meowed in surprise.
"Nothing, Firestar!" Yellowfang spat in frustration, glaring hole in Cinderpelt for ruining her private patrol with Firestar. She felt like hissing, especially with her mouth hanging open like it was, but she managed to keep it back. Firestar finally caught his breath. "Both of you, come." He instructed, leading the way back to camp.
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Firestar instructed Yellowfang and Cinderpelt to go into Spottedleaf's Den as they entered camp. Sandstorm offered to share a vole she had just caught, and he padded off with her for the time being.
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Yellowfang whispered to Cinderpelt. "More like dogbreath's den! She's after our Fiery, too!" She meowed. Cinderpelt's ears and whiskers twitched in amusement, and she flopped to the ground, stalking into Spottedleaf's den, followed closely by Yellowfang. Neither of them spoke to her about their little joke.
Cinderpelt finally blurted something out, though. Yellowfang growled a warning, although she knew Spottedleaf had heard. "Stupid piece of fox-dung am I?!" She boomed. She leaned forward, growling a bit, but very dangerously.
"All cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the Highledge for a Clan meeting!" Firestar yowled as he jumped up the pebbles to the tip of the Highledge. Spottedleaf gave a quick snarl, then stomped out. She sat down neatly, all anger from her face fading as she saw Firestar, and curved her tail neatly around her paws.
The cats of ThunderClan gathered, a little slowly, though. When they had all settled down and started to murmur, he silenced them with a flick of his tail. "There is a Gathering, as you know." He addressed them with a mew of authority. "The cats going will be Graystripe, Yellowfang, Bluepelt, Brambleclaw, Poppypaw, Honeypaw, and Spiderleg." He meowed, jumped down from the Highledge. He had decided early, but the Clan didn't seem to mind.
He padded into his den merrily.
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wildshadow
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Amber eyes gleamed out of the darkness...
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Post by wildshadow on Dec 22, 2007 20:58:26 GMT -5
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! i love it!!!!!!
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Post by amberowlmoss on Dec 24, 2007 1:08:54 GMT -5
I wasn't allowed on the compy for the longest time! X__x
Thankies. =3
.::.Chapter Five, Gathering.::.
Firestar hesitated when his Clan spread out through the hollow. Only RiverClan was here for now, so he figured he could talk a bit before the Gathering started . . . Besides, Yellowfang, Cinderpelt, and Spottedleaf were starting to creep him out with their behavior, they were starting to act like stalkers or fangirls. He shivered, that was the last thing he wanted. He glanced around, spotting Silverstream. Graystripe hadn't found her yet, either.
He smiled at her, padding up. Ever sense she had bore Graystripe's kits, he had become a little more friendly with this she-cats. He wondered why? "Oh, Firestar." She meowed quickly but quietly, before he could even dip his head in a respectful greeting or mew a 'hi, Silverstream!' Before he could reply, she meowed again, "I need to talk to you . . . in private." Firestar paused, glancing around, then turned back to the silver cat and slowly nodded. She turned and stalked off towards some hidden brush easily and without fear, while Firestar thromped along more cautiously.
He sat down and curved his tail neatly around his two gingery colored front paws as he usually did when he sat up, smiled at Silverstream, then mewed, "What is it?" Half impatiently. She blinked a few times, obviously uneasy. Firestar blinked back, a little afraid of the awkward silence, but he liked it . . . a lot. Why? He shivered, blinking just as uneasily as the Riverclanner now. Silverstream opened her mouth a moment, but only a pause came, She shook her head, jaws closed now, then opened them again as sound flew from the tip of her pink little tounge. "Firestar, I love you." She whispered. "And those kits aren't Graystripe's, they're yours. I'm sorr-!" She became to whisper frantically, but Firestar hoarsely cut her off in a silent meow.
"What?! H-How i-is that even p-possible, S-Silvers-stream?" He stammered, puzzlement and bewilderment written everywhere on him in every way, his voice, eyes, tail, fur . . . He blinked, waiting for the half scared to death she-cat to reply. "I never loved Graystripe! I've my eye on you sense you were an apprentice, and I was, too! Silverpaw and Firepaw! I never had the courage to talk to you, though! A-And, eventually, I felt that stupid crush grow until I knew it was no longer a crush, I loved you, Firestar! Fireheart and Silverstream! I used Graystripe to get to you! A-and then I went a-a-and dragger you out of Thunderclan camp and raped you!" She meowed hoarsely, but still kept her volume on her voice down well, she was near tears now.
Firestar's mouth was just hanging there in the widest gap any cat might've ever seen. "You raped me?!" He meowed, shocked.
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Flamestream
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I'm Just Another Dead Soul
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Post by Flamestream on Jun 20, 2008 4:45:39 GMT -5
lol, i luv it!
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Post by courageheart on Jun 20, 2008 4:55:43 GMT -5
hahahahaha!!!!poor firestar!!!!!!!i'm not a fan of firestar, i'm more of a sucker for the baddies ya know(except hawkfrost...)? but i do feel for him!!!
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Post by raspberryfur on Jun 21, 2008 14:10:22 GMT -5
That was so FUNNY! PLEASE Continue!
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Tigerheart
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Hawky and Brambley RULE!
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Post by Tigerheart on Jul 8, 2008 15:27:21 GMT -5
OMG THIS IS SSOO GOOD! I DEMAND YOU! WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Redwood on Jul 12, 2008 11:08:21 GMT -5
This is Hilarious! Every she cat looooovveeesss Firestar, so which one will he choose??
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Post by icestar on Nov 14, 2008 20:59:54 GMT -5
 omg silverstream!!!!u raped him!?!?!?!?LOL
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Post by flamestar on Mar 13, 2010 14:14:10 GMT -5
What red wood said I think it would mabey be the same as the books but scince you put spottedleaf is still alive well who knows
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Post by Amberclaw on Dec 25, 2011 6:32:05 GMT -5
This is Hilarious! Every she cat looooovveeesss Firestar, so which one will he choose?? all i have to say to that is DUN DUN DUNNN!!! 
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Post by snowheart on Mar 21, 2012 17:22:29 GMT -5
OMG! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!! my reacttion was "Omg! OMG! LOL!" i started rofling this HAS to continue!!! ^^ <3
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