Post by Autumnstorm on Sept 15, 2007 9:27:16 GMT -5
Yay! You killed Brambleclaw! I never liked him!
PLEASE read and review! Thanks![br][br]Finished: Does He Really Love Me? (One-shots), Humor, one scene (Warriors humor)[br][br]In the works: The Silver Bird (New Prophecy rewrites), Across the Great River (Sagas)
I'm sorry rabbitclaw. =( I really don't like Brambleclaw, most likely because he just takes Squirrelflight for granted. =/ Sorry, but I can't make everyone happy when I write. Thanks for the complement though! =)
Squirrelflight felt a bright light shine through her eyelids and warm her pelt. Her eyes flickered open and she yawned, her maw parted widely. She felt a tail laying across her and looked to her left to see Ashfur lying beside her. "Ashfur?" she purred. He lifted his head and smiled at her, Hello Squirrelflight," he purred. "Would you accompany me to breakfast?" she asked, sweetly. "Of course," he smiled. Together, the two of them padded out of the warrior's den, and over to the freshkill pile.
UF....TO BE CONTINUED...
Last Edit: Nov 21, 2007 12:57:33 GMT -5 by rainmask
Post by ;R.o.c.k.y.w.a.v.e; on Dec 23, 2007 18:14:59 GMT -5
Brambleclaw seems WAY too perfect for me... PLEASE CONTINUE RAINMASK!
C Fanfics[br]Oneshots-[br]Greenleaf Morning[br]Solitary[br]Temptations[br]How to Save a Life[br]Willow Whispers[br]Non-Canon Clans-[br]Watching the Tide[br]UF Fanfics[br]Canon Clans-[br]Frozen Water-RiverClan[br]Shadows of the Forest-WindClan[br]Rewrites-[br]Talons of the Raven[br]C&P-[br]StarClans’ Prophecies-DENIED![br]No, I'm not emo... *scrambles to hide MCR CDs*
Post by Shadowstar on Jan 29, 2008 12:09:18 GMT -5
It was good And I love how you killed Brambleclaw and replaced him with Graystripe. Always liked Gray better...
Last Edit: Feb 8, 2008 17:59:21 GMT -5 by Shadowstar
[center]Sweat drips in my eyes,[br]Screams of lust we cry[br]Tonight, you are everything[br]You're everything, you're everything to me[br]No more as I wake, from this perfect dream[br]I'll escape, I cannot stay and live this lie,[br]For I, must now think only of myself[br]And to think that you will not be scared or surprised[br]I sever all these ties, this is end[br]This is the end![/center]