Leafpool sat by a small holly bush, wait for the dark gray tom she loved. A rustle in the bushes told Leafpool that he was there. "Crowfeather, I know you're there, come out." Crowfeather slowly came out. "What?" He asked bitterly. "I nearly got my ears clawed off by Ashfoot sneeking out of camp!"
"Sorry," Leapool said, then lowered her voice, "My kits are coming!"
"Really? With who?" Crowfeather asked, his eyes widening.
"You, you idiot! And it isn't a good thing eather!"
Crowfeather sighed. "I know. It's just that... well... Nightcloud dumped me, and... and went with Onestar instead! I thought I could trust her, Leafpool. But now... now you're my only hope."
Leafpool felt sorry for Crowfeather. "Well, You can have one of the kits if... if... if they don't all die."
"They won't!" Crowfeather shouted, then bent his head. "Now go, and tell me when the kits are born."
To Leafpool, it felt like she had been in there for ages, her sister's stare burning two holes in her pelt. But finaly, three bundles of fur, trwo brown, one a dark gray, were behind her, squealing and whining for milk.
"Hush, little ones." Leafpool sighed happily. "Come and have some milk." And pushed them gently over to her belly where they began to suckle.
Suddenly, they heard Firestar entering the Nursery. Leafpool didn't even want her father to know about her forbidden love.
"Squirrelflight," Leafpool hissed, 'Hide the kits!" Squirrelflight nodded and helped Leafpool put the kits in a small crack in the back rocks and cover it with moss.
"May I come in?" Firestar asked.
"Yes, father. You may." Squirrelflight said, nodding her head.
Firestar ducked his head and padded in. When he saw Leafpool in as well, he shot her a glance.
"And what might you be doing in here, Leafpool?" He asked.
"Just checking on the kits," Leafpool said casuly, shurging her shoulders.
Firestar nodded, then said, "Birchpaw was complaining of belly ach, could you help him?"
"Of course!" Leafpool said, then murmered to Squirrelflight, "Feed my kits, I'll be back later."
Squirrelflight nodded, then said to Firestar, "Perhaps Brambleclaw would like to go hunting with you, father, could you spare the time?"
Firestar gave her a sideways glance, then nodded. "Okay, I'll go ask him." And padded out of the Nursery.
Leafpool sighed as she made her way back to her den.
Oh, StarClan, She thought. I love Crowfeather, and my kits, but I have to heal my Clan too! Oh What have I done?
Post by wildshadow on Jan 28, 2008 17:53:42 GMT -5
I WANT MORE!!!!!
Gray x Silver LOVER[br]Feather x Crow LOVER[br][br]Wildshadow: Small Gold & Black she-cat, with amber eyes.[br][br]My Fic's:[br]Before the Stars- In progress[br][br]Xhikao- A whole new dimension[br] ...Perfection[br][br][br][br]
Post by Lightningstar on Apr 28, 2008 9:44:59 GMT -5
The chapters are a little short (but that's ok, I prefer my chapters long ^^), and time moves a little too quickly. Great story though!
Lightningstar: A sleek Abyssinian she-cat with a kink in her tail. She's a kit at heart, but she's also got a lot of common sense. You don't want to be around her when she's angry.[br][br]Yaoi pwns. Oh yes, it does. :P[br][br]I'm a huge Back to the Future geek. xD True that.[br][br]LionxHeather= <3
Post by Autumnleaf on May 11, 2008 14:33:06 GMT -5
Continue? PLEASE? With a vole on top?
Read Into the Wild: Crazy Edition, don't forget to reply...Please! Oh, and Jump off a Cliff. Sorry if I'm being overly-nice, I just don't like meanness. If I wrote Warriors, Heatherpaw and Lionpaw wouldn't split, and Silverstream wouldn't die... oh, and Spottedleaf would live. That would make things interesting, now wouldn't it?