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Post by hige on Oct 6, 2007 12:23:44 GMT -5
Rose looked down to earth. She saw the black night looming over the forst. She saw tall pines, their jagged, rough leaves rustling in the cold, night air. She saw WhiskerWind, a large tabby male in Riverclan, shift in his sleeping position in his nest in the warrior's den. The old starclanner sighed. Life was peacefull up in the stars, but she longed to be down there again, to tast the first glorying bite of rabbit, or fish;to play with the little kits in the sand along the river banks, to be with her beloves WhiskerWind again. That was the worst part. Bright appeared beside her. When a cat goes to starclan, they lose the last part of their name. Rose used to be called Rosethorn, a name which she preffered to Rose, so most cats called her that. ''You look troubled, RoseThorn.''Bright's breezy voice echoed. ''I wish i was down there.''rose said, hermongst the living.'' Bright tensed up. When he had first come to Starclan, he had felt that way too, untill he had met Rose. She was his addiction, his painkiller. ''Why?''he asked the pretty she-cat. ''We've-em,i mean you've, got everything you need up here! Why leave?'' Rosethorn shrugged. ''I don't know. It's just i feel such a feeling, a great amount of pain...Look.'' she pointed a paw down at where CrackleFire, a cunning little she-cat had snuggled up to WhiskerWind, who, having been separated from his mate for so long, had finally moved on from Rose. ''See?'' rose's anxious meow woke Bright from his thoughts. ''If i don't go down there, he'll ahve moved on-completely! He'll forget about me.'' Bright snorted. ''Who could ever forget about you? Besides, that she-cat's not a mark on you.'' Bright shuffled embarrasedly under Rose's suprised gaze. 'Well' she started. Bright hardly dared to believe, would she accept him? 'You'll help me get down there then?'' Bright tried, unsuccesfully, to hide his dissapointment. Yeah...one of the cats up here did it, once.''he said. ''Really?How!''Rose asked excitedly. Bright glared at her. ''How am i supposed to know?Go ask TwilightStar.'' he dissapeared, probably to skulk in his misery. 'Right.' muttered Rosethorn under her breath.'I'll do just that.''
TwilightStar was a tiny, deep blue cat, a tom, and he was the leader of Starclan. No-one knew how long he had been there, but some took a guess that he was born around the time of Sabre pride, the cats of the old ice. Rosethorn respectfully boed to the leader, and waited to be summoned. 'You do not have to bow to me, child,'' the old cat croaked. ''Now, what is it? Permission to select that Bright of yours as a mate?'' ''No, sir!''Rose said in suprise. ''Why would you think that?I've come to ask about l-leaving.' she couldn't keep the tremor out of her voice. 'Leaving?'the old cat echoed. 'But why?'' ''It's comlicated.'' '' I see. A tom?WhiskerWind?'' ''I -how did you know?'' The old cat smiled again. ''I know many things. Are you sure you want to leave?'' ''Yes.'' Rose nodded firmly. 'Well, a few things first. Number one, i can only let you go down for twelve hours, in which you must get someone to say'' i never want you to leave me''. Second, you will go there as a different cat, the same gender, yes, but completely different looks.'' ''Yes, i want to!''Rose said a little forcefully. ''Calm yourself, child. Don't you want to say good bye to anyone first?'' TwilightStar asked the young cat. ''No, it's best if i just leave quickly.'' ''Well, then, goodbye.'' Next thing she knew, Rose was standing in a clearing, her once white pelt turned to brown, and the breeze whirling around her saying ''Foxpelt is your name.... i miss you, rose...''Foxpelt, the old rose, turned to the sky and said '' i miss you too, Bright.''
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Post by hige on Oct 6, 2007 12:24:47 GMT -5
Whoops, i meant, in the first paragraph, ''I wish i was down there,''rose said,''amongst the living.''
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Post by hige on Oct 6, 2007 12:26:09 GMT -5
Will i write more?
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Post by .Swiftclaw. on Oct 6, 2007 12:27:17 GMT -5
Hey, this is good!! Just make sure you space it out a bit, it can get hard to read! ;D
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Post by .Swiftclaw. on Oct 6, 2007 12:33:52 GMT -5
And can you check out my fanfics: Completed - The Love That Never Was (One-shot) Impossible Decision (One-shot) Worthless (One-shot) In progress - The Darkness Rising (saga)
Thanx!!! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by hige on Oct 6, 2007 12:33:58 GMT -5
Kk, i will! Thanks!!!
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Post by hige on Oct 6, 2007 12:40:50 GMT -5
Check out my other story, city cats!it's in shorts!Here's more: Foxpelt padded out of the dense canopy of trees, shivering. It was a long time since she had felt a breeze, let alone a full-on gale. The river flowed, fast, furious and relentlessly in front of her. How had she done this before?It seemed impossible now. Slowly, she put paw after paw into the freezing waters. Suddenly, a log came hurtling down the river, sending torrents of rain and blocks of driftwood onto Foxpelt. She threw herself on to the opposite bank, and raced off, shaking the water from her back. Agh!Never do that again!!!Said her brain. But her heart said hey, i remember doing this!More later, i gotta go eat!
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Post by .Swiftclaw. on Oct 6, 2007 13:31:13 GMT -5
I like the plot of this story. It's so original! And I have read City Cats, I think it's fabby!!! ;D
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......boredom kills.....
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Post by ghostfeather on Oct 7, 2007 2:44:52 GMT -5
i really like the plot too! ;D continue!
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Post by hige on Oct 7, 2007 10:25:39 GMT -5
Yay!!!Alright then, A noise sounded on the hill above Foxpelt.She crouched down in the grass, breathing quietly through her nose. ''Who'se there?'' shouted a voice. It was whiskerwind!!!Foxpelt raced up to meet him. ''You!''she cried out in joy. ''Don't you remember me?'' ''Why would i?''asked whiskerwind, a confused look on his face. ''Em, well, it's me-''and then foxpelt remembered. She looked different. ''F-from the gathering, last moon?'' ''Oh yeah, weren't you the one who stood up to Smokestar?'' a look of respect dawned on foxpelt's old lover's face. 'Em, yeah, it was me. Can i come to your clan?''she asked him. ''Wh-a? You're from windclan!'' he stuttered. ''Yeah, but i wanted to move. Come on, pleease take me to see Jadestar?''she opened her eyes wide. ''Well, alright. But i can't do anything if you're chucked out.'' ''I understand.''she nodded. ''Let's go!'' ~*~ The two cats padded into the dark gorse camp of Riverclan. Queens looked out of the nursery with looks of astonishment, warriors called to Whiskerwind, kits stared at them. This cat smelt like no clan! Foxpelt could see CrackleFire staring daggers at her from the corner of her eye, but she didn't care. She lifted her head proudly, and smiled. ''WHAT are you doing?''whiskerwind whispered to her. ''Stop showing off!'' JadeStar, a light brown cat with gleaming emerald eyes, stood immpassivly in front of them. ''Who are you?''she asked, with suprising politness. ''I'm Foxpelt, Jadestar. I knew you're father, the late WolfStar well.''(wolfstar was so named because he had saved a wolf from a human trap, and the pack had thanked him by protecting his clan) Jadestar looked strangely at her. ''I didn't know he knew you. Why have you come here?'' ''Well, i'd like to join your clan.''Foxpelt asked her. ''You can stay for a moon,''Jadestar answered after an age. ''If all goes well, you will join us.'' ''Oh, thank you!''Foxpelt cried profusly. Whiskerwind looked proudly at her. ''I'll take her on patrol, see if she's any use,'' he grinned, and the two old friends chased each other up over the hill, and along the banks. JadeStar watched them disapear as she tried to think where she had seen foxpelt before. ~*~
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Post by hige on Oct 7, 2007 10:32:51 GMT -5
Soon enough, Foxpelt and Whiskerwind had slowed down to a walk, and stopped to sit by the river. ''What a beautiful night. Starclan is probably watching over us, right now.''Whiskerwind said. ''And my dead mate.'' Foxpelt looked up. ''Was she nice?'' ''Oh, she was the best. But i gotta move on. CrackleFire wants to be mates. And she's a pretty cat too...''he trailed off. ''I'm sure she's nothing like you're old mate.''Foxpelt said quickly. He shrugged. ''I just don't know anymore.I want to stay faithfull, but she's dead.''he was brutally harsh. ''I need a mate, too. ''the she-cat sighed. Whiskerwind looked at her. ''I really like you, Fox. I know, it's crazy, i've only known you for a few hours, but i like you. Alot.'' ''I like you too, whisker.''she smiled, and the two cats fell asleep on each other as the moon started to go down,a nd dawn approached, flying on red and gold wings.
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Post by spottedpelt on Oct 7, 2007 11:17:47 GMT -5
Aww! I love it!
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Post by Silverstorm on Oct 7, 2007 21:38:29 GMT -5
Awwwwwwwwwww! I love it!!! Keep going!! ^_^
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Post by .Swiftclaw. on Oct 8, 2007 11:40:13 GMT -5
I love this story!!! Keep writing!!! ;D
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Post by hige on Oct 9, 2007 14:01:14 GMT -5
Foxpelt woke with a drowsy hangover-like feeling. Colours(yes i no where u guys live (america) that they spell it color, but in ireland we spell it colour!  swam in front of her eyes; a sea of green, blue and yellow. She saw Whisker, sitting alone by the river bank. ''What's up, Whisker?'' Fox asked him. ''I-i promised her...crackletail...that we would be mates!''his voice shook. ''But we are-we like each other, so why can't we be mates?''she asked him, annoyed. ''Because i've only known you for a day!''Whiskerwind shouted. ''No you haven't!!!I'm rosethorn, you're mate!!!' she shouted, tears streaming down her perfect face. ''Is thsi some kind of sick joke?''thundered Whiskerwind. ''She died tragically!'' Fox rolled her eyes. ''Don't you believe me?'' ''of course i don't. What kind of fool do you take me for?'' spat the tom malisiously. He loped over the hill, back to riverclan camp. Slumping down, Fox, sheared her skin with her claws in bitter sadness and anger. ''I hate you, starclan!'' she screamed, and birds took off from their nesting places in the trees. ''I hate you, hate you, hate you...'she moaned silently, and cried herself to sleep.
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