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Post by Wildpaw on Oct 4, 2007 18:07:01 GMT -5
TITLE: Sunset Island
AUTHOR:Wildpaw
SUMMARY:Wildpaw is a young ShadowClan cat who longs for adventure and excitement.
WARNING:Some deaths
BETA:None
COVER:Maybe later
PROLOUGE:
The tom-cat ran through the dark forest, running away from the beast that chased him. He did not know what it was, only that it was not a normal dog and that it was after him. My last life should not be spent like this! He thought desperately as he headed for the river.
When he reached the river, the beast had already caught up to him. He jumped into the river in his desperation and to his relief the beast did not follow him. The river washed him up onto the opposite shore. From here he could get a better look at the monster. It looked like a giant cat but with slobber hanging from its jaws. Is it a dog? he thought to himself Or is it a cat? It looked like Sharptooth, the mountain lion that had haunted the Tribe of Rushing Water until the brave cat Feathertail had killed it with a rock from the ceiling. Unfortunately she had also died. He shook himself back to the present. The thing was strting to move away now, looking for some easier prey. Well done, he thought to himself. Meanwhile a small apprentice from RiverClan had been watching. Wow! he thought to himself, That's the leader of ShadowClan, Darkstar!
PLEASE rate and comment, it is my first fanfic,more coming soon!
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Post by Wildpaw on Oct 4, 2007 19:48:34 GMT -5
No one commentd for my prolouge so heres my next chapter! Anyone think this should be in the multi-chapters? Sorry, forgot these! Chapters:*shrugs* Pairings:WildxBright, TawnyxMeadow Disclaimer:Warriors belongs to Erin Hunter I do not own anything except for the plot and some of the names Chapter1 Realization Wildpaw walked over to the Elder's Den to see if they needed anything.This was her 2nd moon as an apprentice and she couldn't wait for her ceremony to be a warrior. She longed to go on dangerous and exciting missions with her friends. Her best friend was her brother, Stonepaw. Her other friends included Sorrelpaw, Tawnypaw, Meadowpaw,Brightpaw and Maplepaw. Her mentor, Gorsefire, said that she was almost ready to become a warrior and was a great fighter. Her friends were almost ready to become warriors too.Their kind and gentle leader, in spite of his name, was Darkstar. Darkstar had gone on countless adventures during his nine lives and the one he talked most about was when he was chased by a half dog half lion creature and in order to escape it he had to swim across the river into RiverClan territory. Fortunately, no RiverClan cat saw him. Or so he thought. Please comment, I won't write any more unless you do!  |
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Post by Rustclaw on Oct 4, 2007 23:49:33 GMT -5
nice story so far ;D
it probably should be in the multi-chapters,
but i don't think it will matter if you don't know how to move it
continue!
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Post by wolverinestarlight on Oct 5, 2007 5:48:39 GMT -5
oooohhh...suspense!!!! ;D
pleaze write more!
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Post by .Swiftclaw. on Oct 5, 2007 14:05:36 GMT -5
I like this, I also think it should be in Multi-Chapters. But is doesn't matter. It's great so far! Keep writing! ;D
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Post by Wildpaw on Oct 5, 2007 15:31:31 GMT -5
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Post by Wildpaw on Oct 5, 2007 23:41:23 GMT -5
Heres Chapter Two!!(the title to chap1 was supposed to be Wildpaw!! ;D)
CHAPTER 2
Splashpaw
"All cats of RiverClan join here beneath the ReedBed for a Clan Meeting!" The call of the RiverClan leader could be heard in the camp and around it. RiverClan gathered beneath the pile of reeds on which the leader,Ripplestar,was perched. "I am here to name 3 warriors today", announced Ripplestar. "Splashpaw,Wavepaw and Reedpaw will you please come forward." Splashpaw and his two sisters skidded to a halt beneath the ReedBed. "These apprentices have trained hard to learn the ways of the Warrior Code and I present them before my noble ancestors of StarClan and await their desicion for them to become warriors." After Ripplestar said this there was a pause,a nd a slight breeze whirled around the camp. "Wavepaw, you will now be known as Waveshore. Do you promise do defend our Clan even at the cost of your life? "I do" replied Wavepaw calmy. Ripplestar turned to Reedpaw. "Reedpaw, from now on you will be known as Reedtail. Do you promise to defend the Clan even at the cost of your life? "I do!!" shouted Reedpaw, getting a little over-excited. Ripplestar finally turned to Splashpaw. Splashpaw felt that he would burst in excitement. "Splashpaw, from now on you will be known as Splashwave. Do you promise to defend the Clan even at the cost of your life? "I do" I replied confidently as all eyes turned to me. "Then I now tell you,cats of RiverClan, that these three apprentices are now WARRIORS!" As he yowled the last word RiverClan started to chant: "Waveshore, Reedtail, Splashwave!!!. Splashwave felt overwhelmed with pride. All of his hard work and training had finally paid off! He was now a warrior, ready to defend his Clan no matter what it took! "Come on, I'll show you three your new den!" said the warrior Finchwing to the three newly named Warriors. The three warriors followed her into the Den. "WOW!" shouted Reedtail. Splashwave couldn't blame her for shouting out like that. The Warrior's Den was huge, with thick walls of reeds and some water flowers growing in amongst them. The roof was made of sticks and brambles with a few leaves on top which made the light which shone through appear green. The floor consisted of soft velvety leaves, and some of them were made into dens. Three unused dens sat in one corner of the den, next to Finchwing's and Bouldertail's. As Splashwave settled down amongst the leaves, he flashed back to the night of his apprentice ceremony. After the ceremony, he had wandered down to have a walk along the river, when suddenly a scary, slobbering creature had appeared on the other side of the river. Splashpaw had jumped into a clump of reeds to hide. When he peered out he could see a cat swimming to the RiverClan side, away from the creature. That was when Splashpaw had thought: Wow, that's the ShadowClan leader, Darkstar!! Darkstar had looked pretty pleased with himself since the creature hadn't followed him over. That was when Splashpaw had raced back to camp, and so far he hadn't told anyone about the incident except his best friend, the Medicine Cat apprentice, Gentlepaw.
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Post by Splashwave on Oct 7, 2007 2:50:36 GMT -5
Nice, though it should be in Multi-Chapter. But, like Swiftclaw said, it doesn't matter!
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Flowerclaw
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Lele! He's so cute! XP
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Post by Flowerclaw on Oct 7, 2007 16:00:07 GMT -5
Good fan fic! Continue please!
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Post by Wildpaw on Oct 12, 2007 2:50:38 GMT -5
Thanks!!!
CHAPTER 3
Wildpaw
Wildpaw had her mentor pinned on the ground, ready to strike the killing blow. She struck, and hit her mentors throat. With her claws sheathed. Gorsefire laughed. "I think it's almost time for you to become a warrior, young'un!" she said, and Wildpaw jumped with glee. "When, when oh WHEN?!!!!" shouted Wildpaw.
"Hmmmmmmmmmmm," said Gorsefire, drawing it out. "I think............................ in about............................. how about tomorrow?!!" said Gorsefire. "YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH YEAH!!!! PPPLLLEEEAAASSSSEEEE!!!! exclaimed Wildpaw.
"OK. Iv'e already sorted it out with your leader young'un. Your warrior ceremony will be held tomorrow evening. laughed Gorsefire. "Now you run along,young'un, and play with your apprentice buddies!"
"OK!" said Wildpaw, zooming away. She couldn't wait until tomorrow! She caught up with Stonepaw, and he told her that he was becoming a warrior too. "Oh that's great!!" exclaimed Wildpaw. "What do you think your name will be?"
"Hmmm, maybe Stonepelt, or even maybe..." He laughed. "Stoneheart!" "No!! Darkstar would never call a gentle cat like you Stoneheart!! You take after our Dad! Gentle grey tom!! replied Wildpaw.
"Oh, I'm not always gentle!!" laughed Stonepaw as he pounced on Wildpaw. "Two can play at that game!" laughed Wildpaw, throwing Stonepaw off. The playfight continued on, until Wildpaw had her brother pinned on the ground. "Ok, you win!" surrendered Stonepaw, giggling. Wildpaw let her brother up, and then looked at the sun. It was setting now, and it was time for Wildpaw and Stonepaw's bedtime. "Come on! We'd better go to sleep now so we can be fresh for our apprentice ceremony!" The two apprentices raced off, racing each other to see who could get into their nests first. "Goodnight Stonepaw!" said Wildpaw sleepily, while yawning. "Goodnight Wildpaw!" replied Stonepaw. Gorsefire's head appeared at the entrance. "All comfortable?" The apprentices nodded tiredly. "Well, G'night young'uns, you've got a busy day ahead of you!" With that the apprentices curled up and were quickly asleep, and snoring!
What do you think of Chapter three?
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Post by .Swiftclaw. on Oct 12, 2007 4:25:14 GMT -5
Love it! I can't wait to find out what their warrior names will be! ;D
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mistshimmer
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Gimme the Corn Nuts! Wahoo!
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Post by mistshimmer on Oct 12, 2007 14:55:02 GMT -5
Ooo....I love it! Keep going! Please!
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Post by Wildpaw on Oct 13, 2007 1:10:22 GMT -5
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Post by Shadowstar on Oct 14, 2007 0:12:49 GMT -5
Maybe it got rejected becuase it wasn't in multi chapters?
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Post by Wildpaw on Oct 17, 2007 18:58:57 GMT -5
Thanks!! How do I get it into the multi-chapters?! ;D ;D
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