The Starting Of RainClan

[wolverinestarlight]

WOW! Write more please!

[Flowerclaw]

Chapter 7

Canyonbelly pushed his way through the poppy patch, past the wild field of Twoleg foods called fruits, and past the old oak tree. He was so mad at Valleymeadow, and for what she had done, but in his head, he knew he had done something just as bad. He was going to see Porchwasp, his new mate.
She was a dazzling she-cat, but by the way she had explained, Valleymeadow's new mate was a lying cheater. Canyonbelly didn't believe it was so...
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Valleymeadow twitched her tail as she waited silently for Addersong. She looked at her kits beside her, and she felt guilty. Just because Canyonbelly had done something wrong, she shouldn't have taken it out on the kits. They were dead, and Valleymeadow would never worry about them again.

Then, Valleymeadow heard a noise in the bushes. There he is. Then, with a tremendous noise, he appeared out of the bushes. "Hey Valleymeadow. Listen." his voice seemed grim. "I don't like you anymore. There. I said it." he mumured the last part, but Valleymeadow caught it. "What? How could you do this Addersong?" she yowled. Then, with a loud sound, another cat came out of the bushes. Valleymeadow nearly went nuts. It was the most handsome cat in the word. Bloodfrost. "Because he loves you more!" Addersong said, then took off in the bushes.

[Tigerfur]

FANTASTIC chapter! This story is starting to get good, update again soon! ;D

[Flowerclaw]

Chapter 8


After Addersong making her look stupid, she took a moment to ponder why the handsome tom loved her, but she soon snapped back into real life. Valleymeadow swiped her paw over her head, then began to talk to Bloodfrost. "Hi Bloodfrost." she mewed shakily.
Bloodfrost purred and mewed, "Hi." Valleymeadow soon remembered there was a chance that Bloodfrost was a few moons younger than her, so she added,"How old are you?" she knew the moment it popped out of her mouth it sounded rather rude, but she wanted to know before she could go any farther with Bloodfrost.
"31 moons" he replied. That's what I thought. Valleymeadow said to herself. He's just a bit younger than me. So she desparatly in her head tried to think of a way to get Bloodfrost to like someone else. "Oh my." she replied. "I'm 35 moons." she added. Bloodfrost sighed. "Oh. Okay" he meowed, beginning to get up, then sniffed the air. "I smell kits." he mewed. Valleymeadow nodded. "It's my kits." she replied. Knowing the tom would want to know more, she dipped her head guiltily. "How old are they?" he asked.
Valleymeadow wanted to turn away and run from the question, knowing how she had killed them, but she turned back toward the kits and saw one breathing. She breathed a sigh of relief and prayed to StarClan that she was okay. "They're only five moons." Bloodfrost seemed to sqeal with delight, but he shut himself up quickly. "I have a son that's 7 moons old." he meowed.
Valleymeadow nodded, though it was hard to believe a cat older than herself had kits that were older than her own. But instead of catching herself asking another rude question, she meowed, "Really? Do you have him with you?" Maybe, she thought, just maybe if one of my kits likes his, he will leave me alone. The tom nodded. "Birchpaw, come here." he murmured, turning his head toward the bushes. "What is it?" mewed a voice from within the undergrowth.
Valleymeadow looked at the cat and instantly knew that the kit was Bloodfrost's. He had dark fur with brown eyes that seemed to blend in with his pelt. He had white marks on the very edges of his paws. It was like looking at a younger Bloodfrost. "This nice cat right here has some kits about your age. Go look at them." he meowed. "Of cource, if she doesn't mind." he added. Valleymeadow dragged one kit, the one that most resembled her, and placed it in front of the little apprentice.
"She's so cute." Bloodfrost mewed, and to Valleymeadow's delight, the son agreed. "That's a very smart kit,too." he observed. Then, turning toward his father, he mewed,"Can we move to her clan?"

[Tigerfur]

AWESOME chapter! ;D I think that was the wrong question for Birchpaw to ask, update again soon so we can find out! ;D

[Flowerclaw]

Chapter 9


Valleymeadow was rather taken aback by Birchpaw's question, not expecting one from a young apprentice on such a big request. Bloodfrost only shook his head. "I wish we could Birchpaw. But we belong here, in the clan we're in now. Would you really want to leave all of your friends behind?" he mewed. Birchpaw didn't answer. Valleymeadow could see in his eyes he was seriously trying to find a way.
"But what if the clans unite sometime?" he meowed. "Could we presuade..." "No we can't presuade the clan leader to join another clan. All he would say is, "Joining another clan is like a rogue trying to unite two families." It wouldn't work."
"Can we sneak out one night and leave here? I mean, all of us. That would work where we wouldn't get caught wouldn't it?" Birchpaw mewed, desparatly trying to find some way. "Why are you so intent on joining the other clan?" Bloodfrost mumbled. "I don't know. I just don't like living here." he licked his paw and drew it over his shoulder.
Bloodfrost rolled his eyes as if he knew that "just not wanting to live here anymore" wasn't the reason. Valleymeadow even knew that there wasn't any way that was the reason. Birchpaw continued to bathe himself. Valleymeadow glanced down at the small little kit. "Maybe we could sneak out of camp one night." Bloodfrost mewed, and Valleymeadow looked up at him in surprize. "Really?" she meowed.
Birchpaw looked at Bloodfrost and Valleymeadow hopefully. "Yes," Bloodfrost mumured, "We can leave if you can really tell us why you don't want to live here anymore." Birchpaw sighed as if Bloodfrost had told him that they weren't going. He shuffled his forepaw on the ground. "Okay fine. I'll say." he meowed. "The truth is...the leader's been clawing me."
Bloodfrost didn't seem to fall for it at first, but then he stopped and asked, "Is that why all the blood's been appearing on your pelt?" Valleymeadow let out a hiss of disgust. "Our leader doesn't like toms." he explained. Valleymeadow's hiss went to a deep roar in her throat. "Yes." Birchpaw mewed. "Then we most certainly are leaving. Right Bloodfrost?" Valleymeadow spoke up for the first time. "Of cource we are." Bloodfrost snapped.
"We should meet here tonight at moonrise." he added, and they both walked away to their clans.