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Post by ~*~*Dovefur*~*~ on Feb 25, 2008 20:23:54 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Chapter 12: Running[/glow] The brown tabby kept on running, faster, and faster. He didn't looked back; he wouldn't look back. Something strange was happening to him and he was going to find out what. What am I going to do? he thought. The Moon Falls! I could ask for an explanation!Oakstrength purred at his idea and raced off towards secret pond. Once there, the large tabby tom had reached the Moon Falls, he let out a gasp of exictment and awe. He had seen the Moon Falls before, only once during his apperenticeship. But nothing could prepare a cat for this. The Moon Falls was a small pond on the side of the Mountain PebbleClan and MountainClan shared. Water also poured from the side of the Mountain as well, a Waterfall. But here, the water sparkled with starlight and the grass was alive with the Clans' warrior ancestors. It was breath-taking. Oakstrentgh walked up to a patch of moss besides the pond and laid down. He dipped his tabby muzzle into the water and let the dreams wash over him like a tidal wave. |
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Post by Flamesong on Feb 27, 2008 22:22:55 GMT -5
:oNoooo! Why did it end? You have 2 write more dovey!!!!!
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Post by ~*~*Dovefur*~*~ on Feb 28, 2008 17:59:34 GMT -5
I'll finish when I feel like it, Fs! No go away! (just joking)
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Post by Shadowstar on Feb 28, 2008 18:48:27 GMT -5
XD I just realize our stories have really simalar names ^^ I promise I wasn't stealing, I just liked the name. 'cept mine is Rising Darkness  Lol I like your story |
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Post by ~*~*Dovefur*~*~ on Feb 28, 2008 20:38:05 GMT -5
Thanks~ And that is true.... Odd. And don't worry, I didn't steal your idea either. The name comes form something that will happen later.
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Post by ~*~*Dovefur*~*~ on Mar 1, 2008 16:40:53 GMT -5
[glow=purple,2,300]Chapter 13: Shadows[/glow] A large, tabby tom walked through a Dark Forest. "Pondpaw," he purred when he saw the resting shape of the MountainClan medicince cat apprentice. The blue-gray she-cat lifted her head. "What is it?" she mewed quietly, still half asleep. "Hello, Pondpaw. It's nice to finally see you again." "W-who's there...?" Pondpaw stammered. "Of course you don't remeber be, Pondpaw," the tabby mewed softly, his muzzle now at her ear. "It's me, Forestfire." A chill ran down Pondpaw's back. "B-but... you died... When I was a kit!" "Yes, my dear, I did," Forestfire purred, his voice like honey. TO BE CONTINUED!!!! |
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Post by Spottedheart3 on Mar 7, 2008 0:45:24 GMT -5
Remember me? Spotty? Yah, I LOVE YOUR STORY DOVEY! GIVE ME MORE!!! ;D YayXD
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Post by Flamesong on Mar 7, 2008 3:02:07 GMT -5
>:(grr. write more!!!!!! also, i love the cover but i think spotty needs to blur the edges around the cats a bit more...they look 2 fake. other than that it is AWESOME!!! ;D
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Post by ~*~*Dovefur*~*~ on Mar 17, 2008 20:20:33 GMT -5
Oy! I'll do that stufff..... later...
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Post by //holly.leaf\\ on Jul 15, 2008 10:50:11 GMT -5
OMG that's awesome!!!!!
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Lol I like your story
