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Post by Strangee midnight on Aug 11, 2007 22:09:27 GMT -5
Brambleclaw(mad like): BLUESTAR!!! Why did you intterupt my dream about ice cream?!?! Bluestar: Beacause this is urgent. Brambleclaw:... okee! Darkstirpe: Don`t listen to her, she`ll lead you to your death.(grumpy voice) come with me.*tugs on Brambleclaw`s scruff) Brambleclaw(digs his claws in the ground) Say "please". Darkstripe(grunting): Please... Brambleclaw:* licks Darkstripe between the ears* I knew you could be nice if you set your mind to it!*leash poffs up on him* I am all yours Darkstripe.
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Post by Strangee midnight on Aug 12, 2007 11:33:02 GMT -5
(Later) Darkstripe: we`re here. Brambleclaw: what is this pla- Tigerstar: Welcome Brambleclaw. Brambleclaw: Darkstripe:(bows head) Tigerstar: Brambleclaw, my son I have plans for you and your half brother, Hawkfrost. Brambleclaw: HAWKFROST`S MY BROTHER?!?! Tigerstar: yes Brambleclaw. And I wish for you to do what I did to Redtail. I want you to kill Graystripe. Kill EVERY deputie until you are made deputie. Brambleclaw: No way in Silverpelt would I do that!(stalks back to Bluestar) Now, what were you saying Bluesta- Bluestar:(Wacks Brambleclaw with a frying pan) YOU IDIOT!!! WHY IN SILVERPELT DID YOU GO WITH DARKSTRIPE???!!!! Brambleclaw: he said please.... Bluestar: I DON`T CARE IF HE SAID PLEASE!
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fernpaw
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Graystripe_x_Silverstream Fan
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Post by fernpaw on Aug 31, 2007 14:43:22 GMT -5
Ha! He said please...
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Post by Raincloud on Aug 31, 2007 18:16:29 GMT -5
Hehe . . . that was fuuuuny. It is kind of hard to read, but otherwise I'll give you a 10/10!
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Flowerclaw
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Lele! He's so cute! XP
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Post by Flowerclaw on Sept 12, 2007 18:21:16 GMT -5
Lol! I can't really picture the part where Brambleclaw lickes him between the ears without going 0_o...
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mistshimmer
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Gimme the Corn Nuts! Wahoo!
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Post by mistshimmer on Oct 13, 2007 21:04:19 GMT -5
Ha ha...keep going! I give you a 8/10, readability is a bit of an issue here but otherwise, it's great!
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Post by Strangee midnight on Oct 15, 2007 16:44:00 GMT -5
Brambleclaw:(sheltering his head) Okay! Okay! just DO NOT hit me again with that frying pan and I`ll stay! Bluestar:(to self) Why the gerbil did I choose him? Why not Squirrlpaw? But nooo I had to chose the big strong warrior Brambleclaw: What was that? Bluestar: Nothing, now, Brambleclaw-(cuts off as she notices a sly grin on Brambleclaws face) What is it?! Brambleclaw: I farted! Bluestar:
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Post by Splashwave on Oct 15, 2007 19:38:45 GMT -5
LOL! Continue, though the updates could be longer.
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Post by Strangee midnight on Oct 18, 2007 18:26:23 GMT -5
Bluestar:.... Okay,..... without further interuption, I give you the prophecy, Darkness, Air, Water and Sky will come together, and shake the forest to its poots. \Brambleclaw... I didn`t know the forest could have gas....... \Bluestar: ROOTS! I meant roots. Sorry about that! *Brambleclaw wakes up* Brambleclaw: That was a weird dream.... \Ashfur:*pops in his face* I hate you for stealing Squirrelpaw! \Brambleclaw:*hits his nose* Watch it!! your saying "I hate you" to the futre..furter.however the dang word`s spelled deputy of ThunderClan! \Ashfur: How the vole do you know?! \Brambleclaw:*Pulls out warriors field guide and points to Firestars deputys*Right there! Read it and weep! \Ashfur:*reads* Deputies, Whitestorm, Graystripe, and BRAMBLECLAW?! What in StarClan happens to Graystripe? \Brambleclaw: he gets caught by twolegs.\Ashfur:?!
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Post by birdwing on Nov 23, 2007 19:03:10 GMT -5
omg! i love it! you have to write more!!!!!! hahahahha! i love how he just happened to have a field guide with him. great work!! 10/10!!
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Post by Nightspots on Nov 23, 2007 20:16:19 GMT -5
Its still starngee midnight! I changed my name!*random rats and mice float around camp* rats\mice: We will we will rock you!/ Brambleclaw:o...k.... PARTY! *sings with them*/Tigerstar:*Bites brambles ears*/Brambleclaw you're dead./Tigerstar:Kill graystripe!/Brambleclaw:NO!*jumps around trying to get tiger off*/Firestar: BrAmBlEcLaW! WhUt ArE yA dOiN YO MAMMA?!/Brambleclaw:Daddy's on my head!*trows tiger off.* squirrelpaw:whats up bramble?/Bramble:*says nothin much, you in french*/Squirrel: Oh my god he speaks french!
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heatherstripe
Junior Member
Take my blood...... it's cold anyways.
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Post by heatherstripe on Nov 23, 2007 21:53:34 GMT -5
That's sooo funny i love it!
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