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Post by Autumnstorm too lazy to log in on Oct 3, 2007 20:57:31 GMT -5
I like it, it is really funny ;D, but it could really use less swearing. You don't need so many foul words...  |
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Post by Mudsoarer on Oct 3, 2007 21:35:33 GMT -5
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rabbitclaw
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Post by rabbitclaw on Oct 6, 2007 12:51:18 GMT -5
heeheeheeeheeeeha......must read more..... *snickers more and admires firepaw from a distance*(lol not really, but that is funny, you should get firepaw to die((hehe,imean color or what ever)) his fur black)
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rabbitclaw
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Post by rabbitclaw on Oct 6, 2007 12:53:13 GMT -5
heeheeheeeheeeeha......must read more.....hehehe......*snickers more and admires firepaw from a distance*(lol not really, but that is funny, you should get firepaw to die((hehe,i mean color or what ever)) his fur black) could use less swearing though.........
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Post by Ripplepelt on Oct 7, 2007 20:27:48 GMT -5
I loved it, please continue it!! You should probably post a note that there's swearing and some...stuff..(namely, porn and stuff, and that part about getting laid and everything), so people that are squirm-ish around that stuff would know to stay away...just a suggestion.
I'm fine with it however, as these boys in our school talk about it every day.....(disgusting), so I'm used to it.
Anyway, I absolutely loved it, it was awesome! Please continue!
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Post by Iceshadow on Oct 8, 2007 15:34:47 GMT -5
>.> yeah. it's good, but tone it down a bit
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Post by spottedpelt on Oct 9, 2007 9:49:34 GMT -5
I LOVE IT!!!
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Post by Burrowpaw on Oct 9, 2007 15:44:13 GMT -5
Ya know, maybe she would update it if you would quit talking about the swearing!
She even put a warning about it in the ratings part!
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Autumnstorm
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Post by Autumnstorm on Oct 11, 2007 16:08:54 GMT -5
Ok, don't get your fur fluffed up! I said I like it, and they did warn us, but even so, the swearing is overwhelming.
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Post by Shadowspots on Oct 11, 2007 18:06:44 GMT -5
;D The swearing is not that bad...I'm in the 6th grade and hear that kinda stuff at school like every day...not offensive to me...I really like that...freakin hilarious.......lol write more!!! PLEASE!!! Don't listen to them! Be naughty if you want!!!
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Post by .Swiftclaw. on Oct 12, 2007 4:33:52 GMT -5
Yeah, I agree with Shadowspots. As long as you put the warning, you can write what you want! If people can't be bothered reading the warning, then it's their own fault. They shouldn't be complaining.
Anyway, post again soon! ;D
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Post by Shadowspots on Oct 13, 2007 9:48:38 GMT -5
LOL I just realized that this fic reminds me of
a) "Teenagers" by My Chemical Romance
b) "I'm Not Okay (I promise)" by My Chemical Romance (the music video, not the song)
The song Teenagers is hilarious to me.
The music video for I'm not Okay is so freakin hilarious I laughed for like 20 minutes cause its so TRUE!
;)Shadowspots
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Post by .Swiftclaw. on Oct 13, 2007 10:08:39 GMT -5
What so funny about the song Teenagers anyway?  |
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Post by mistshimmer on Oct 13, 2007 21:29:15 GMT -5
MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE...Funnyfull! Maybe you should omit the swearing, though, so others that don't like cussing can read it...
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Post by Tawnyfire on Oct 13, 2007 22:02:55 GMT -5
OKAY! EVERYBODY WHO IS FRICKIN LISTEN TO THIS!
I, first of all, put the warning in the ratings/warning area.
2. Quit complaining, if you are over 13, which you are SUPPOSED to be to go on this site, quit complaining because you're acting like nobody has ever cursed.
3. Quit acting like every other word of every other sentence is cursing.
4. One of the reviewers was right, I have about 10 more chapters ready to go but if people would learn to shut up and quit complaining then I would post them!
If you want another place to go whine, go to fanfiction .net where you can read the rest of it.
Thank you.
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