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Post by loudpaw on Sept 25, 2007 15:38:19 GMT -5
Graystripe:No Silverstream dont die.....dont leave me! Silverstream:You know....I think Im gonna be okay. Graystripe:(dissapointed) Oh well....I had this who 'Nooooo' thing I was gonna do and uh..... Silverstream:Oh dear Im sorry. Graystripe:Can you at least pretend to be dead? Silverstream:Uh.....sure?(Lies over and pretends to be dead) Graystripe:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Silverstream opens her eyes) Silverstream:You happy now? Graystripe:Yes thank you. Silverstream:What are we gonna do? Graystripe:I know lets leave our Clans and live in the moorlands! Silverstream:Beloved, WindClan lives there. Graystripe:I know!We can tell them to kiss our asses! Silverstream:Beloved! The kits! Stormkit:Whats an ass? Featherkit:Can we have one to suck? Silverstream:Oh StarClan! Graystripe:Oops? Silverstream:The kits are to young to travel. Graystripe:I'll carry Stormkit and you can carry Featherkit. Silverstream:Okay....Beloved? Graystripe:Yes? Silverstream:Are you sure about this? Fireheart will hate us for it. Graystripe:.......Oh well Fireheart can (mocks Cartmens voice)Suck my balls! Silverstream:If you two were in that type of relationship, I would kill you! (Graystripe picks Stormkit up by the scruff, Silverstream does the same with Featherkit) And they lived happily ever after, as loners! (They trained Featherkit and Stormkit like their own apprentcies,a nd the 2 eventually became warriors)
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Post by loudpaw on Sept 25, 2007 15:40:13 GMT -5
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Pantherfoot aka Pantherwing
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Post by Pantherfoot aka Pantherwing on Sept 26, 2007 15:57:41 GMT -5
 well...that was..... I'm sorry, but that was- *covers mouth to prevent bad comment*
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Post by Splashwave on Oct 20, 2007 9:28:57 GMT -5
...you could've at least put a warning of swearwords.
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Post by ;R.o.c.k.y.w.a.v.e; on Oct 20, 2007 11:24:09 GMT -5
...I agree with Splashwave.
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Post by Lightningstar on Oct 22, 2007 22:16:23 GMT -5
Erm..... you could have used the regular format and made a warning about swear words.
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heatherstripe
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Take my blood...... it's cold anyways.
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Post by heatherstripe on Nov 24, 2007 0:45:45 GMT -5
yea because some people like to know when bad words are going to show up. :/
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Post by HelloHeart on Oct 28, 2010 1:38:56 GMT -5
It was fine apart from the swear words! I love the beginning part. And the way Silverstream keeps saying 'Beloved' 
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