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Post by Pantherfoot on Sept 26, 2007 16:24:26 GMT -5
Title: What REALLY happened to Redtail Chapters: Anywhere from 2-5 Author: Pantherfoot (a.k.a. Pantherwing) Pairing: None Rating: G Summary: Redtail's awfully lazy these days. What can ThunderClan do about it? Disclaimer: I don't own Warriors, nor Nintendo or any of it's products Beta: None. Cover: None. Why should it have one? It' not that long.
What REALLY happened to Redtail
Redtail: *sleeping on Sunngrocks* Tigerclaw: *playing Nintendo DS* Curse you Bowser! Oakheart: *on a different rock a ways off * Ha ha! Tigerclaw: Hey! Oakheart! What are you doing here? Oakheart: Kicking butt in Pokémon, that’s what! Redtail: ZZzzZZzzZZzzZZzzZZzz Tigerclaw: Redtail? That’s your cue! Redtail: ZZzzZZzzZZzzZZzzZZzz Tigerclaw: *sighs* fine. ThunderClan, Attack! *Ferocious battle commences, with Redtail still sleeping* Tigerclaw: Wait a second! Oakheart, I’ll play you at Mario Kart for Sunningrocks! *Battle stops* ThunderClan warriors: WHAT!?!? Mousefur: But you’re terrible at that game! Bramblekit beat you last week, remember? Tigerclaw: But I’ve been practicing! *pulls out DS* Oakheart: It’s on! *does the same* Tigerclaw & Oakheart: *both playing Mario Kart*
A few minutes later…
Oakheart: Yes! I won! Now Sunningrocks is RiverClan’s! ThunderClan: *flees* Tigerclaw: I’ll beat you next time, Oakheart! *drags a sleeping Redtail back to camp*
I’ll continue later, if I get enough good responses. Please be easy on me. It’s my first Fanfic...
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Airilae-Chan
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Time for a return! And a new name <3
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Post by Airilae-Chan on Oct 2, 2007 11:14:34 GMT -5
Its really good! Please carry on!
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Post by .Swiftclaw. on Oct 2, 2007 11:35:00 GMT -5
Yeah, continue, it's hilarous! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Pantherfoot on Oct 2, 2007 17:43:37 GMT -5
thanks guys! i'll continue tommorow. i'm not feelin' good today
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Post by Beautiful Disgrace on Oct 3, 2007 10:33:48 GMT -5
LOL thats funny!
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Post by Iceshadow on Oct 4, 2007 17:06:13 GMT -5
Chapter 2 *On the way back to camp…* Redtail: *wakes up* Hey Tigerclaw, what are you doing? Tigerclaw: Um… going back to camp after Oakheart viscously defeated us in a battle over Sunningrocks? Redtail: WHAT!? Curse him! *Runs into camp* Tigerclaw: (to self) how is it that whenever we get FIVE tail lengths near camp OR Bluestar, he ALWAYS wakes up? He must have a special sense or something… *In camp, a few moments later* Redtail: And so, Oakheart defeated us, but we will get Sunningrocks back! So swears Redtail, Deputy of ThunderClan! ThunderClan: *bursts into applause* Mousefur: *rolls eyes* Tigerclaw: *Facepal- er, Facepaw* Frostfur: My hero! *faints* Runningwind: Oh, not again! Could someone get Spottedleaf, please? *Heads to the fresh-kill pile* Spottedleaf: *drags Frostfur into the medicine den* Frostfur, you really shouldn’t faint, especially with kits… Firepaw: Hey, what’s up with Tigerclaw? Sandpaw: oh, he’s just upset cause Redtail’s actually really lazy when Bluestar’s not around, but she won’t believe him. Firepaw: Oh. That explains a lot, actually… *Later that night* Tigerclaw: *Typing on his laptop* Maybe THIS will help us stop Redtail from being lazy! *Presses the Enter button*
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Post by Meh on Oct 4, 2007 17:43:37 GMT -5
This is a God-awful fanfic.
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Post by Beautiful Disgrace on Oct 4, 2007 21:00:24 GMT -5
This is a God-awful fanfic. No its not its actully very entertaining! I like it but just becuase you don't doesn't mean you have to be so rude!
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Post by Iceshadow on Oct 5, 2007 15:42:53 GMT -5
Thanks a bunch for that
i kind of expected at least ONE bad opinion, I'm not that good at writing, but I'm working on it
>.> Give me a little bit of a break, please. I said this was my first Fanfic, if you payed attention
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Silverstar Racoonpelt
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Post by Silverstar Racoonpelt on Oct 7, 2007 4:40:08 GMT -5
Awesome job Iceshadow! 'Twas very intertaining! *goes back to read again*
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Post by Splashwave on Oct 7, 2007 10:25:17 GMT -5
LOL! Please continue, I wanna know what Tigerclaw was doing on his laptop- ALL LAPTOPS ARE MINE!!! XD
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Post by Iceshadow on Oct 7, 2007 12:14:18 GMT -5
=3 you'll see what he was doing.
He's gonna use that thing s'more in the next chapter. >.> Let's just say it has something to do with Tiger's ambition
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Post by .Swiftclaw. on Oct 7, 2007 12:20:21 GMT -5
Ooo, suspense!! Continue soon! ;D ;D
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Post by Rainshadow on Oct 19, 2007 23:32:31 GMT -5
best comedy fafic i've ever read! i like the idea of a cat playing on a DS at sunningrocks, lol! ;D
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Post by Iceshadow on Nov 2, 2007 16:27:10 GMT -5
<.< sorry i haven't updated in so long. i haven't had the chance to get on the computer *got grounded* i update whitin the week, however
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