Post by cresentleaf on Apr 4, 2008 10:32:03 GMT -5
What would happen is the she-cat know as cinderpelt was never injured that day on the thunderpath? What if silverstream never died? What if spottedleaf was reborn as a kit to live the live as a medcine cat again? These seam like a kits tale but now i recite to you what mistakes starclan made and took back. This is the story of hidden horror of telling cats they were meant to die , that the cats were never supposed to live. That they were never supposed to avoid the claw of destiny that they needed to face. This is the story i tell you now. In the time of bluestar right after cinderpaws accident , which she narrowly avoided.
Cinderpaw was wide-eyed with shock as she saw how a huge twoleg monster narrowly avoided her as she stood on the thunderpath like a bewildered kit.She looked over at tigerclaw whose gaze was as shocked as hers to see his murder plan unsuccessful. Tigerclaw quickly ran over the shadowclan border , to join the clan thunderclan was on the edge of war with.
"Cinderpaw! Cinderpaw! I cant believe that , tigerclaw tried to kill you and now he's run over the border" Meowed fireheart slicing threw her thoughts like a dirty claw.
"Glad to see your happy I'm alright."meowed cinderpaw bitterly.
"Well well kittypet don't be so hasty to be mean to this pretty kitty"meowed longtail as he came out of the bushes behind fireheart.
"Longtail"Meowed fireheart
"Kitty"Meowed longtail
"Longtail those are tough words for one so... I wont finish for your sake. But i don't need your help with my mentor and id prefer if you would just go follow your boss over the border"Meowed cinderpaw adding the right amount of slyness to her voice
"Your words hurt"Longtail slid his tail over the icy whole where his heart was supposed to be
"I mean they really hurt , I'm going to cry I'm tearing up right now"
Cinderpaw stomped away into the bushes without so much a sidelong glace at the two toms. Let them go to carrion place and rot with rats eating there skin off of there dead bodies , cinderpaw thought silently to starclan.
Cinderpaw made her way to camp where fireheart must of sped to get two before as he told the clan what he had attempted to do and who he had kill and now he had fled the border.Cinderpaw flew her gaze a few times as many cats watched her looking for some kind of injury on her to prove this account.Cinderpaw leaped onto the highrock and gazed level with these cats now.
"What fireheart says is true , tigerclaw has tried to kill me. The attack was meant for our leader. I may be an apprentice , and i may be a green one at that but my words speak clear and true. Look me in the eyes and say I'm lying. You know you cannot" Meowed cinderpaw with so much emotion her voice had begun to shake.
As cinderpaw finished a blinding light hit the camp , the light sweeping over the queens den. A small kit stumbled out , it had just obtained sight. But something was off , this kit had never been seen before. The kit was a white color with spots covering her. At seeing the kit a few cats gasped.
"Thats...Thats....Thats...Imposible..." One cat mewed
" Only spottedleaf was blessed with that pelt...Because for whatever reasons"Mewed another
"Thats spottedleaf!"Mewed the cats together in a hushed voice.
"Sorry i don't know any spottedleaf , but my name's Spottedkit. Nice to meet you" Mewed the strange kit.
Cinderpaw was wide-eyed with shock as she saw how a huge twoleg monster narrowly avoided her as she stood on the thunderpath like a bewildered kit.She looked over at tigerclaw whose gaze was as shocked as hers to see his murder plan unsuccessful. Tigerclaw quickly ran over the shadowclan border , to join the clan thunderclan was on the edge of war with.
"Cinderpaw! Cinderpaw! I cant believe that , tigerclaw tried to kill you and now he's run over the border" Meowed fireheart slicing threw her thoughts like a dirty claw.
"Glad to see your happy I'm alright."meowed cinderpaw bitterly.
"Well well kittypet don't be so hasty to be mean to this pretty kitty"meowed longtail as he came out of the bushes behind fireheart.
"Longtail"Meowed fireheart
"Kitty"Meowed longtail
"Longtail those are tough words for one so... I wont finish for your sake. But i don't need your help with my mentor and id prefer if you would just go follow your boss over the border"Meowed cinderpaw adding the right amount of slyness to her voice
"Your words hurt"Longtail slid his tail over the icy whole where his heart was supposed to be
"I mean they really hurt , I'm going to cry I'm tearing up right now"
Cinderpaw stomped away into the bushes without so much a sidelong glace at the two toms. Let them go to carrion place and rot with rats eating there skin off of there dead bodies , cinderpaw thought silently to starclan.
Cinderpaw made her way to camp where fireheart must of sped to get two before as he told the clan what he had attempted to do and who he had kill and now he had fled the border.Cinderpaw flew her gaze a few times as many cats watched her looking for some kind of injury on her to prove this account.Cinderpaw leaped onto the highrock and gazed level with these cats now.
"What fireheart says is true , tigerclaw has tried to kill me. The attack was meant for our leader. I may be an apprentice , and i may be a green one at that but my words speak clear and true. Look me in the eyes and say I'm lying. You know you cannot" Meowed cinderpaw with so much emotion her voice had begun to shake.
As cinderpaw finished a blinding light hit the camp , the light sweeping over the queens den. A small kit stumbled out , it had just obtained sight. But something was off , this kit had never been seen before. The kit was a white color with spots covering her. At seeing the kit a few cats gasped.
"Thats...Thats....Thats...Imposible..." One cat mewed
" Only spottedleaf was blessed with that pelt...Because for whatever reasons"Mewed another
"Thats spottedleaf!"Mewed the cats together in a hushed voice.
"Sorry i don't know any spottedleaf , but my name's Spottedkit. Nice to meet you" Mewed the strange kit.
