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Post by Wildstar on May 5, 2008 2:20:48 GMT -5
CHAPTER (what chapter is it?) Oh yeah, 4! Onyxfur, have you read the Final Warning yet? The apprentices hurried down to the shores of the lake. "They say if you drink from it, you will be restored to full strength and StarClan might tell you something!" breathed Dawnpaw. "Well, what are we waiting for" mewed Flyingpaw as she raced down to the waters edge. "WAIT!" shouted Dawnpaw and Flyingpaw skidded to a halt. "You have to prove that you are worthy of StarClan before you can drink from it!" "Oh, sorry. I suppose I just got carried away!" she said breathlessly, her eyes wide with shock. "How will we prove ourselves to StarClan?" asked Fangpaw quietly. 'I don't know..........Maybe......" Dawnpaw gasped as something large barreled into him. He slashed the lump with his sharp claws and noticed that the other apprentices were battling with some other cats. *Out of story. Have you noticed that every time Dawnpaw says maybe, something bad happens?  * He yowled as the other cat raked his side with his claws. he slashed the other cat's muzzle and flung the other cat off. The cat turned out to be a coward as it squealed and took off into the bushes. The other apprentices were winning too. He watched as the other cats ran away too. The apprentices grouped together, and congratulated each other, when a huge figure appeared out of the bushes. "Hello, young kits. You are trespassing, so you must DIE" DUN DUN DUN DUN!  |
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 5, 2008 16:44:05 GMT -5
Nope, I only read up to Schools Out- Forever. I'm going to Chapters tommarow though, and see if I can find it. 83
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Post by WILDpaw is a ChocoLate CaKE on May 10, 2008 0:57:08 GMT -5
Hi Ok Onyxfurr I will post tomorrow am busy tonight homework and stuff! ;D
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Post by ;R.o.c.k.y.w.a.v.e; on May 10, 2008 9:37:42 GMT -5
Hey Wildpaw! I've been on here since, I don't know, the Stone Age...anyway, I've also read Maximum Ride (ish Iggy. He's my favorite). There was a guest here named Ripplestream once who also read MR, but I haven't seen her for awhile. Oh well, she's still my e-pal!
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Post by WILDPAW is TOO LAZY to log in on May 10, 2008 22:47:35 GMT -5
Hi Rockywave Yeah I have read quite a lot of your stories they are really good!kHave you read the Stray Catz series by Pouncer (also known as Pouncetail Pount Pount-o-llama Pountman Etc..........) Its awesome! Yeah Iggy is my favorite have you read the Final warning?  ;D |
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Post by Wildstar on May 17, 2008 21:38:52 GMT -5
CHAPTER 5
The young apprentices cowered beneath the huge figure towering above them. It yowled and lunged towards them when a dark shape threw itself out of the bushes at the terrible cat. the apprentices ran back into the bushes and stood there trembling as the two cats fought. The smaller cat fought with the strength of TigerClan, but the massive cat was just too powerful. The bigger cat flung him off with tremendous force and the cat lay on the ground, unmoving.
"Ha! Now, where did those kits go?" sneered the big cat, scanning the bushes around him.
"Oh well, they probably just ran off into someone else's territory! Now where did those cowards I call my Tribe go?" The enormous cat strode off, his thick tail wagging behind him.
Sorry Gotta go! I know it's short will add more ltr!
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Post by Wildstar on May 19, 2008 1:31:56 GMT -5
CHAPTER 5 (cont)
The three kits, after making sure that the big cat had gone away, cautiously crept out of the bushes towards the smaller cat. Dawnpaw rushed up to him and nudged the unmoving heap. He then sniffed the cat's fur, and looked up in confusion. "He's not from a Clan, but he doesn't smell like a kittypet or a loner either!"
"I wonder where he's from then?" asked Flyingpaw with a puzzled frown.
Can cats frown?
Then the cat started to move. It slowly stood up and the kits saw that he was very tall, but not as wide as the other cat.
"Hello" mewed Dawnpaw nervously. " What is your name?"
" Hello, dear kits. My name is Yewstar. I used to be the leader of the YewTribe, but there was a rebellion and the few honest cats and I were driven out. I have no idea where the rest of them went. Now YewTribe is ruled by that despicable tyrant! Who are you?"
The kits told him there names, and what they were doing. "Was that huge cat the leader of YewTribe?" mewed Fangpaw.
"Yes, he was. His name is Blackyew, and he has been evil since he was born. He has a daughter called Yeweyes, who i just as evil as him. YewTribe used to stay in one place, and we never really fought with other cats because no-one really came onto our territory. Now they move around and fight with anyone they see."
"Wow" said Flyingpaw.
PLEASE COMMENT! POUNCETAIL? ONYXFUR? PINECLAW? ROCKYWAVE? HI everyone!
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 19, 2008 10:29:15 GMT -5
Sorry I havn't posted in a while! ^^; Nice chapter anyways, keep going~
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Post by Minty on May 19, 2008 15:29:02 GMT -5
I like it!
Where can I find Maximum Tide and Final Warning?
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Post by wildpaw hi again on May 21, 2008 1:51:53 GMT -5
Man now I know why people log in! the quick reply box! Anyway Pouncetail, it depends which country you are in. If you are in America, Barnes and Noble or any other leading bookstore. Maybe if you wait a few months in your local library. In England, Borders or any bookstore really........ In New Zealand, Paper Plus Whitcoulls, Borders (again) or Books and more. Sorry if that took a while to read! Ill post tomorrow! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D |
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Post by RAVENSTAR on May 22, 2008 20:21:15 GMT -5
HEY, this is great! keep the story active and intresting! its a good story line
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Post by Wildstar on May 23, 2008 0:44:43 GMT -5
Thanks Ravenstar! And Onyxfur and Pouncetail! ;)I will try to keep it interesting just tell me if it get's a bit boring! Here's the next chapter!! "So, young cats, what brings you here?" asked Yewstar as he walked beside them, limping slightly because of a wound in his paw. "Well..." began Flyingpaw " We were out waiting for our mentors, you see, we are called apprentices and we have teachers, or mentors, who teach us how to survive and fight. We waited for ages, but they never came. Then, all of a sudden, this big gang of cats attacked us. Somehow we escaped, and we rann back to camp. When we got there we found that it was deserted. And then we followed their scent here...... and.. then we lost it again. And here we are!" "Wow, it sounds like you three have started quite an adventure! What is the name of your Clan?" "Our Clan is called FireClan" replied Dawnpaw " Excuse me, Yewstar, but would you like to join us on our quest? I mean, if you have something else to do, that's fine, but......." Yewstar cut him off "No! I would love to help you! I don't have anywhere else to go, ever since that despicable Blackyew drove us out. But if I help you on your quest, will you help me on mine?" Sorry, I have logged in Forever because I am tired of logging in all the time!  |
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Post by Wildstar on May 23, 2008 1:28:47 GMT -5
Hi Pouncer where is the new poll icon?Yewstar rocks!!!!!!
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Post by Minty on May 23, 2008 9:16:25 GMT -5
Eww! I love cliffhangers!
I don't know where the "new poll" button went, it disappeared.
I'm sorry, I guess click "new poll" in Epics, I can't see how to put a poll on the story.
On mine, the button was in the top right.
Weird, oh well.
I think I like Fangpaw the most, update soon!
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Post by Wildstar on May 23, 2008 16:31:07 GMT -5
Yay! I have 4 karma! Thanks to anyone who exalted me!! Yes, Fangpaw is cool, I like Yewstar!! I'll update later!
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