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Post by Wildstar on Jul 25, 2008 3:31:02 GMT -5
Ok, I AM UPDATING!!!! Cos I won't be on for a while, there is a hurricane/tornado thing coming tomorrow and I dont think there will be Inter Connection......... Oh no! Im scared!
Flyingpaw gasped and started running around in frantic circles, yowling hysterically.
"Calm down, Flyingpaw! If we want to save Yewstar, we have to stay calm and think of a good plan." stated Fangpaw. Flyingpaw gradualy slowed, and Fangpaw rubbed his head against her affectionately.
"It's OK, Fly, it's OK. We'll get Yewstar back."
Dawnpaw rolled his eyes in disgust. Fly? Come on, surely he could think of a better nickname than that. While the others had been panicking, he had been searchin for a way down. He walked along the edge of the crevasse, taking care not to go to close to the gaping black hole. He gasped as the surface beneath him crumbled; even though he had strayed away from the crevasse. He sprang back in alarm, yowling. Fangpaw rushed over to him, leaving Flyingpaw lying, panting in the dust. Flyingpaw scowled at this despicable ignorance. Fangpaw's devotion should belong to her and her only. She growled softly, her claws digging sharply into the sandy ground, fuelled by contempt.
While Flyingpaw had been fuming, Fangpaw had discovered the den that Dawnpaw had so nearly fallen into. He saw with intrest that it seemed to descend down and join with the crevasse. He had never given a second thought to Flyingpaw.
"HEY! Dawnpaw, I think that you might have found the entrance to the crevasse!"
"Cool." said Dawnpaw calmly, though inside he was bubbling with excitemant. Over the days that they had travelled, he had became quite good friends with Yewstar. The thought of him rescuing him was postively unbelievable. He was jolted out of his thoughts when Fangpaw disappeared down the tunnel. He followed, and he heard Flyingpaw follow reluctantly, and for some reason he could sense that she was sulking. He shrugged it off though. I mean, how could he possibly understand Flyingpaw? He focused his thought on saving Yewstar. Fangpaw miaowed that he had found the end. Dawnpaw walked out and was stopped by Fangpw's tail. He could sense that something was wrong.
Fangpaw, while winding through the tunnel, had been thinking about Flyingpaw, the soft touch of her fur , the tickle of her whiskers. That was when he walked out of the tunnel, the sky far above him and the ground invisible beneath him. He had came out in the middle of the crevasse.
See ya, like, next week!
sighness
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Post by Wildstar on Jul 25, 2008 3:31:44 GMT -5
wOw, my longest chapter!
Bye1
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 7, 2008 9:51:52 GMT -5
Hey Wildpaw! Great story!! ;D Update soon!!!
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 8, 2008 0:31:28 GMT -5
OK! Thanx!
Fangpaw staggered forward dangerously close to the edge, when Flyingpaw and co. smashed into him. "Watch it!" he snapped loudly.
"What is it Fangppaw? Why have you stopped?" questioned Flyingpaw.
"Er....DUH! Look in front of you!"
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"How are we going to get down?" wimpered Fangpaw, looking around desperately.
While Flyingpaw had been ..................ing Dawnpaw had been feeling around the narrow ledge, looking for a path or even another cave. "Hey, guys, I think I've found something.
Fangpaw bounded over to him leaving Flyingpaw staring dazedly at the gaping hole below them. "What is it Dawnpaw?"
"I think there is a small ledge that leads down, but I'm not sure. Can you look for me?"
"Great DarkForest, you're right!" exclaimed Fangpaw.
Flyingpaw s----------l----------o----------w----------l----------y turned her head in their direction.
"you're expecting ME, to go down THERE!?!?!?!?!" she screamed. "How COULD you! You KNOW that I hate LARGE GAPING HOLES THAT LEAD DOWN INTO NOWHERE THAT I COULD QUITE POSSIBLY FALL INTO WHILE WALKING DOWN ON A NARROW LEDGE!"
Fangpaw and Dawnpaw, who had quite nearly been blown off by her shouting, gaped at her. Thaen Fnagpaw said in a small voice "Don't worry Fly! We'll will be right in front and behind you. You'll be perfectly safe."
That was when the ledge gave way and all three apprentices were hurtled into nothingness.
THE END.
Nah, just kidding! Tune in for more SOON!
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 13, 2008 13:20:41 GMT -5
Great job! ;D
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 14, 2008 0:07:26 GMT -5
Thanx! Man, everyone on this site disappeared again!
I am like, the lone survivor of Fanfic.net-itis!
;D
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 16, 2008 14:11:54 GMT -5
Hey, Wildpaw! Just to let you know I exalted you.  |
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 16, 2008 15:38:10 GMT -5
Oh, thanks! I think your stories are really good too! especially the Dark Journey!
(wink, wink!)
;D
*presses exalt button*
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 16, 2008 18:40:02 GMT -5
Thanks!!!! ;D
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 17, 2008 0:52:40 GMT -5
OK, I'll update tomorrow! |
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 22, 2008 17:03:30 GMT -5
I hope their okay!  |
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 23, 2008 16:42:41 GMT -5
Ok, updating! Who knows if they are OK, cos I certainly dont! ;D You know that me, you and Lunarfeather are the only cats on this site!
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 23, 2008 18:31:27 GMT -5
I've noticed that and it's weird! Where do you think the others have gone?  |
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 29, 2008 3:29:07 GMT -5
I have no idea......its weird! I am so bored so I'll just post another chapter! Tomorrow I have to go and speak in front of 1000,000,000 people and play the piano! ;D |
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 29, 2008 18:09:50 GMT -5
Woah! I would never be able to do that! Good luck though! ;D
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