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Post by Minty on May 10, 2008 10:05:27 GMT -5
Title: Stray Catz Book 3: Who To Trust Chapters: 25 Pairing: SootxCotton, Tin-TinxCallie, AbbyxAndy Rating: G Spoilers: none Summary: Soot has realized Flash has a follower in the village. There are lots of killings and catnappings. The cats are turning on each other and no one knows who to trust. Warning: LOTS of character death Disclaimer: Stray Catz belongs to me. Beta: me Cover: none I'm very mad at myself because I'm a very quick reader and a couple of days ago I got Outcast and read it in two hours! I mean I've counted it down since 70 days and I read it in 2 hours! Why! We, here's the tags, as I said I'll update Friday probably. Thanks to Dovewing, Isis, Wildpaw, and Onyxfur for reviewing Off To Dallas!
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 10, 2008 11:19:30 GMT -5
YES! It's out! Cant wait for Chap 1!!
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Post by Minty on May 11, 2008 13:52:26 GMT -5
Thanks Onyxfur and Autumnleaf. I might post chapter 1 today, we're really busy.
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Post by Dovewing on May 13, 2008 16:23:00 GMT -5
I'm happy, there's gonna be the next book in stray cats soon ;D CottonxSoot 4ever !
Oh, and you're not the only reader who finished it in less than a day, 5 hours strait of Outcast less if I didn't have to do dinner and 2 hours of homework
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Post by Wildpaw not logged inDUH on May 14, 2008 0:34:34 GMT -5
Hi Pouncey Can I be your BETA? If you don't want a BETA, thats OK, but its just a suggestion.... ;D
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Post by Minty on May 14, 2008 15:59:38 GMT -5
Thanks for waiting Dovewing. Yeah, I was going to make it last two or three days, but that never happened. Those books are way too addictive! Thanks for the offer Wildpaw, but I don't really want a beta. But feel free to tell me about any errors you see. Thanks! ;D Oh, and Dovewing, tell Ravenpaw I appreciate him waiting, this chapter's dedicated to him!
Chapter 1: The First Riddle "Wanna go hunting?" asked Tangerine. "Sure!" Soot replied merrily. It had been two months since he had found the sinister letter and so far nothing had happened. He and Tangerine had become good friends - she was smart and grown up for her age. They walked up to the pond and soon saw a mouse. Tangerine froze, stalked it, and swiftly killed it. Soot saw a piece of paper in the grass. He picked it up with his claw and read it. You better watch your back, and not slack! I'm coming soon, and I'll kill you before noon! He gasped and ran to Tangerine. "Let's go to the village like now!" she said after she had read it. They ran down the path at full speed. "Tin-Tin!" Soot cried. Tin-Tin read the note and shouted, "Caats!" They quickly gathered around. The village went silent once Tin-Tin had told them about the note. "Oh no!" Abby cried, shoving her muzzle into Andy's fur. "Well, all I can say is watch out and, as the note says, don't slack!" Tin-Tin said. "Cotton?" Soot said, walking over to her, "You OK?" "I'll get whoever's following my brother!" she vowed. Soot walked over to the kitten building. He stopped in his tracks as he heard Ted whisper, "I think Soot's the one!" "Yes, I agree," replied a muffled voice. Soot quickly slid away and went to Abby and Andy. "What did they mean?" he asked. "They could be the killers and you're the next victim!" Abby said. Seeing his surprised face,she added,"Or it could be a little game," Soot crept up to the kitten building and leaped in. There was Ted and several of his brothers and sisters playing with a mouse. Sighing, Soot walked away and started to gnaw on a rabbit he'd caught earlier. Later, he, Ben, Andy, and Abby went up to the pond. Suddenly a huge cat with a black thing over him jumped out. It had a visor over it's eyes so they couldn't see it's eye colors. "I told you I'd kill you before noon!" it growled.
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Post by Dovewing on May 14, 2008 16:35:44 GMT -5
Pount, I just figured I'd warn you that Ravenpaw is planning on entering your story and killing any cat or human fleeing that threatens Soot or Cotton. Or Tin-tin. Just thought I'd warn you.
Also, can you post the village cat's names again, cause there's to many cats and I forgot most of there names.
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Post by Minty on May 14, 2008 18:07:36 GMT -5
Thanks Dovewing and tell Ravenpaw he just drop me a review ^^ Here's the Allegiances: Leader: Tin-Tin Red and Orange Tabby Tom Vice-Leader: Callie Pretty Tortoiseshell Citizens {Adults} Simon Siamese Male Brownie Large Brown Tom Page Blue-Gray Female Flame Flame Point Siamese Tom Leif Gold, Yellow, and Orange Tom Bunk Red Tom Zed Orange and Black Tom Mary White Female Citizens {Kittens} Soot Gray Tom With Black Head Cotton Pretty Gray and White Patched Female Andy Rusty Red Male Abby Super Cute Abyssinian With Stunning Eyes James Lilac Tom Jack Lilac Tom Ben Yellow Tom Patch Patched Tom Ilid White Tom Kit White Female with Black Specks Tangerine Orange Female Egg Pretty White female Ted White and Black Tom Tom Black and Orange Tom
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 14, 2008 19:54:53 GMT -5
When did Mary come in? Just asking. Lol! The cat thats going to murder them is waering a visor!
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Post by Dovewing on May 15, 2008 16:22:36 GMT -5
Quote: Abby Super Cute Abyssinian With Stunning Eyes
[glow=red,2,300]Woot![/glow] Go Abby! She rocks!
So do Soot and Cotten, but everyone knows that....
By the way, I don't remember Egg or Ted or Tom were did they come from?
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 16, 2008 16:21:13 GMT -5
Oh, wait! Mary is the mother of Egg and Tangerine and Ted and Tom and those others??
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Post by Airilae-Chan on May 17, 2008 10:02:40 GMT -5
Yays~ GO POUNTMAN!! XD
Abby x Andy? ;_; I was all for Abby x Soot XD But Soot and Cotton were indeed meant to be. -Nods-
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Post by Minty on May 17, 2008 16:06:14 GMT -5
Sorry, I messed up. Pretend Soot's not there and choose your second favorite since everyone said Soot's their favorite. Again, sorry.
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Post by Minty on May 17, 2008 16:07:45 GMT -5
I chose Cotton, cause she rules.
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Post by Dovewing on May 17, 2008 16:30:30 GMT -5
I choose Cotten, too, But Abby is my third Faviorte. Thank's for the repliy on Fire and Sand, Pount! When are you going to post chaptr three?
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