Minty
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Post by Minty on May 17, 2008 16:45:31 GMT -5
Thanks Isis Onyxfur: i never thought about that, it is funny! And yes, Zed and Mary are the parents of Ted, Tangerine, Egg, Tom, Kit, and Ilid.
Chapter 2: The First Attack "Run!" screamed Soot. He saw Abby and Andy running side by side. But where was Ben? Suddenly, the disguised cat leaped on Soot and pinned him down. "Hi-Yah!" Soot cried, kicking his legs out. The cat flew away and Soot scrambled behind a bush. "Cotton!" he exclaimed as he saw her. "Where are the others?" she asked. "I don't know," Soot replied, his voice thick with worry. Just then, Abby and Andy joined them. "Are you guys OK?" Soot asked. "We're fine," Abby replied, "But, where on Earth is Ben?" "I wish I knew," Soot said sadly. "Oh, great," whimpered Abby. Soot saw she was shaking and she was barely holding back tears. Andy gently licked her face and whispered in her ear. "Soot!" Cotton cried. Soot swung his head and saw Ben's limp body lying a few feet away. The killer was nowhere to be seen. "No!" he gasped. They grabbed their yellow friend's body and dragged it to the village sadly. "Caats!" Tin-Tin shouted as soon as he saw it. The village had a short ceremony where they said nice things about Ben, then they buried him. "Who is it?" Soot wondered that night. "I just have no idea at all," Cotton replied. The next morning, Cotton woke up Soot and said, "I'm going to go find whoever's following my brother and kill him or her!" "Then I'm coming with," Soot said. "No, i want to do this by myself!" Cotton replied. "Are you sure?" he asked. "Yes," Cotton said. "Well, be careful," Soot said. "I will be," Cotton promised, touching noses with him. Then, she flicked her tail in farewell and began to walk away. "Bye!" Soot called. "Bye!" Cotton replied. Soot stared after her, wondering if he'd ever see her again.
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Airilae-Chan
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Time for a return! And a new name <3
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Post by Airilae-Chan on May 17, 2008 16:52:47 GMT -5
Well done Pountster! Ooh, Cotton's gone awaaaaay...that means Soot can have an affair with Abby! *Has a twisted mind*
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Post by Wildstar on May 17, 2008 21:29:42 GMT -5
SSSSOOOOOOO................................................ how did you put the poll on here again? Great story !!!!!!!!! Man, I was all for SootxAbby too!
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 18, 2008 14:47:51 GMT -5
Gotta admit, SootxAbby is just awsome. By the way, I voted Callie as my favourite character because I don't know!
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Minty
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Post by Minty on May 18, 2008 18:27:06 GMT -5
You guys are evil! No! I kinda like AbbyxSoot too. By the way, which three of these cats do you like the most for Book 8 in the series? Velcro: Black Tom Rebel: Black She-Cat Nutmeg: Brown She-Cat Alley: Black She-Cat Aussie: Teal Tom Arnie: Chocolate Tom Gremlin: Orange Tom Jet: Rusty Red Tom Flash: Yellow Tom Mouse: Brown Tom
I got them from a random generator.
Who voted for Flesh?
I'll post chapter 3 tomorrow, I'm too exhausted to even think right now.
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Post by Wildstar on May 19, 2008 1:34:08 GMT -5
SSSSOOOOO...... Ummmmm, so who's the Flesh fan? : I like VELCRO!!!
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 19, 2008 10:21:35 GMT -5
Flesh? Since when did Flesh have a fan? I like, Nutmeg, the way, the names awsome!~ I would like to know a more detailed discription of her though, and a personality.
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Dovewing
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Post by Dovewing on May 19, 2008 17:26:13 GMT -5
Hmm.... I like Velcro and Rebel.
Ravenclaw:WHAT!?! SOMEONE VOTED FOR FLESH!?! I'LL KILL THEM!!!! Dovewing:*Knocks Ravenclaw out with magic pencil*
Sorry about that, but I'm kinda angry at whoever chose Flesh, too.
Of topic, but I'm writing a new fan-fiction, for comedy, but I haven't figured out a name for it yet, so you won't be able to see it till I do! Sorry..... =^..^=
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 20, 2008 18:19:54 GMT -5
*looks at the list of names again* omg, the name Arnie pwns!~
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Post by wildpaw hi on May 21, 2008 1:43:52 GMT -5
I like Velcro and Jet. Grt names! Sorry if this makes evryone hate me but im just curious, why are we really angry at whoever voted for flesh??? I know he was evil and evil and (wht was the other one?) oh yeah! EEEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!! Hi everyone!
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 21, 2008 17:58:34 GMT -5
*Is waiting for next chapter* This is taking a long time.
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Minty
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Post by Minty on May 21, 2008 20:06:50 GMT -5
Yeah, I'm SOOOO sorry! I've been lazy! XD Ravenpaw: You can attack whoever voted Flesh, but please don't kill them, that's a bit overboard. So. . . . . I voted for Cotton, dovewing said she voted for Cotton, and Onyxfur says she voted for Callie. Did wildpaw and Isis vote? Maybe someone accidentally hit Flesh instead of Callie. I hope. Oh, and Wildpaw I didn't see your question before, sorry. Just click "New Poll" in the top right corner. Velcro, Nutmeg, and Rebem win. I did a random personality generator on them and here's their personalities: Velcro = Clumsy, Willy and has an Accent {sounds interesting!}, Nutmeg = Courageous, Steadfast and has a phobia, and Rebel = harming, Social, and is Superstitious.
Here's chapter 3:
Chapter 3: A Cruel Decision "Oh, it's all my fault!" Soot cried. "No it's not," said Tangerine, "She's fine" It was that night and Cotton still hadn't showed up. "I hope" he muttered. "Come on Soot," said Abby cheer up. "Cotton could be dead and I'm suppose to cheer up?" Soot spat and sulked away.
"Oww!" groaned Cotton. She had fallen in a deep hole and was stuck there. She let out a low moan. Suddenly, she saw a black head poke through the hole. Cotton held her breath, it was a black head. Was it Soot? Cotton realized it was the killer and her heart plummeted. "No! Get away!" she said. "Shut up, you ugly furball!" it growled. Cotton stepped back and screamed as he tied her up.
Soot couldn't sleep. He imagined Cotton's pretty face being clawed by the killer and sat straight up. He heard a soft cry. Soot knew no one else had heard it, but there was no time. He ran to a hole a ways away and jumped in. "I knew you'd come!" the cat growled. "Cotton!" he gasped as he saw her tied up. The killer leaped at him and Soot struggled, but he was no match. Soon, he tied up next to Cotton. "Soot!" Cotton cried, "I'm so sorry!" "I don't blame you," Soot assured her, pressing his muzzle to hers. "I've got an idea!" the killer said. "Please don't kill us!" Cotton blurted out. "No!" Soot said. "If you kill him, I'll let you live" smiled the cat, pointing at Cotton. "No!" Cotton shrieked. "Yes!" the cat replied cruely.
What would you do? Again, I'm so sorry I didn't update, forgive me.
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Dovewing
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Post by Dovewing on May 22, 2008 16:39:47 GMT -5
Pount, no offense, but I'm starting to think you hate the Stray catz. You always make them either attacked by Human Fleeings (Were did they all go? We haven't seen them in a while) evil cats or a natural disaster. Maybe you don't hate them, but The way you treat them sure gives them a hard time! But if you didn't give them a hard time, not as many peple would probilly read this. Um.....
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Minty
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Post by Minty on May 22, 2008 19:02:32 GMT -5
What can I say . . . . . . I'm evil! >XD Well, not really, but it would be boring if the story was just their day to day lives with nothing interesting happening. So, I like to spice up their lives! >XD
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Post by Wildstar on May 23, 2008 0:53:17 GMT -5
I still like VELCRO! It is an awesome name! WHO VOTED FOR FLESH???!!!!!! I didn't get to vote sorry! It was either Pineclaw or some random person!
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