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Post by hazeldream on May 21, 2008 18:04:03 GMT -5
Title: [glow=red,2,300]Unwanted Kits[/glow] Chapters: I don't know... Spoilers: Please have at least read up to The Sight Author: Me! (Hazeldream) Pairing: CrowXLeaf,BrambleXSquirrel,AshxSquirrel,[spoiler(A lot) Rating: PG13 Summary: A little suprise happens to Leafpool Warning: Ummm....read it or I will send Crowfeather after you Disclaimer: I don't own Warriors (I wish I did...) Beta: None Cover: None Her stomach aching, her fur felling drenched with sweat as she tossed and turned in her sleep. A terrible pain welled up in her stomach. Leafpool’s eyes flew open “Squirrelflight! Her kits!” she mumbled half awake. Leafpool stumbled into the nursery and barley saw Squirrelflight before she feel down. Right then and there Leafpool experienced the worst pain of her life. ~X~ Leafpool forced her self to open own eyes, and what she saw made her want to cry and scream for joy. Next to her were three tiny breathing scrap of fur. One was dark gray ,the other was black and the tiniest one was a dusty brown, like her. She slowly lick them, one by one . In till she came back down to reality, she couldn’t keep these kits! She was a medicine cat! What would her father think of this? What would happen to her once everyone found out that she had kits and she had them with a Windclan tom? Leafpool heard a ruffling sound, was this her father checking on Squirrelflight? She panicked. ~X~ Squirrelflight stepped in the nursery “I am surprised you didn’t wake all the cats from here to Starclan with you screaming!” Leafpool stood up and shuffled her paw and asked sheepishly “Will you raise my kits?” Squirrelflight replied “I would love to but I do have my own kits coming…” She trailed off looking at her own swollen belly “ and…Those kit don’t even look like me or Brambleclaw, what am I supposed to tell everyone?” Leafpool asked “Can you just watch them in till I tell Crowfeather what happed?” Squirrelflight grumbled ”You know I don’t approve of this?” Leafpool was already half way out of camp before Squirrelflight finished. ~X~ Leafpool was in Windclan territory before she wondered how she was going to get Crowfeather alone. She was deep in thought and then she bumped into a familiar dark grey shape. Crowfeather mumbled something about how this cat was blind before he saw who she was. He was amazed. Leafpool didn’t wait for him to say anything before she buried her head into his soft grey fur. “Crowfeather!” she cried “I had kits!”
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Post by Ravenstar on May 22, 2008 20:18:51 GMT -5
Hey, this is great! keep it going. I want to know about the kits!!!
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Post by hazeldream on May 23, 2008 15:01:13 GMT -5
Thanks Fans....more chapters coming this weekend!
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Post by hazeldream on May 23, 2008 15:17:28 GMT -5
Even though this was a terrible thing after hearing this Crowfeather smiled. “Kits…I have Kits…I am a father….” Leafpool continued to sob in his fur. “I want to see them…They would make great warriors! My kit’s are probably the cutest ever!” Leafpool looked up and spat “This isn’t good Mouse dung!” Crowfeather ignored her “I want a few of them to live in Windclan…” Leafpool cut him short “Are you even thinking about this?” Just then they saw a hunting patrol working there way towards them.
~X~ Leafpool made a run for it. She could see their own clans exiling them, and it was not a nice thought. She made a running-leap for the boarder making it over just in time because she hadn’t been there a heartbeat before the Windclan patrol trotted over. Surprisingly Owlwhisker, who Seem to be leading the patrol, dipped his head in greeting and went along his way.
~X~
Leafpool walked with her head up in the clouds, maybe just maybe her and Crowfeather could have a relationship ,even though they were in different clans and she was a medicine cat. Leafpool was yanked out of her thoughts with a blood curling scream.
~X~
She ran as fast as she could towards camp. She saw Squirrelflight crying “Leafpool! You..you weren’t here…and ..and” Squirrelflight was so upset that she couldn’t get out what she was trying to saying. Brambleclaw came up to Leafpool ,his tail dropping and the fire seemed to be gone from his eyes “Someone.... killed some of our kits..”
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Post by Dovewing on May 23, 2008 20:23:23 GMT -5
Wait- NOO!!! KITTY MURDERER!!!! (Who killed them, again?)
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Post by hazeldream on May 24, 2008 6:37:37 GMT -5
Wait till the next part to find out!
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Post by courageheart on Jun 6, 2008 6:44:26 GMT -5
good good......yes it could have turned out to be a good story.....if someone had finished it!!!
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Post by shadow on Jul 6, 2008 12:57:54 GMT -5
WHOA this is really good I want to know who the kit murderer is now!!!!!!! Love your story Hazeldream. Put up the next chapter soon!!!
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Post by lunafeather on Jul 9, 2008 19:58:57 GMT -5
Hi Hazeldream (nice name by the way) My name is Lunapaw, and i love yur story! i so support leafXcrow!! I'm a REALLY new member, and i waz wondering if you could please tell me ho to post stories?? *-* (I know i am a mousebrain for not knowing...And i am TOTALLY NOT a suckup) thankz
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Post by skyshadow on Jul 12, 2008 13:49:53 GMT -5
I agree with lunapaw, i have no idea how to post stuff either. Will you tell us please?
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Post by //holly.leaf\\ on Jul 15, 2008 12:00:31 GMT -5
Go to what section you want to post in, and click "new thread". Then you can post the story.
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Post by hazeldream on Oct 19, 2008 10:30:09 GMT -5
You click "new thread" and write what you want to post. Sorry that I disappered! I'm super sorry! I will make sure that the new chapter is on sometime today! Please keep checking back! Thanks for all the suport guys.
Hazeldream
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Post by hazeldream on Oct 19, 2008 16:32:43 GMT -5
Ashfur feet crumpled from underneath him. He couldn’t run anymore. Ashfur looked down at his blood soaked paws. Starclan forgive me. He prayed to his warrior ancestors. He curled his tail around his paw as if to hide them . With his eyes closed he could still heard the sequel of the kits as he drag the out of the nursery when Squirrelflight went to get her own herbs from Leafpool’s den. Now that he though about it where was Leafpool? Ashfur smiled an evil smile, he just discovered Leafpool dirty little secret.
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Leafpool’s heart dropped, she had asked Squirrelflight to watch her kits! If she hadn’t left this wouldn’t of happen! “But…..are…..they….how?” She asked choking back tears. A little mew made her heart give a little lurch. Brambleclaw tail move a little to show two tiny bundles, one black one and one light grey tabby. Now Leafpool understood why Squirrelflight was so upset none of her kits had made it. Leafpool’s heart fell again when she saw the tiny dust brown kit she had seen what seemed like moons ago hadn’t made it.
~X~ Ashfur feeling a little better now that he figured out where Leaf pool had been, looked between his paw to the last surviving kit (or what he thought to be the last) it was a golden tabby with amber eyes, like his father. This kit ,like his brothers and sisters, would pay the price for what their mother did to him years ago. Soon with Brambleclaw out of the picture Squirrelflight would come crawling back to him and they would rebuild a new life together.
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Crowfeather couldn’t be happier. He felt like he was walking in the clouds nothing right now could make him upset or angry I am a father Crowfeather kept saying to him self. He was even considering moving to Thunderclan to be with his kits! Crowfeather pranced into camp. This is the happiest day of my life
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Nightcloud saw Crowfeather walk into the camp. He look like he was under a trance, dazed. She got up from were she was laying and padded over to him. “Crowfeather?’ she asked. When he didn’t answer her eyes clouded with worry but only for a heartbeat. “Sweety?” she asked, when he didn’t answer to that she came right out with it “I’m having you kits” She meowed impatiently.
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Post by Icestorm1 not logged in on Oct 19, 2008 19:58:27 GMT -5
Ashfur is a kitty killer!!! Great job! ;D Do you think he's the murderer in Long Shadows?
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Post by hazeldream on Dec 5, 2008 19:19:27 GMT -5
Sorry for the wait Remember post what you think! This snapped Crowfeather out of his little world and back into reality. “WAH?!” Nightcloud blink back a hint of sadness but that quickly disappeared and what replaced it was anger “Don’t you love me or you unborn kit??!!” Crowfeather was taken back by surprise with this intense question but there was no easy answer. He look up to the sky hoping that all his answers would fall from the sky. ~X~ Ashfur took his might paw and extended his claws ready to be them down on this small kit. For some reason or another Ashfur could not bring himself to do it. This kit seemed to have a power surging through him that Ashfur did not understand. He took his smallest claw and gently pricked the tiny kit. This cat was a fighter, the little kit thrashed around in till he hit Ashfur’s paw. This would have normally made him laugh, but unfortunately He knew of the nasty deed that had to be done. ~X~ Crowfeather brought his gaze back to Nightcloud. “Well?” She asked. Crowfeather’s anger, furry and what ever else he was feeling made him explode, confessing everything from how he didn’t love her to about Leafpool. Once he realized what he had done , he braced himself for he reaction. ~X~ Leafpool would have share in Squirrelflight’s reaction but she was full of shock. “Who could have done this?” She finally squeaked out. Just then Firestar quickly padded out of his den to comfort the two sisters. “Now girls we have four patrols looking for the kits…we don’t know they were murder” He meowed seeming strangely clam. By now Squirrelflight was in hysteria. ~X~ Ashfur dragged himself into the camp entrance, looking bloody with mud caked though out his fur. He wheezed “I saw..” He pause to pretend to go though a fit of pain “a Windclan….kits..” Even before Ashfur pretended to collapsed, he had the attention of the whole camp. I have to make this look good He said to himself. All the cats looked to Firestar for a answer “I heard enough! We go to Windclan to see what going on!” Meows of agreement arose from the clan from all but one, Leafpool. ~X~ Crowfeather could tell just from Nightcloud’s expression that she was not happy. “Now Nightcloud, Sweetly I love you…” All of a sudden Nightcloud’s face went blank, even her whiskers stopped quivering. She seemed to be concentrating. “What?’ He whispered “Shhh!!” She hissed angrily At him. That’s when Crowfeather heard it too. Without even a second glace they went racing towards the noise, it was the noise of kit.
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