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Post by Blackfire......The Dark Flames on Jul 1, 2008 1:03:54 GMT -5
AUTHOR-Blackfire TITLE-The New Clan SPOILERS-Nil. This is a NON-CANON fic! PAIRINGS- Hmmmmm...... SUMMARY- Do you want to know? Then read it. BETA-Me. COVER- Comin' soon! AUTHORS NOTE- Can anyone guess who my real identity is? Please enjoy my story! PROLOGUE- Paws padded through the misty cave, echoing through the deep, dark cavern. Shadows flitted to and fro, threatening to overpower you with their terrible darkness. This was the reason why every cat was afraid to walk in these caves, to retrace the pawsteps of a thousand ancestors. But not this cat. He was not afraid. He was the mighty Tigerheart. The slow dripping of water sends shivers down a normal cat's spine, chilling them to the bone with the pure evilness that lurked in this cave. It seemed to engulf you , to suffocate you until you knew no more, struggling vainly being your last action. This was the haunting, chilling horror of the The Dark Caves. No cat ever went in, and no cat ever came out. Tigerheart prowled through the cave, his stride throwing off the dark suffocating power. He was not scared of this dreadful evilness. For he was evil himself. Tell me what you think.
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Post by Blackfire......The Dark Flames on Jul 1, 2008 1:04:45 GMT -5
I AM SORRY IT WAS SHORT.
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Post by Blackfire......The Dark Flames on Jul 4, 2008 15:47:09 GMT -5
Please comment or I'll go to Fanfiction.net
OK, That was an empty threat I don't much like Fanfiction.net and I love this site! XD
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Post by Redwood on Jul 12, 2008 11:48:40 GMT -5
It's all right......................... but there really is no "hook" in it and it sounds kind of boring and well old........................................
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Post by Wildstar on Jul 19, 2008 19:35:45 GMT -5
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Post by Wildstar on Apr 12, 2009 16:08:19 GMT -5
So...anyone else want to comment on Blackfires Story
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