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Post by Redwood on Jul 13, 2008 11:06:15 GMT -5
Title: Rogue Trouble
Chapters: I do not know.
Author: Redwood(me)
Pairing: I do not know!
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None, I made the clans up.
Summary: Rogues cause trouble for SavannaClan, LakeClan, ForestClan and MountainClan.
Warning: Some death
Disclaimer: I do not own warriors, Erin Hunter does.
Beta: No
Cover: No
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Post by Redwood on Jul 13, 2008 11:08:41 GMT -5
Here are the Clans, My names so no useing without permission.
SavannaClan
Leader Brownstar – big pure brown tom, with a scarred muzzle.
Deputy Springstep – lively ginger she-cat.
Medicine Cat Foxface – a reddish white she-cat.
Apprentice, Smallpaw
Warriors (toms and she-cats without kits)
Thornfur – golden tabby tom with a rigged pelt.
Apprentice, Grasspaw
Dewdrop – blue white she-cat with clear blue eyes.
Redwood – reddish brown she-cat with green eyes.
Shadowfox – huge black tom, with a long puffy tail.
Apprentice, Swiftpaw
Honeypool – golden yellow she-cat with amber eyes.
Leafpelt – tortoiseshell she-cat with a brown, yellow, and red dappled
coat.
Firestorm – a fiery ginger tom, his right eat is torn.
Apprentice, Yellowpaw
Stickclaw – a light brown tom with long thin claws.
Stonebed – a solid gray tom.
Ravenwing – a jet black tom with a white front paw.
Apprentice, Moonpaw
Brackenpatch – a mixed brown she-cat with darker brown patches.
Creamtail – creamy white she-cat.
Apprentices (more than six moons old, in training to become warriors)
Swiftpaw – black and brown tom.
Moonpaw – yellow she-cat with big eyes.
Grasspaw- a brown yellow tom with a long tail.
Yellowpaw – a white she cat with yellow paws.
Smallpaw – small white she cat with two orange spots, one on each
shoulder.
Queens (she-cats expecting or nursing kits)
Glasspad – pretty gray she-cat with smooth pads.
Frostwhisker – beautiful white she-cat with hazel eyes.
Sunflower – pretty she-cat with a soft golden white pelt.
Kits (cats younger then six moons, and being nursed by a queen)
Lilykit – a purple white she-cat. (Glasspad X Thornfur)
Hollykit – a black she-cat. (Glasspad X Thornfur)
Treekit – dark brown tom with white spots. (Frostwhisker X Brownstar)
Sunkit – yellow red she-cat. (Sunflower X Firestorm)
Branchkit – grey brown tom. (Sunflower X Firestorm)
Skykit – pure white she-cat with blue eyes. (Sunflower X Firestorm)
Elders (former warriors and queens, now retired)
Applespot – light grey tom, with red spot, virtually blind and death.
Pumpkinseed – ginger she-cat, the oldest she-cat in SavannaClan.
Reedtail – light red brown tom, he can no longer see.
oldest cat in SavannaClan.
Pumpkinseed – ginger she-cat, the oldest she-cat in SavannaClan.
Reedtail – light red brown tom, he can no longer see.
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Post by Redwood on Jul 13, 2008 11:09:42 GMT -5
LakeClan
Leader Wavestar – huge blue white tom, a scar runs across his belly.
Apprentice, Mousepaw
Deputy Treeshade – jet black tom with white ears.
Medicine cat Fishtail – beautiful silver she-cat with amber eyes.
Apprentice, NightHawk
Warriors (toms and she-cats without kits)
Smokefur – grey black she-cat.
Cloverfoot – creamy yellow she cat with distinctive white markings.
Marshwhisker – brown tabby tom with a scared muzzle.
Amberheart – pretty amber colored she-cat.
Apprentice, Weedpaw
Volepelt – small grey tom.
Rainpool – blue grey she-cat, with lop sided ears.
Apprentice, Flowerpaw
Berrytwig – bluish brown tom has a crooked tail.
Poppyseed – gray tabby she-cat with black flecks.
Cloudbelly – brown tom with a white underbelly.
Apprentice, Windpaw
Silverfeather – a silver tabby she-cat with darker gray stripes.
Bluerock – a bluish stone grey tom, his eyes are grey.
Crabclaw – light grey tom with very large and thick claws.
Apprentices (more than six moons old, in training to become warriors)
Weedpaw – a grey tabby tom with brown stripes.
Mousepaw – small grey she-cat with a thin tail.
NightHawk – jet black tom with back brown feet.
Windpaw – pale ginger she-cat.
Flowerpaw – pretty yellow and white she-cat with black flecks.
Queens (she-cats expecting or nursing kits)
Fernbush – pale gray she-cat with green eyes.
Gentlewave – pale gray tabby she-cat with bluish grey flecks.
Addertooth – pale brownish grey she-cat, has sharp teeth.
Kits (cats younger then six moons, and being nursed by a queen)
Oceankit – blue white tabby she-cat. (Fernbush X Marshwhisker)
Flamekit – ginger tom. (Fernbush X Marshwhisker)
Cliffkit – brown tom with darker brown stripes. (Fernbush X Marshwhisker)
Dawnkit – purplish grey she-cat. (Fernbush X Marshwhisker)
Dapplekit – grey she-cat with dappled greenish specks. (Gentlewave X Bluerock)
Snowkit – white tabby she-cat. (Gentlewave X Bluerock)
Elders (former warriors and queens, now retired)
Badgerfang – black and white striped tom with huge fangs.
Newflower – pale yellow she-cat. The oldest cat in LakeClan.
Bulbroot – grey tom with brown feet. The oldest tom in LakeClan.
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Post by Redwood on Jul 13, 2008 11:10:16 GMT -5
ForestClan
Leader PaleStar – pale tan she-cat, with a scar on her right front leg.
Deputy Thunderstorm – big bright yellow tom with darker yellow stripes.
Apprentice, Mintpaw
Medicine cat Dovefeather – beautiful white she-cat with soft fur.
Warriors (toms and she-cats without kits)
Pinebush – a light brown tom, he has very prickly fur.
Cherryheart – a light red tabby she-cat.
Apprentice, Barkpaw
Streampelt – pretty silver tabby she-cat with a smooth pelt.
Fishscale – bluish gray tom with very neat fur.
Apprentice, Shimmerpaw
Talloak – a very dark brown tabby tom.
Silvermoon – beautiful silver she-cat.
Apprentice, Owlpaw
Strawfur – big plain yellow tabby tom.
Apprentice, Whitepaw
Thymeleaf – pretty brown she-cat with green like flecks.
Blossomface – pinkish she-cat with a well rounded face.
Apprentice, Heatpaw
Eagleclaw – golden tabby tom with huge claws.
Mudstripe – brown tom with dark brown stripes.
Tawnyspot – tawny she-cat.
Apprentice, Nettlepaw
Apprentices (more than six moons old, in training to become warriors)
Barkpaw - tree brown tom with light brown eyes.
Shimmerpaw – a shimmery yellow she-cat.
Whitepaw – small white she-cat.
Nettlepaw – light brown tom with black eyes.
Heatpaw – small ginger tom with red eyes.
Owlpaw – brown tabby tom.
Mintpaw – small greenish tabby she-cat.
Queens (she-cats expecting or nursing kits)
Twinklewhisker – big black she-cat with shiny whiskers.
Shinetooth – tan she-cat with sparkly white teeth.
Kits (cats younger then six moons, and being nursed by a queen)
Opalkit – greenish she-cat with brown flecks. (Twinklewhisker X Talloak)
Splashkit – bluish tom with blue eyes. (Twinklewhisker X Talloak)
Nectarkit – golden she-cat with gold eyes. (Shinetooth X Pinebush)
Butterflykit – rainbow tabby she-cat. (Shinetooth X Pinebush)
Elders (former warriors and queens, now retired)
Shelltail – dull white once beautiful she-cat, oldest cat in ForestClan.
Bubblestream – white she-cat with bluish spots.
Spiralfang – dusty brown tom with a twisted tooth.
Cinderfoot – grey tom, the oldest tom in ForestClan.
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Post by Redwood on Jul 13, 2008 11:11:15 GMT -5
MountainClan
Leader Morningstar – a bright yellow orange she-cat with a scar on her belly.
Deputy Soundwave – white tom with red stripes.
Apprentice, Vinepaw
Medicine Cat Flowerseed – beautiful light purplish she-cat with black flecks.
Warriors (toms and she-cats without kits)
Mapletree – light red tabby she-cat.
Snowstorm – pure white tom.
Apprentice, Blackpaw
Hailfur – small brown she-cat with splashes of white.
Cloudcover – smoky grey tom.
Apprentice, Snakepaw
Falconfeather – gray tom with black hips and black flecks.
Redbush – fiery red she-cat.
Specklewing – large dusky brown tom with black specks all over.
Apprentice, Flarepaw
Duskjaw – brown tom with a black jaw.
Sparkpelt – white she-cat with yellow splashes.
Silvernight – pretty sliver she-cat with black specks.
Apprentice, Coalpaw
Riverclaw – big silver blue tom.
Goldfoot – white tom with a golden colored foot.
Apprentices (more than six moons old, in training to become warriors)
Blackpaw – white tom with a huge black spot on his back.
Vinepaw – black she-cat with brown stripes.
Flarepaw – ginger she-cat.
Coalpaw – smoky black tom.
Snakepaw – brown tabby tom.
Queens (she-cats expecting or nursing kits)
Watervent – blue white she-cat with black splashes.
Kits (cats younger then six moons, and being nursed by a queen)
Bambookit – ringed brown tom. (Watervent X Goldfoot)
Novakit – pale ginger she-cat. (Watervent X Goldfoot)
Yewkit – brown tom. (Watervent X Goldfoot)
Acornkit – acorn brown she-cat. (Watervent X Goldfoot)
Elders (former warriors and queens, now retired)
Garlicroot – lined white tom. The oldest cat in MountainClan.
Thinleaf – faded brown she-cat. Oldest she-cat in MountainClan.
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Post by Redwood on Jul 13, 2008 12:31:36 GMT -5
Chapter One: Stolen Prey
Moonpaw sniffed, she could smell mouse. In another moment her sharp eyes detected a small grey shape in-between the coarse brown and green grass that covered the territory. Instantly she dropped into a hunters crouch and began to stack forward. In the next heartbeat she leaped catching the mouse between her forepaws. With a single bite it was over and she held her mouse up triumphantly to her mentor, Ravenwing. He nodded his black head approvingly.
“Very good Moonpaw. I want you to continue hunting for the rest of the day over by that thin tree.” Ravenwing mewed as he waved his one white paw in the direction of a lone tree. “Remember,” he added, “I’ll be watching you.”
“Yes Ravenwing.” Moonpaw replied quickly, and she dashed of. She’d only been an apprentice of SavannaClan for around one moon now, and this was the freest rain he’d given her so far. She bounced along happily, almost forgetting to stop and scent for prey.
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It wasn’t long before she had caught a few mice and a vole. She quickly buried her prey and bounded of in a direction she had not hunted in yet. She opened her mouth to scent for prey, when a strange scent hit the roof of her mouth. Her eyes began to glow, with anger. She new, this scent. It was the scent of LakeClan, in her territory. She new, although they are in violation of the warrior code, she should not chase after them just yet. She turned around to go tell Ravenwing, when something caught her eye. It was a half-eaten mouse! Upon closer inspection it carried the scent of LakeClan. They had trespassed and stolen prey. Forcing her self to swallow her anger, she picked up the mouse and padded back to there meeting place. Ravenwing sat there waiting. He widened his eyes, surprised she was back so early. She dropped the mouse in front of him, spiting angrily. She didn’t have to say much, the scent carried the story. His eyes smoldered in anger, letting out his own angry hiss.
“Get the rest of the prey you caught and come.” He growled. “We are going to report this to Brownstar.” With that he trampled off in the direction of camp. Moonpaw ran to grab her prey and follow Ravenwing.
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The sun began to set by the time Ravenwing and Moonpaw entered camp. Everyone was peacefully lying about, sharing fresh-kill and sharing tongues. Over by the high mound, sat Brownstar eating fresh-kill with his deputy Springstep.
Ravenwing headed straight to Brownstar, dropped the half-eaten mouse and reported to him. Brownstar hissed angrily and jumped onto the high mound.
“Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join beneath the high mound for a clan meeting” Brownstar yowled. Immediately cats began to come out of there dens and eating places to hear what he had to say. “Cats of SavannaClan,” he began. “A day that we wish would not come has come. The peace is over, LakeClan have invaded and stolen prey.” He paused as outraged yowls started up from the cats below him. Honeypool, a golden she-cat spat angrily. Dewdrop, a blue white she-cat let her claws slide out and grip the ground. Brownstar waited for his clan to quiet down before continuing. “We as a clan will not stand for this; we will fight back and strike LakeClan before they can strike again."
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well what do you think? Please Coment!
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Post by Redwood on Jul 13, 2008 17:00:56 GMT -5
Ok here is the Second Chapter. What will SavannaClan do now?
Chapter 2: Fight
Smokefur, Cloudbelly, Windpaw, and Crabclaw walked together on their patrol along their boarder with SavannaClan. They were Lakeclan. So far it had been a great patrol, like always. Now that the clans where at peace there wasn’t much to fear.
“Now Windpaw,” Cloudbelly meowed. “What can you see and scent.” He prompted to his pale ginger apprentice.
After a couple heartbeats the apprentice answered. “I can see plenty even though were on the sunset patrol.” She started. “It looks all clear and smells all clear.” She finished quickly.
“Very good Windpaw.” He praised. “You’re very sharp for someone your age! I mean I’ve had a lot apprentices and none as sharp as YOU………” It went on and on.
Finally Windpaw cut him off. “Enough Cloudbelly, I’ve been an apprentice for moons and I’m very close to my warrior ceremony.” She paused then added, “So stop treating me like a dopey kit fresh out of the Nursery!” She growled softly.
“I see you’ve yet to learn respect Windpaw.” Crabclaw teased, even though he was glad she cut of Cloudbelly too. Windpaw reached up to cuff his ear, while Cloudbelly’s ears went down with embarrassment for not correcting his own apprentice.
Suddenly Smokefur, who had not spoke much at all stopped and opened her mouth to scent. “What is it, a rabbit?” Cloudbelly joked at her sudden stillness.
“SavannaClan” she said very quietly. “Invading our territory.” Smokefur’s voice was barley above a whisper.
The comment got everyone off guard. SavannaClan, invading? They had no reason to invade. There had been peace for moons, why ruin that?
Crabclaw growled, “SavannaClan, they would steal the fur off your backs if you weren’t looking” Windpaw growled in agreement.
No sooner then that growl escaped her throat, when a fresh patrol of SavannaClan warriors burst out of the bushes. They were surrounded, there were so many of them. Dewdrop, Leafpelt, Firestorm, Yellowpaw, Stickclaw, and Ravenwing were all there, growling and spiting hatred in every movement and sound. They were out numbered.
The clearing exploded into battle, there was no chance to escape. Crabclaw wrestled with Dewdrop. Smokefur battled with both Leafpelt and Firestorm. Before Cloudbelly was tackled he screeched to his apprentice. “Get Wavestar!” Soon he was toppled by Stickclaw, who ran his claws down Cloudbelly’s flank.
Windpaw attempted to run but she was caught by both Yellowpaw and Ravenwing. The Lakeclan patrol tried their best biting and scratching the enemy.
But it was hopeless. The SavannaClan patrol surged scratching and biting the LakeClan. The LakeClan warriors broke free bleeding freely seemingly everywhere. One cat did not get up and flee. It was Windpaw.
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Post by Redwood on Jul 13, 2008 17:01:25 GMT -5
Please Comment! should I go on? After all there are so many questions. Is LakeClan denying stealing prey? Is Windpaw dead?
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Post by Wildstar on Apr 12, 2009 20:45:17 GMT -5
This is a really awesome story I dont know why nobody has commented! I hope I am not too late! I really want to find out what happened! Please please PLEASE continue!
XD
Windpaw rox sox x3
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Post by dare.xx.awaken me... on Apr 22, 2009 18:22:39 GMT -5
You cant say "Nobody can use these names" When you have common ones like Firestorm and Cherryheart. Theres ones I've even used on there before seeing this.
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Post by Wildstar on Apr 24, 2009 16:00:42 GMT -5
What dare.xx.awaken me... said is actually right. I mean it gets hard thinking of Warrior name and everyone is going to have the same on as someone else.
But dare.xx I think she/he meant not to use the whole list and just copy all of the names...?
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