Post by Hollyfur on Jul 13, 2008 13:48:46 GMT -5
Title: The Rise of Ashstar
Chapters: 11-15
Author: Hollyflight
Pairing: Uh... the ones in Warriors
Rating: PG-13( I think, there are going to be a few deaths)
Warning: A few deaths
Disclaimer: I do not own Warriors, if I did, Spottedleaf would be alive, Cinderpelt would be a warrior and Ashfur would be dead.
Prolouge
The night was still and quiet, and a flame coloured cat slipped out of the sleeping camp. He padded out the entrance and went to the lake. Little did he know that he was being followed.
Then a hiss came out of the blackness."Tawnypelt! how dare you come on to our territory!"
The ginger cat spun around, unsheathing his claws. Then he felt a heavy weight land on his back.
" Your days are over, Firestar!"
Firestar rolled over, expecting to see a Shadowclan cat, but instead there was..." Ashfur!"
"That's right, kittypet!" Ashfur yowled. " Once a kittypet, always a kittypet!"
Firestar had not heard that phrase for seasons. Kicking Ashfur squarely in the face, he yowled " Call me kittypet one more time, and you will-"
But his words were drowned out by a loud yowling coming from his left.
"Firestar-"
But it was too late. Ashfur kicked him into a fox trap, so his neck was in the loop. He tightened the loop, and Firestar struggled, but the loop closed around his throat and everything went black.
Chapter One
Squrrielflight, Leafpool, and Brambleclaw watched in horror as Ashfur swiped his claws across Firestar's flank, and strode away.
"Don't worry," Brambleclaw meowed. "He's just losing a life, he'll be okay." His voice was shaking, and Squrrielflight wasn't sure if he really thought so.
"No... he's really dead" came a voice from her left.
"No- no he isn't, Leafpool!" Squrrielflight meowed.
"Let's just get him back to camp" Brambleclaw sighed.
*
Leafpool let Firestar down in her den. He isn't dead,she told herself over in her head. But she didnt belive it.
Hollypaw burst in. "Leafpool, I heard somthing about Firestar being dead and Ashfur killing him." she burst out. " Is he dead?"
Leafpool replied," I'm afraid so, Hollypaw."
Hollypaw let out a loud wail. "So will Brambleclaw become leader now?"
"Yes."
Hollypaw walked out, tail down. Just then, Brambleclaw came in.
"Has he woken up?"
"No."
Brambleclaw sighed."Let's bring him out to the clearing," he told her. "Then I have to tell the Clan." Then they picked up Firestar's body and padded out.
They set him down under the highledge, and Brambleclaw leaped on to the highrock and yowled," Let all cats old enough to catch thier own prey join here beneath the highledge for a Clan meeting!"
Brambleclaw sighed. All he had done to stop Hawkfrost killing Firestar had been half-wasted. Looking down again, he saw that some of the cats looked like a badger had trodden on then, especally the ones that had been closest to Firestar.
"I have sad news to tell you. Firestar has died! I will go and receive my nine lives tomorow." The thought of it seemed strange.
Chapters: 11-15
Author: Hollyflight
Pairing: Uh... the ones in Warriors
Rating: PG-13( I think, there are going to be a few deaths)
Warning: A few deaths
Disclaimer: I do not own Warriors, if I did, Spottedleaf would be alive, Cinderpelt would be a warrior and Ashfur would be dead.
Prolouge
The night was still and quiet, and a flame coloured cat slipped out of the sleeping camp. He padded out the entrance and went to the lake. Little did he know that he was being followed.
Then a hiss came out of the blackness."Tawnypelt! how dare you come on to our territory!"
The ginger cat spun around, unsheathing his claws. Then he felt a heavy weight land on his back.
" Your days are over, Firestar!"
Firestar rolled over, expecting to see a Shadowclan cat, but instead there was..." Ashfur!"
"That's right, kittypet!" Ashfur yowled. " Once a kittypet, always a kittypet!"
Firestar had not heard that phrase for seasons. Kicking Ashfur squarely in the face, he yowled " Call me kittypet one more time, and you will-"
But his words were drowned out by a loud yowling coming from his left.
"Firestar-"
But it was too late. Ashfur kicked him into a fox trap, so his neck was in the loop. He tightened the loop, and Firestar struggled, but the loop closed around his throat and everything went black.
Chapter One
Squrrielflight, Leafpool, and Brambleclaw watched in horror as Ashfur swiped his claws across Firestar's flank, and strode away.
"Don't worry," Brambleclaw meowed. "He's just losing a life, he'll be okay." His voice was shaking, and Squrrielflight wasn't sure if he really thought so.
"No... he's really dead" came a voice from her left.
"No- no he isn't, Leafpool!" Squrrielflight meowed.
"Let's just get him back to camp" Brambleclaw sighed.
*
Leafpool let Firestar down in her den. He isn't dead,she told herself over in her head. But she didnt belive it.
Hollypaw burst in. "Leafpool, I heard somthing about Firestar being dead and Ashfur killing him." she burst out. " Is he dead?"
Leafpool replied," I'm afraid so, Hollypaw."
Hollypaw let out a loud wail. "So will Brambleclaw become leader now?"
"Yes."
Hollypaw walked out, tail down. Just then, Brambleclaw came in.
"Has he woken up?"
"No."
Brambleclaw sighed."Let's bring him out to the clearing," he told her. "Then I have to tell the Clan." Then they picked up Firestar's body and padded out.
They set him down under the highledge, and Brambleclaw leaped on to the highrock and yowled," Let all cats old enough to catch thier own prey join here beneath the highledge for a Clan meeting!"
Brambleclaw sighed. All he had done to stop Hawkfrost killing Firestar had been half-wasted. Looking down again, he saw that some of the cats looked like a badger had trodden on then, especally the ones that had been closest to Firestar.
"I have sad news to tell you. Firestar has died! I will go and receive my nine lives tomorow." The thought of it seemed strange.