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Post by Icestorm on Nov 5, 2008 21:01:38 GMT -5
TITLE: Shadow of The Sky (Continuation of The Dark Journey and Red Fire And White Clouds.) CHAPTERS: 20+ AUTHOR: Me! XD PAIRINGS: RockxCherry, PatchxClover, TinyxFlame, BouncexPetal... WARNING: Er... SPOILERS: Read Firestar's Quest, The New Prophecy, The Power of Three book 1, The Dark Journey, Red Fire And White Clouds. DISCLAIMER: I do not own the warriors series or most of the characters. However, The Dark Journey, Red Fire and White Clouds, this story, and some characters (Flamefoot, Moonkit, etc.) are mine. BETA: Me COVER:SUMMARY: Rockstar and his clan have managed to defeat the dreaded BloodClan, but dark shadows still lurk in Rockstar's mind. He is still haunted by terrifying prophecies, and questions if he's doing the right thing. Some SkyClan cats bear mysterious fresh wounds even though the threat of danger is gone. A mysterious new prophecy unfolds as they get closer to their destination, and Rockstar is terrified by the ominous power it holds. As Cherrytail's kits come closer, and the mountains challenges haunt Rockstar and SkyClan, he realizes that the darkest of all shadows don't lurk outside the clan. Ohh, creepy... XD ALLEGIANCES SKYCLAN Leader: Rockstar Deputy: Cherrytail Medicine Cat: Songbreeze Warriors: Clovertail Patchfoot Flamefoot Silverstripe Tinywhisker Bouncefoot Sagepelt Mintfrost (Did I miss any? If so sorry!) Apprentices: Nightpaw Sunpaw Barkpaw Snowpaw Kits: Moonkit Lightningkit Icekit THUNDERCLAN Leader: Firestar Deputy: Brambleclaw Apprentice, Berrypaw Medicine Cat: Leafpool Apprentice, Jaypaw Warriors: Dustpelt Apprentice, Hazelpaw Sandstorm Apprentice, Honeypaw Squirrelflight Cloudtail Apprentice, Cinderpaw Brackenfur Apprentice, Hollypaw Sorreltail Thornclaw Apprentice, Poppypaw Brightheart Ashfur Apprentice, Lionpaw Spiderleg Apprentice, Mousepaw Whitewing Birchfall (Mousepaw's and Hazelpaw's mentors are unknown at this time because my cousin has my book! XD) Queens: Ferncloud Kits, Foxkit and Icekit Daisy Elders: Mousefur Longtail SHADOWCLAN (As of Eclipse, because my cousin has my The Sight book! XD) Leader: Blackstar Deputy: Russetfur Medicine Cat: Littlecloud Warriors: Oakfur Rowanclaw Smokefoot Apprentice, Owlpaw Ivytail Toadfoot Crowfrost Apprentice, Olivepaw Kinkfur Ratscar Apprentice, Shrewpaw Snaketail Apprentice, Scorchpaw Whitewater Apprentice, Redpaw Queens: Tawnypelt Kits, Flamekit, Tigerkit, and Dawnkit Snowbird Elders: Cedarheart Tallpoppy WINDCLAN (As of Eclipse, because my cousin has my The Sight book! XD) Leader: Onestar Deputy: Ashfoot Medicine Cat: Barkface Apprentice, Kestrelpaw Warriors: Tornear Crowfeather Apprentice, Heatherpaw Owlwhisker Whitetail Apprentice, Breezepaw Nightcloud Weaselfur Harespring Leaftail Dewspots Willowclaw Antpelt Emberfoot Apprentice, Sunpaw Queens: Gorsetail Kits, Thistlekit, Sedgekit, and Swallowkit Elders: Morningflower Webfoot RIVERCLAN (As of Eclipse, because my cousin has my The Sight book! XD) Leader: Leopardstar Deputy: Mistyfoot Medicine Cat: Mothwing Apprentice, Willowpaw Warriors: Blackclaw Voletooth Apprentice, Minnowpaw Reedwhisker Mosspelt Apprentice, Pebblepaw Beechfur Rippletail Dawnflower Dapplenose Pouncetail Mintfur Apprentice, Nettlepaw Otterheart Pinefur Apprentice, Robinpaw Rainstorm (Yes, it is a coinceidence, rainstorm2 XD) Duskfur Apprentice, Copperpaw Queens: Graymist Kits, Sneezekit and Mallowkit Icewing: Kits, Grasskit, Beetlekit, Pricklekit, and Petalkit Elders: Heavystep Swallowtail Stonestream Alright, keep watch for the prolouge! ;D
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Post by Icestorm on Nov 6, 2008 19:51:27 GMT -5
Hello? Is anyone out there? Lol, here's the prolouge! PROLOUGE Mist whilred in front of a baige and black tom cat. He tasted the air for any scents, but all he could taste was the dew covered leaves that swirled in front of his face. The wind blew, making the cat shiver. He shook his ruffled pelt and, following an instinct that he couldn't understand, padded deeper into the darkness. Suddenly he picked up the scent of cats. The scent smelled of the coldest ice and the hottest flame. He jumped back, startled. Then he relaxed as he realized who the cats were and where he was. The baige cat dipped his head as a blurry shape emerged from the darkness. It padded foward slowly, leaving a trail of stars behind it. The shape pressed its nose into the baige cat's fur, as if they had met before. The shining cat stepped back, and the baige cat raised his head. "Greetings, Songbreeze," the cat purred to him. "Greetings, Echosong," the baige cat purred back. Echosong stepped back, her eyes suddenly serious. "Do you have a message for me?" Songbreeze asked. "Yes," she replied. She touched her nose to Songbreeze's forehead and suddenly they were surrounded by snowy peaks. Ice covered the ground, making it shine. Blistering wind blasted in Songbreeze's face. "Echosong, why are we here?" She looked into his eyes, and suddenly the snow and ice turned red. He gasped in horror. It was blood. "Echosong, what's happening?" he yowled in fear. She blinked, and her eyes darkened. "The darkest shadow will cover the mountains with blood before the sky's sun shines again." She dissolved as a gust of wind blew over the mountain. "Wait!" Songbreeze yowled. "What do you mean?" There was no response. Songbreeze looked up and let out a choked cry. Blood was oozing out between the rocks of the mountain. The sky darkened, and the sun vanished. The world was left in darkness as the blood rained down on him. "Help!" Songbreeze cried. But no response came to him. "Echosong, Starclan, anyone!" he begged. Still no answer came to his plea. The pool of blood swirled around him until it was up to his neck. "No!" he yowled, before the waves swallowed him. Songbreeze woke with a start, gasping for breath. He relaxed as he looked around and saw his sleeping clanmates. But then the prophecy whispered in his ears, and the scent of blood hit the roof of his mouth. " The darkest shadow will cover the mountains with blood before the sky's sun shines again." he looked around at is beloved clanmates. What horror still layes in our path? EEKKK! XD
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Post by rainstorm2 on Nov 8, 2008 16:01:10 GMT -5
HI!!!im here im in boston and i finally got on the computer.i didnt have time. GRRRRRRRR! this computer wont let me have smilies :(its a tragety!!! I love the mountain picture and the story!!!!
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Post by Icestorm on Nov 8, 2008 17:42:50 GMT -5
Finally someone commented! ;D Glad you like it! (Your prediction came true about Cloudmoon)
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Post by Wildstar on Nov 9, 2008 1:24:37 GMT -5
I like it! ;D
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Post by Icestorm on Nov 9, 2008 14:33:44 GMT -5
Yay! ;D I'll put chapter 1 on soon! ;D
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Post by rainstorm2 on Nov 10, 2008 17:37:45 GMT -5
Dustpelt is Hazelpaw's mentor ;D Spiderleg is Mousepaw's mentor loving it so far, keep writing
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Post by Icestorm on Nov 11, 2008 21:59:40 GMT -5
Hey, guess what you guys? I'm really excited because I'm doing an animated series of Firestar's Quest!!! Wildpaw I know you can't go on Youtube, so do you want me to put it here when it's done? (Which will be a while XD) ^^ I'm already into the pics of all the characters! ;D ;D ;D YYYYYYYAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!! He he i'm hyper....*Runs around the house 5,000 times* XD XD XD XD XD ...Still hyper! *Jumps up and down 10,000 times* ...Still hyper!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Laughs uncontrollably. Hehehehehehehehehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol, my episode's over! XD x 100,000,000 ;D
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Post by rainstorm2 on Nov 12, 2008 19:37:32 GMT -5
i cant belive u wrote that u were hyper! i know u and thats pretty hyper even for YOU .did u update the cat list thing?? PLEASE im begging u update. ;D ;D ;D oh and just for last minute--HIII!! ;D
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Post by Icestorm on Nov 13, 2008 16:22:13 GMT -5
Yes I have! Lol I was excited sooooo yeah I went CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lol! I have writer's block right now but I PROMICE I will update ASAP!!!
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Post by Icestorm on Nov 14, 2008 18:48:09 GMT -5
Alright! Its over! YAY!!!! Lol, my episode earlier was really funny! XD Here it is... Chapter1!!!! ;D CHAPTER 1 Rockstar opened his eyes, the bright moon illuminating onto him. Eyes sticky with with sleep and dried blood, he drew his paw over his face a couple of times to clean it. He sighed as he saw so many of his warriors bore terrible wounds. They had done well defeating the BloodClan cats, but everyone was still badly wounded. Rockstar wondered how long it would be before the blood stained marks would vanish. Rockstar winced as he put weight on his fore paw. Glancing at his shoulder, he saw a long, deep scratch trailing from his ear to his stomach. It would have been deadly if Cloudmoon hadn't saved him. Again and again in his sleep he was haunted by the scene of her death. Rockstar preparing to meet StarClan, only to be saved by a flash of fur, Cloudmoon biting and ripping Fire's throat out, only to be slashed in return. The most dreadful scene was Rockstar at her deathbed, knowing that he had died to save him and the whole clan. He let out another murmer of grief. Rockstar, still heavy with exhaustion, struggled to his paws and limped to where Cloudmoon's kits were curled up in the curve of Clovertail's belly. Two were still, asleep, but one kit, Icekit, thrashed in her sleep, mewing in fear. Rockstar licked her tiny flank until her sad mews of grief stopped and she curled up more tightly. She shivered, but not from cold, but fear. Rockstar knew she was awake. "Icekit," he murmered gently. The kit looked up at him, her brilliant blue eyes locking with his, and for a heartbeat, he thought the kit was Cloudmoon. "Icekit, what's wrong?" he whispered, settling down next to the silvery kit. The kits eyes streathed wide with saddness, and for a heartbeat, the terrible grief in her eyes made Rockstar choke up with sympathy. Icekit was bound to miss her mother. She was particularly close to Cloudmoon. "I miss mother," she cried quietly. Rockstar soothed her by covering her face with licks until the cries died away. "I know," He whispered. "but she is safe in StarClan now." Her eyes widened in curiosity. "I've heard you and the other cats talk about it, but mother never explained what it was." Rockstar blinked at her, and sighed. "StarClan is the clan of our ansestors," he mewed, pointing up with his tail. "They watch over us and guide our pawsteps, and when we die, we join them." The kits eyes sparkled. "Is mother there now?" she asked. "Yes. And I'm sure she watching over you right now," Rockstar purred reassuringly. Icekit looked up to the stars and sighed. Rockstar turned away, but before he moved too far, he heard Icekit start to speak. "Mother, wherever you are, remember I will always remember you," she whispered. Chocked with emotion, Rockstar padded away. He looked back once more, and for a second, she looked like a StarClan cat. Then he gasped. A blurry white shape had appeared next to the kit. It bent down and licked Icekit's forehead. At once Rockstar realized that it was Cloudmoon, the kit's mother. Wrapped in mist, Cloudmoon touched her nose affectionately to the kit's head. Icekit took no notice, and he realized that only he can see the beautiful shining shape. Cloudmoon licked her head, and touched her nose to Icekit's head again, and vanished. Shivering with awe, he sat down and stood guard for the rest of the night. Odviously, this chaper was about the clan's grief for Cloudmoon. So sad... Poor Icekit... Remember to comment! ;D Wow it's long! ;D
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Post by Icestorm on Nov 17, 2008 20:19:45 GMT -5
Helloooooooooo? Lol, here's chapter 2. CHAPTER 2 A moan of pain sounded from behind Rockstar. He turned around and saw his beloved mate, Cherrytail, padding slowly towards him. A long scratch ran down her shoulder, but to Rockstar's relief, it didn't look deep. In spite of her injuries, her eyes were bright and energetic. A purred welled in his throat as he touched noses with Cherrytail. "Shouldn't you be sleeping?" she murmered gently. Rockstar shook his head. "I-I couldn't sleep," he stammered, and looked down at his blood-stained paws. He looked up again to see that his mate was staring at him with understnding and saddness. "This is about Cloudmoon, isn't it?" Rockstar nodded slowly. "I feel as if it was my fault she died," he admitted. Cherrytail's eyes glowed with love. "She died to save you and the clan. That was the choise she made," Cherrytail told him. She paused, and suddenly a blast of excitement burst off of her pelt. Rockstar looked up, surprised. She looked down in embarrasement, then she looked up again, her amber eyes blazing with excitement. "Songbreeze has confirmed that I'm having kits," she mewed. Rockstar then realized that she looked a little plumper, and her scent had changed. "That's great!" Rockstar exclaimed. They both purred. Suddenly he felt another's precence behind him. He turned around to see one of his closest friends, Songbreeze, standing behind them witha a bundle of herbs in his jaws. "Sorry for interrupting," he apologized. "but I have something for Cherrytail." He dropped the herbs at her paws. "It's borage. It will help your milk supply for when your kits come. There should be at least three," he guessed. Cherrytail's eyes brightened, and she ate the herbs without complaint. "I think I'm going to call a clan meeting," he meowed. "We need to decide what to do next." They both nodded, and followed him to a boulder. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here for a clan meeting," Rockstar yowled. The cats of SkyClan gathered around him, their eyes bright and confident. "Cats of SkyClan," he mewed. "We need to decide where to go next." No cat spoke. Rockstar continued. "I have decided that the fastest way to get to the clans' homes is to go over the mountains," he meowed. A protest came from the back of the crowd. "What about the kits?" called Clovertail. "I think they are strong enough to travel," Rockstar commented. "They are almost old enough to be apprentices." Clovertail nodded, and sat down. "Any more questions?" he asked. No cat spoke, just nodded in approval. "Great," he mewed. "Lets go."
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Post by rainstorm2 on Nov 17, 2008 21:59:24 GMT -5
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Post by Wildstar on Nov 18, 2008 1:38:40 GMT -5
YAY AWESOME! CAN YOU PLEASE PUT IT ON HERE, ICESTORM? I WANT TO SEE THE VIDEO!
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