Post by Wildstar on May 23, 2009 2:12:06 GMT -5
TITLE: The Dark Prophecy (formerly The Prophecy Of Darkness)
AUTHOR: Wildstar <-- Me ;D
WARNINGS: Don't read if you hate death blood or violence ;D
RATING: PGR
PAIRINGS: I'll give you a few... FangXFlying ... DawnXBlack
SUMMARY: Three young apprentices face a dangerous quest when they find their Clan is missing and they are faced by a perilous threat...
BETA: Me
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Warriors (ASHFUR WOULD NEVER HAVE DIED!!!!!!!) but I do own this story
COVER: Maybe...
Author's Note: Ok, this is the promised remake of The Prophecy Of Darkness, so don't read that one, read this one! Thanks.
PROLOGUE:
A loud splash from the river pierced the tranquil darkness, breaking the silence like glass. Blackstripe jerked her head up, her ears pricked to seek the source of the sound. Almost straight away she heard a distant mew for help. She jumped to her feet and raced towards the WildWaters as fast as her paws could carry her. She heard the mew again, this time closer than before. Instantly she increased her pace, rushing through ferns and brambles damp with dew. She emerged from the undergrowth onto a small beach, the moonlight reflecting off the sand making the beach seem to glow. She skidded to a halt at the waters edge. Frantically she looked around, desperately seeking the cat who had cried for help. As her gaze travelled towards the centre of the fast flowing river, she spotted a pale yellow head struggling through the current. She launched herself into the moonlit river and began swimming strongly towards the drowning cat, her eyes fixed on the head thrashing above the water. She lunged for it and fastened her teeth in the scruff of the neck. Dragging the cat towards the bank, she realised with horror she might not be able to reach the bank with the extra weight of the cat. No! she thought. I mustn’t think like that. Filled with fresh determination, she thrust herself and the cat towards the beach. Fortunately StarClan must have been watching over them and the currents of the river washed them up onto the bank out of danger. Blackstripe staggered to her paws and spat out water. Shaking her fur to get rid of the water dripping from her fur, she bent over the sandy coloured cat. Immediately he started coughing up water and soon after he blinked open his eyes. Slowly he rose to his paws and Blackstripe was shocked to see how tall he was. She gave a little gasp and shrank back. He smiled at her and gazed at her. Blackstripe timidly reached up and sniffed his fur.
“What Clan are you from?” she meowed suspiciously.
She felt her eyes being dragged towards his bright green eyes. She gave a little start when she realised that he wasn’t looking at her; he was looking through her.
“You’re blind.” she murmured quietly.
“Yes I am blind.” he replied, his smile fading. “And I must thank you for saving me. I would never have escaped the river by myself.” He dipped his head in gratitude.
Blackstripe scuffed the ground with her paws, looking embarrassed. “Oh it was nothing really. I would have done it for any cat. But where are you from? You don’t smell like any Clans from around here.
The pale yellow cat sighed and hung his head.
“My name is Dawnfire, and I come from the legendary FireClan. But it’s my fault, its all my fault…”
He broke off as his voice cracked and he stared unseeingly at the ground.
“What’s your fault?” Blackstripe prompted gently.
“I…I…I was out hunting one day…and when I came back…my mentor was dead, murdered by cats from our enemy Clan, IceClan…and my Clan had disappeared.”
Hope you enjoy! It is a lot different to the old one. Hopefully better ;D
AUTHOR: Wildstar <-- Me ;D
WARNINGS: Don't read if you hate death blood or violence ;D
RATING: PGR
PAIRINGS: I'll give you a few... FangXFlying ... DawnXBlack
SUMMARY: Three young apprentices face a dangerous quest when they find their Clan is missing and they are faced by a perilous threat...
BETA: Me
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Warriors (ASHFUR WOULD NEVER HAVE DIED!!!!!!!) but I do own this story
COVER: Maybe...
Author's Note: Ok, this is the promised remake of The Prophecy Of Darkness, so don't read that one, read this one! Thanks.
PROLOGUE:
A loud splash from the river pierced the tranquil darkness, breaking the silence like glass. Blackstripe jerked her head up, her ears pricked to seek the source of the sound. Almost straight away she heard a distant mew for help. She jumped to her feet and raced towards the WildWaters as fast as her paws could carry her. She heard the mew again, this time closer than before. Instantly she increased her pace, rushing through ferns and brambles damp with dew. She emerged from the undergrowth onto a small beach, the moonlight reflecting off the sand making the beach seem to glow. She skidded to a halt at the waters edge. Frantically she looked around, desperately seeking the cat who had cried for help. As her gaze travelled towards the centre of the fast flowing river, she spotted a pale yellow head struggling through the current. She launched herself into the moonlit river and began swimming strongly towards the drowning cat, her eyes fixed on the head thrashing above the water. She lunged for it and fastened her teeth in the scruff of the neck. Dragging the cat towards the bank, she realised with horror she might not be able to reach the bank with the extra weight of the cat. No! she thought. I mustn’t think like that. Filled with fresh determination, she thrust herself and the cat towards the beach. Fortunately StarClan must have been watching over them and the currents of the river washed them up onto the bank out of danger. Blackstripe staggered to her paws and spat out water. Shaking her fur to get rid of the water dripping from her fur, she bent over the sandy coloured cat. Immediately he started coughing up water and soon after he blinked open his eyes. Slowly he rose to his paws and Blackstripe was shocked to see how tall he was. She gave a little gasp and shrank back. He smiled at her and gazed at her. Blackstripe timidly reached up and sniffed his fur.
“What Clan are you from?” she meowed suspiciously.
She felt her eyes being dragged towards his bright green eyes. She gave a little start when she realised that he wasn’t looking at her; he was looking through her.
“You’re blind.” she murmured quietly.
“Yes I am blind.” he replied, his smile fading. “And I must thank you for saving me. I would never have escaped the river by myself.” He dipped his head in gratitude.
Blackstripe scuffed the ground with her paws, looking embarrassed. “Oh it was nothing really. I would have done it for any cat. But where are you from? You don’t smell like any Clans from around here.
The pale yellow cat sighed and hung his head.
“My name is Dawnfire, and I come from the legendary FireClan. But it’s my fault, its all my fault…”
He broke off as his voice cracked and he stared unseeingly at the ground.
“What’s your fault?” Blackstripe prompted gently.
“I…I…I was out hunting one day…and when I came back…my mentor was dead, murdered by cats from our enemy Clan, IceClan…and my Clan had disappeared.”
Hope you enjoy! It is a lot different to the old one. Hopefully better ;D
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