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Post by Shadowstar on Sept 27, 2007 10:20:49 GMT -5
Title:The Birth of a Killer Chapters:One-shot Author:Shadowstar Pairing: Rating:PG Spoilers:None Warning:Death Disclaimer:I don't own warriors, but I did invent these characters Other:This is a possible prologue for a multi-chapter story
His name was Venomkit. He was black, with glowing red eyes that reflected all the hatred his past had caused. He stepped with a ghostly air of power, his long white claws stained with the blood of many creatures which he had picked off in the dark, killed mercilessly, and without reason. His slain kin lay around him, killed for not doing his bidding, killed so that he could survive. His parents lived in fear, not daring to sleep while he was awake, for fear of being murdered while they dreamed. His fangs gleamed whenever he opened his mouth, sharp and deadly, ready to rip open his opponents. Though this kit was small, he was deadly, and he wanted revenge. He knew not for what, but he vowed to kill, and kill again, until he left to join DarkClan forever. Then, he would walk the paths of others, to guide them to kill as he did, to murder the innocent while they slept. Yes, Venomkit was evil, but not even he knew it. Some wanted this little kit dead, unaware that it wasn't him beneath all the bloodlust and hate. It was a long dead cat, evil down to the bone. He controlled the kit, made him his living double. One day, this kit would be Venomstar, and his plans would rip apart the whole forest, and leave nothing in his wake.
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Post by Shadowstar on Sept 27, 2007 10:21:52 GMT -5
So does anyone think I chould make a multi-vhapter with this prologue?
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Post by Frostbite on Sept 27, 2007 21:22:09 GMT -5
Yes you should.
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Post by Foxclaw on Sept 28, 2007 0:30:40 GMT -5
u definitely should! ;D ;D its great! continue
P.S. I didn't feel like logging in. im really ghostfeather ;D
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Post by Shadowstar on Sept 28, 2007 9:07:45 GMT -5
ok, thanks. I'll start on it as soon as I can think up some good ideas.
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Post by Shadowstar on Oct 13, 2007 7:45:06 GMT -5
I'm confused...Why was this rejected?
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Post by Wildpaw on Oct 13, 2007 15:43:18 GMT -5
I'm having the same problem!! I have no idea why my story was rejected!! I'm sorry that it happened to you too!!
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Post by Shadowstar on Oct 14, 2007 0:11:41 GMT -5
Which one of yours got rejected? I want to read it! I wish if they rejected your stories, they would at least tell you why!
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Post by Wildpaw on Oct 17, 2007 19:01:14 GMT -5
I wish so too!!! Mine is Sunset Island! I love your story by the way!!
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Post by Shadowstar on Oct 18, 2007 6:23:38 GMT -5
Thanks, I'll read urs 2
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