Should Have Been Your Daughter }{ [POEM]

[dare.xx.awaken me...]

Title: "Should Have Been Your Daughter"
Chapters: Iz a poem
Author: Dare <- Me
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Up to midnight, really.
Pairing: CinderxFire
Summary: Brackenfur speculates on his sisters troubled days.
Warning: This Warning Warns You There Is no Warnings
Disclaimer: I do not own Warriors. If I did, you'd know.
Beta: None
Cover: ....
Author Note: I am not happy with this poem. Please help me make it better.

SHOULD HAVE BEEN YOUR DAUGHTER


Sometimes I see the sadness in your eyes grow ever stronger
When you look at him, When you stare at him with pain
When you feel so guilty for letting your duties wander.

A speculation, a pondering,
Whats it like to love with a heart in a million shards,
Whats it like to watch her when he takes her in his arms?
To know he loves another and you always be his friend,
So you could be that girl, the one who won his heart.

A broken heart is only healed by time,
But seasons go by and you never get better
And i'm afraid you'll slip away,
When your mind sweetly surrenders

I can see a longing in your eyes,
When you watch him and his mate
His mate, a title with a name that isn't yours
You could have been a mother

And that makes me wonder,
Whats it like to train the kit that should have been your daughter?

[Lightningstar]

Poor Cinderpelt!

I'm not a huge FirexCinder fan, but I really liked this poem. Keep writing!

[Silvereye]

Wow. I like it. There's a lot of feeling put into it.