The Mysterious Prophecy

[Shadowstar]

Title:The Mysterious Prophecy
Chapters:Unknown yet
Author:Shadowstar
Pairing:BluebellxThunderstorm, there might be more later
Rating:PG
Spoilers:None
Summary:Four cats, who are also unknown sibling, are sent on a journey due to a prophecy from SpiritClan
Warning:
Disclaimer:I don't own warriors, or claim to, but I made these characters, Clans, and the prophecy
Other:If you want to see the Clans, and whats happening in the prophecy(Its still in progress), or even join the site, heres the link: clansofhate.proboards74.com/index.cgi
P.S:I did not copy Jaykit, he is able to see, people

Prologue
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Bluebell and Thunderstorm sat on the rocks around the MountainClan camp, their tails twined together. Bluebell turned to her mate, her eyes sad. "Thunderstorm," she whispered hesitantly, tears in her eyes. "There's something I need you to know..." Thunderstorm blinked, eyes worried. "What is it Bluebell?" He brushed comfortingly against her flank. "What's wrong?" Tears ran down Bluebell's face as she replied, "Its about the kits..." She spoke of the kits that she had recently found out she was having. The medicine cat had told her that there would be four. Thunderstorm was instantly on his paws, franticly kneading the ground. "What!" he meowed, his soft voice scared. Bluebell hesitated, then continued, "SpiritClan sent me a message last night..." she began. Thunderstorm was confused. "But they usually only send dreams to medicine cats and leaders..." Bluebell nodded. "I know. But they told me that it was for my ears alone, and for whoever I choose to tell. And after hearing what they said, I agree.." her voice broke, and more tears of anguish streamed down her face. Thunderstorm blinked, then brushed his tail down her flank. "What did they say about our kits, Bluebell?" he prompted gently. Bluebell stared into her mates eyes, then, finding his golden gaze reassuring, continued. "They told me that there would indeed be four, but only one would be with us..." She trailed off again. Thunderstorm whispered, "You mean, three are going to die?" Bluebell shook her head. "No, Thunderstorm. They are going to go to each of the four Clans; MountainClan, of course, DawnClan, EmberClan, and DewClan. They told me that Winterkit shall go to DawnClan, Jaykit will remain with us, Pebblekit will stay with DewClan, and give up Ashkit to EmberClan. They say it is their will, and if they wish, I will follow it." Her eyes were sad as she stared at her mate. Thunderstorm was upset, but he understood. "Okay," was all he said.

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Two moons later, the kits were born. The snowy-white she-kit was named Winterkit. At the Gathering, Winterkit was given to DawnClan. The smoky-grey tom-kit was given the name Ashkit, and his parents gave him up to EmberClan. Pebblekit, a small grey she-kit, went to stay with DewClan, and their first-born, Jaykit, stayed with them in MountainClan. He was small and grey. And so their destiny began...

Should I continue writing?

[.Swiftclaw.]

Yes!!! Definetely!!! It's so sad that they have to give up their kits... but I love the names so far!!!! ;D

[Shadowstar]

Thanks, I made them up, if you want proof, go on my site and into accepted cats, bluebell thunderstorm and kits((Im shadowstar btw, its my site))

[Shadowstar]

Chapter One
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Winterkit yawned. It had been a long day, and she was tired. She was looking forward to her comfy nest in the DawnClan nursery. She just wished she had parents like the other kits. Her parents had been rogues, or so she thought. Really, her mother and father were the queen Bluebell and the warrior Thunderstorm in MountainClan. She had been one of the four cats in SpiritClan's mysterious prophecy, and she had been sent to DawnClan. She thought she was the only surviving kit in her litter, but really, her brothers and sisters were just in other Clans. Jaykit lived with their parents in MountainClan, Pebblekit was in DewClan, and Ashkit was with EmberClan. Winterkit got up slowy, and padded towards the nursery. She had been basking in the sun near the fresh-kill pile, hoping that somebody would talk to her, but nobody had. Sighing, she curled up in her nest, tucked her tail over her nose, and fell asleep.

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P.S: This chapter is far from done, but I have to leave, I'll add to it later.

[Mossleg]

Can you stand a tip? Don't tell us again what happened to her siblings. If we are reading chapter one, chances are that we read the prologue, and hearing it all again will distract us from focusing on Winterkit.
If you were to write a sequal, then you might want to remind readers of things.
Sorry if I sound really preachy. Your story is intruguing.

[Shadowstar]

Thanks, but the reason I did it was because that was how Winterkit was feeling at the time.

[ghostfeather]

it's great! i feel bad for the three kits that don't get to live with their parents though.
continue! ;D

[Nettlefur]

nice prologue! i like the names too, but the name Bluebell makes my mouth water. lol ;D



P.S. in case you didn't know, Bluebell is like the best ice cream in the world! The sad thing is i only get it like every five years.

[Shadowstar]

oh, ive never tried it...thanks