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Post by Rainstar on Dec 8, 2007 0:03:41 GMT -5
i''lll put some more up LATER
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 8, 2007 0:39:26 GMT -5
(Oops i acedently deleted a part 'll fix that later any eay they are going to look for the missing Stardapple and Golden paw)the two cats left and headed up the gorge when they reached the top and were looking over the moore they stoped , Both were horrified even Darkstar who no longer loved his brother, but his sweet sweet stardapple oh his poor stardapple what had happend none of the cats knew. "Wait they are still alive see her cheast its moving!" Lilypaw squealed in delight. "your right it is!" Darkstar ran down to stardapple and nudged her gently. "oh Darkstar I knew youd come..." she coughed"but i don't think I can make it not much longer please do not try to take me back, besides there is no medicince cat to care for me!" "Yes there Is there's Minnopaw she can help you i promise" Darkstar panted "No Darkstar i have not toght him much, just defend the rest of the clan so Blood clan do not get the rest to please" Stardapple begged, but Darkstar did not listen he grabbbed her scruff and began to pull her up the hil if he could make it that far he could make it down the gorge and into the medicine cats den. Lilypaw was still atempting to awaken Goldenpaw. "Goldenpaw please,Please wake up, Please" Lilypaw yowled "huh? ware am i" Goldenpaw began to cough up blood. no not and internal wound thought lilypaw "Lilypaw, i lo-" more blood gushed from his mouth "don't speak i can get you up tto the medicine cats den ok, you will be fine." Lilypaw tried to hush Goldenpaw.
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 8, 2007 0:46:22 GMT -5
"but Lilypaw i have to tell you that i love" Goldenpaw coughed more Lilypaw pulled and pulled him up behind Her mentor breathing heavily he stopped at the top of the hill and began to drag him down blood gushing from his mouth and stomach. Lilypaw sighed out of relief, more cats were coming to hep them.
Talonheart and Minnopaw took Stardapple from Darkstar while Black took Goldenpaw from Lilypaw. They were going to make it. "Lilypaw go get Rainclan's Medicine cat Now" Darkstar breathed Lulypaw rushed tward Rainclan territory.
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 8, 2007 0:49:39 GMT -5
Lunapool was in her den sorting herbs when Lilypaw arrived sweating heavily. "Lunapool We Need YOUR HELP" she panted "Yes little one right away" by the time both cats got to skyclan camp Goldenpaw and Stardapple were...........
(srry got to leave you on a cliff hanger Hint *tear*tear)
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Post by Shadowstar on Dec 8, 2007 1:03:55 GMT -5
Dead?
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Post by Mudsoarer on Dec 8, 2007 2:12:37 GMT -5
please write more i want to know when lilypaw finds out that goldenpaw loves her and it was kind of hard to red alittle bit. but other wise it was awesome!!! What a dumb comment
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Post by Mosspath on Dec 8, 2007 12:49:54 GMT -5
Please continue, it's really good. ;D
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Airilae-Chan
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Time for a return! And a new name <3
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Post by Airilae-Chan on Dec 8, 2007 12:54:53 GMT -5
That was not a dumb comment, Mudsoarer! Don't be so mean about other people, if you don't like what they said you don't have to tell everyone! I like the story and I think you should continue.
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 8, 2007 23:55:12 GMT -5
srry got to leave you on a cliff hanger Hint *tear*tear((((((((((JK)))))))) by the time both cats got to skyclan camp Goldenpaw and Stardapple were in the medicine cat's den. Lunapool scurried over to Stardapple who had a much better chance of survivinmg by the looks of it and the Rainclan cat could not work on them both at the same time she pushed cobwebs to Stardapple's belly wound and asked Minnopaw to hold it there so Lunapool could see if Goldenpaw had any chance of surving, there was no way she could heal him if he was bleeding internally, she seached his mouth for any wounds. "Waut he wasn't Bleeding internally he has an ugly gash under his tongue, he has lost a lot of blood but he will survive give them both poppy seeds let them rest and change the cobwebs regularly they will need some time but they will live"Lunapool told the nw relived Lilypaw, and Darkstar.
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Post by Shadowstar on Dec 9, 2007 3:27:52 GMT -5
Oh, wow.... That was a real shocker. I thought that they were dead, for sure.
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 9, 2007 15:40:07 GMT -5
NOT BOTHERING TO LOGIN
well i was gunna make Goldenpaw die but i thought of a better thing so yah and besides Stardapple cant die i have somthing SPECIAL for her mwah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 21, 2007 18:55:46 GMT -5
something evil is coming mwah ha ha ha ha ha ha haha ha ha ha ha ha haha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
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Post by Rainstar on Jan 13, 2008 1:09:27 GMT -5
"REALLY! he is gunna live!"Lilypaw was excited. she imediatly gave Goldenpaw the poppy seeds. "uhhhhh Lilypaw, i need to tell you something....."Goldenpaw meowed "No you dont you can tell me when your better!"Lilypaw exclaimed happily
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