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Post by Rainstar on Nov 11, 2007 1:42:27 GMT -5
This Fanfic takes place about 7-8 years into the future of sky clan to new clans have arised: Rainclan(in honor of Rainfur) and Flameclan. Sagekit is now sagepelt rockkit is now rockclaw mintkit and bouncekit are dead oh and tinykit is Tinysong(i forgot that rockit and tiny kit were brother and sister and they are now mates so please dont bother me about it!)
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Post by Rainstar on Nov 11, 2007 1:43:58 GMT -5
oh and rainclan is the newsest clan just got there borders down
CHAPTER 1 “Another story please please!” Lilykit was crying out” just one more!” “Ok but just one more then you have to go to sleep” an old elder by the name of Petalnose said “Yay!” Lilykit cried out again Then Petalnose began to speak “Once long ago there were five clans in a forest and they all lived in harmony, But then twolegs ruined it all by building their nests on skyclan’s land and-” “Wait we’re sky clan! ”the small kitten interrupted “well this was before us” “oh” “Now as I was saying they built on sky clans land and sky clan was banished from the territory. They traveled for some time, to be exact 3 weeks, then they found this here gorge, it was a nice place for skyclan even if it was hard stone and very cold. It was hard for skyclan at first but soon a was well except for the rats ” “Rats! I could take on three thousand of those!” Lilykit’s light fur was standing strait up and she was in “attacking mode” as she had called it. “Not these rats they were vicious and led by a very very smart rat whose teeth were yellow and his eyes were red.” Petalnose tried to tell Lilykit but that didn’t work out because Sagepelt and Spottedawn ran into the elders den. “Mother I’m, I mean Spotteddawn is going to have kits!” Sagepelt panted. “ That’s wonderful I’m just glad you not having them” Petal nose said to Sagepelt. Spotteddawn gave a mrrow of laughter at that. And Lilykit began to jump up and down ecstatic. “Does this mean that I wont be alone in the nursery!” “Yes” said Spottedawn But soon she will be alone in the apprentice’s den” replied Sagepelt “Danget this sucks I’ll never be in one den with some one else even when I’m an elder. Then I’ll be old and mean oh this really sucks” Lilykit pouted” I’m going to sleep. “Wow I never new the most hyper kit here would want to go to sleep” petalnose said “Well you are happy that I‘m having kits aren’t you?” Spotteddawn asked “yes I am.” “Well I better get to the nursery I always wondered how comfy it was in there” “well it wasn‘t very comfy when I was in there oh well I guess its different now” “see you at sun high tomorrow” with that Spottedawn left to go to the nursery leaving Sagepelt and Petalnose alone. “How long have the both of you known” Petalnose meowed a little mad his mate was Spottedawn. “we‘ve known for over three moons why?” “why didn‘t you tell me before I am your mother” “Spottedawn didn‘t want me to I don’t know why she did” “you do know she is not a rightful member of this clan, does she even know about Savanahstorm” Sagepelt looked hurt his dark brown fur was looking very dull he had been depressed when Savanahstorm had died right before Spottedawn even joined the now thriving clan. Savanahstorm was mate to Sagepelt and mother to Lilykit she had been a beautiful brown and tan molted she-cat and had fallen in love with Sagepelt soon after she joined the clan as Savanahpaw. Now that he’d met Spottedawn he was happy again, but petalnose his mother had been angry. She could not see how he could fall in love with another cat so quickly after his mate died or even to fall in love at all after her death. “Mother I loved Savanahstorm but she is gone it is time for me to move on” “I said does she know about Savanahstorm” “No, I‘ll tell her when I’m ready and then she will under stand as you refuse to do just because you couldn‘t fall in love with another cat after Rainfur died, just because you couldn‘t move on deosn‘t mean I cant. I saw the way you looked at Sharpclaw all the time I know you loved him If you would have said something to him instead of mourning over Father maye would could have been happy again to. And maybe he wouldn’t hve died to save Leafstar maybe he would have been in the den with you but he isn’t he DEAD! Now let me move on mother this was my choice to make! ” and with that Sagepelt left.
“Wake up!” it was Lilykit “its my Apprentice ceremony today and Goldenpaw is still there!” “Still ware?” Sagepelt grumbled it was sunrise and he was tired from the fight he had with his mother. “still in the apprentice den with Clearpaw and Minopaw and Blackpaw” Lilykit mewed happily “Oh, when is the ceremony” Sagepelt asked his daughter “Not till sunhigh but you can still call me lilyPAW” “ok lilykit I mean lily paw, just don’t et yourself all rallied up” “OK I‘m gunna go get some fresh kill” “can you get me some to?” “sure” Lilykit trotted out of the warriors den already thinking what her warrior name would be Should it be lilyfur, or would lilyeyes be better maybe lilyheart or lilydeath. oh I don’t know maybe I’ll get to see sky rock today or even do some practice fighting or hunt, then a new thought came to her mind, Who will my mentor be! Maybe Sagepelt! Or someone else what ever hey there is Goldenpaw!
“Lilykit, Lilykit” Goldenpaw yowled, “I heard your becoming a apprentice today” “yup” Lilykit was staring at his golden & black fur it was so beautiful a and he was very muscular “I think you will be a great warrior” “what’s that have to do with anything I‘m still a moon or more away from being a warrior I haven’t even been to a gathering yet” “But that’s because of the new clan rain clan they think they are so special and now there is a third clan” “really” “yup they are called blood clan I think” “why” “don’t know I‘ve seen one of them and they should be called ugly, skinny and ugly city clan though.” “really” “yup” “cool maybe I’ll get to go to the gathering to night” “I highly doubt it even though they are skinny they look dangerous blood clan have tooth studded callers and some of those teeth are from dogs! ”lilykit was suddenly afraid what if these cats tried to hurt her or her father. “hey guys” Clearpaw said, Clearpaw was the oldest apprentice and was probably becoming a warrior today “I get to go to the gathering tonight for the third time this past 9 moons” “NO FAIR!” Goldenpaw and lilykit said in unison Clearpaw stalked off with her tail high in the air, her white and silver fur glinted in the sunlight. And when you saw her eyes there were as clear as your own reflection in any shard of broken glass. “this is so unfair, the only reason she gets to go most of the time is because her father is dune star” Goldenpaw said “she is such a pampered kittypet” lilykit meowed “come on lets go” The two cats stalked of to the fresh kill pile getting something to eat they dug around for a minute and decided to share a large thingy bird. “oh my gosh, I’ll be right back: lilykit had totally forgot to bring Sagepelt something to eat it was almost sunhigh already her father would be angry. Grabbing a shrew she bolted toward the warriors den “sorry dad” lilykit mewed smallie “I totally forgot.” “that’s ok lilykit, paw whatever” “I really am sorry” “I know I‘m just thinking about last night” “what happened” “oh nothing” Lilykit was just about to ask what wrong again when Dunestar’s voice rang out from Rockpile “let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather for a clan meeting” Lilykit began to jump up and down she was overly exited. “we have one new apprentice and one new warrior ceremony to go through with today but first I would like to say that rain clan has finally marked their borders and a new clan has rised blood clan is what they call them selves but they are skinny and weak probably no threat to us” he paused then went on “lilykit pleas come forth” lilykit sprang up and ran to the Rockpile “Lilykit do you promise to work hard every day from now until you earn your warrior name” “I do” “your mentor will be Darkpath”, Lilykit touched her nose to Darkpath‘s shoulder,“ and from this day forward this kit will be known as Lilypaw” “Lilypaw, Lilypaw, Lilypaw!” Goldenpaws cry was the loudest. Clearpaw became Clearpool
After the ceremony Goldenpaw met the newly apprenticed Lilypaw at the apprentices den. “I‘m so happy for you, now we can hunt, practice fight, and, and everything else together” Lilykit was running around in circles as happy as Clearpool was not when she found out Goldenpaw got to go to the gathering instead of her. Clearpool hated that she had to stay silent all night long she wasn’t the talkative sort but still if she had something to say shed say wether it was mean or nice. Lilypaw noticed Goldenpaw staring at Clearpaw as if he loved her as she was sitting vigil. For some reason Lilypaw suddenly felt jealous “does he really lover her does he even really like me as a friend” “Of course you are my friend and I was just staring at those to cats off in the distance behind her” Goldenpaw was suddenly behind Lilypaw “oh my gash did I just say that out loud” “umm, yes why” “Oh I just didn’t hear my self talking aren’t you supposed to be at the gathering soon” “yah we are going in a minute” Goldenpaw waved his tail for Lilykit to follow when he began to leave. They said their goodbyes and good luck. To each other and went in separate ways. Lilypaw did not think it was fair that most apprentices before her got to go and train on their first day so Lilypaw decided she’d do some exploring on her own, yes she new apprentices were not supposed to leave camp without permission but right now she was to exited to think. Running up the path down stream of the river she headed wondering if she would see any blood clan cats why she was out she definitely hoped not at least not until she learned some fighting moves. The water began to widen and Lilypaw began to stray from the path not wanting to get her pelt wet at the moment. Then she was on a cliff over looking the now fast moving river. She looked down and getting dizzy began to stumble and was falling. Back at the camp Darkpath her mentor was just going to look for and tell her they could do some late night training heard that he when Dunestar said he could go to the gathering not even thinking to ask if Lilypaw wanted to go with him he started to walk toward the sky rock where in the middle Cliffstar, Dunestar and Rainstar stood. “tonight we named tow new warriors, applepaw and gorgepaw are now appletree and Gorgefall” called out Rainstar looking at the proud warriors whose eyes were shining brightly as the stars. “as you already know we have finally marked our border” “we have named a warrior today and welcomed another apprentice into training Clearpool could not come today for she is now sitting Vigil and Lilykit is now Lilypaw” just as Dunestar finished speaking a large group of cats all bloodied and torn came to the sky rock. All the cats at sky rock readied for battle. Goldenpaw new immediately that these cats were probably the group that had called themselves Blood clan they were led by a large but lean cat with the eyes and teeth of a snake. Behind him was a very large white cat that was thoroughly covered with dirt and stank of fox dung. I have to fight my hardest and be brave I can make it though golden paw thought. Then they attacked did they really think they could defeat sky clan, there was no way. The one whom I thought was their leader ran towards dune star and all seemed to slow. The two stared at each other for a long moment. Then the blood clan leader attacked griping his teeth on Dunestars neck, dune star wriggled and tried to break free but he couldn’t get away then his 2nd to last life was gone he reawake and with one final bite the blood clan leader to took the life out of him and Dunestar moved no more. Then golden paw screamed ”Dune star no not now Dunestar I‘ll avenge your death no matter what it takes.” he yowled viciously then jumped on The blood clan leader trying to take him by surprise. “you can not defeat the powerful blood clan leader, Snake” the blood clan leader yowled. Goldenpaw gripped his teeth on snake’s leg pulling him to the ground. “bet you I can” Goldenpaw didn’t car about his own life now he needed to agave his fathers death. Even thought Dunestar had treated him like dopey kit just because Clearpool had been the first born a and the over achiever at fighting didn’t mea golden paw didn’t love his father. He bit onto Snakes neck and cried ‘this is how you killed my father and this is how I‘ll kill you” about to sink his teeth further into Snakes throat when Ice, the dirty cream colored cat jumped onto Goldenpaw which sent him crashing to the ground. Ice and snake ran away after that Goldenpaw felt as if every bone in his body had broken into tiny pieces. He just layed there. Blood clan left in a stampede following their wounded leader One heavy cat waked Golden paw’s head knocking him out and others cats that followed gave him more than one wound to think about. When Goldenpaw awoke the apprentice Blackpaw was sniffing his side. “you are alive no body believed me when I said you were still alive.” The black and orange apprentice said. “really” “yup” Then he heard the screaming “someone help me” it was almost inaudible but Goldenpaw new the apprentices call any ware. ‘Lilypaw, Blackpaw go and get help lily paw is in trouble”
“really I didn‘t hear anything” “just get help she is at the gorge” “right away Goldenpaw” “Run” Blackpaw ran as fast as he could he didn’t really think lily paw was in trouble he though this was some practical joke that golden paw was playing on his just like he liked to do but would Goldenpaw really do something like that when he was in pain?
“please someone help its me Lilypaw,” Lilypaw continued to scream over and over and over again. Her front paws were one the edge of the cliff and she was afraid to even try and get back up her paws were getting tiered as was her voice. Maybe if she just tried to get her back feet on the cleft just little to her right. just a little farther she thought, ok now all I have to d is get my front feet farther on the edge of the cliff. “Help somebody please “she had just slipped and was going to fall. “I’m going to die, I’m going to die. She said over and over again. “he wasn‘t kidding” the voice of Blackpaw was heard over the other side of the cliff. “is some one there” Lilypaw called “Lilypaw!” It was Darkpath “just hold on we can get you out of this mess” “yes Darkpath” “Now grab my paw” “I cant, I cant” “Yes you can.” “black paw ware is that tree branch talon heart you to get on with it” Darkpath yowled “we are here sorry this thing is heavy it’s a fallen tree branch” Talonheart said “ok Lilypaw can you Grab hold of the edge of this branch” “I think so” “ok Lilypaw Now” Lilypaw grabbed the branch and pulled her self up “I made it!” Lilypaw said “I‘m alive I did it did you see Darkpath!, Darkpath I‘m sorry for leaving the camp alone, Wait why are you so bloodied did they attack?” “How did you know about blood clan?” “I heard some things from other cats in the clan” “What did you think you were doing out here all alone” Darkpath’s voice was suddenly very harsh “I‘m sorry Darkpath” “GET BACK TO CAMP NOW” Darkpath screeched Lilypaw ran as fast as she could she was so surprised that Darkpath would do some thing like that let alone right after she had almost died. Then a thought hit her maybe he had been scarred for her scarred that she would not be able to follow the warrior code as the now legendary Firestar had retaught them and now they had taught to rain and cliff clan maybe she would rather live the life of a kitty pet instead. No there was no way that she would want to do that she had shown courage just now and her wanting to train by going out by herself. As Lilypaw arrived at camp she noticed many wounded cats. that’s odd, Lilypaw thought as Talonheart and Blackpaw walked into the camp, why hasn’t Darkpath come with them he was pretty badly hurt is he ok?. “Is Darkpath ok and shouldn’t Dunestar be calling a clan meeting?” Lilypaw asked Goldenpaw as she found him in the medicine cat’s den. Goldenpaw looked away he was on the verge of despair. Dunestar had died right before his eyes he could have helped… “Dune-” Goldenpaw faltered “Dunestar he’s, he’s… ” “what” “dead” Goldenpaw was sad and furious with him self, he could have done something he could have saved Dunestar and all would be well and Darkpath would not have had to go to the skyrock (or whispering cave) to receive his nine lives when he was bloodied and torn shouldn’t he have waited? Goldenpaw thought well I guess he wasn’t wounded that bad it just looked really bad. “DEAD! Dunestar cant be dead he no he cant” “BUT HE IS, And its MY fault I did it I could have done something I could stoped Snake I could have I could have saved him Instead I just stood there and watched my father DIE”
“but it wasn‘t your faul-”
“But it was my fault cant you see I watched him die, Right there in front of me!”
“its Not YOUR FUALT”
“yes it is” “if you want to be then fine” Lilypaw sneered “Lilypaw I‘m sorry I” Goldenpaw desperately wanted to say sorry to Lilypaw but it was to late she left with a flick of her tail. “please Lilypaw I” It was of course no use trying to get her his leg was badly wounded there was no way he’d be able to get up right now. But he’d try because he loved her he loved Lilypaw. “WAIT LILYPAW please Lilypaw I want to tell you something!” “You lay down this instant now I tell you right this millionth of a moon” Stardapple the clan medicine cat yowled at Goldenpaw she was very inpatient at the moment and would probably claw his face off if he tried to move again. Stardapple moved quickly to anther wounded cat and then another and another. Goldenpaw watched her until the Morning sun rose high into the sky when her bright gray spots shone in the light. His eyes fluttered as he tried to keep awake but sleep finally won the battle and he fell asleep soundly as Darkpath reciving his nine lives.
Darkpath finally made his way to the skyrock. There he looked up at the stars wondering which star was Dunestar his beloved leader. He curled up in the middle of the rock and fell asleep….
…. “Welcome Darkpath Are you ready to receive your nine lives” a Fiery red tom came up to him “I think so ware are we what is this place I‘ve never seen it before” Darkpath replied “who are you?” “I am Firestar leader of Thunderclan and mentor to sky clan and this is Fourtrees a gathering place ware all the clans used to meet” “you mean you are the legend cat who brought Skyclan to” “yes do no not speak the others are coming” “what others” “the ancestors of your past” “wait what’s happening what do I do answer me!” “wait the will tell you” Many cats surrounded the clearing some Darkpath recognized “Mother is that really you? Dunestar!” Darkpath cried in joy The tom known as Firestar walked up to him and touched his nose to Darkpath’s head. “I Firestar give you the life of adventure and questing to help you on journeys you never dreamed you would go on” Darkpath felt suddenly like he new everything right which path to take , or to know what was right from wrong and it was a wonderful feeling. The next cat came up to Darkpath and did the same as Firestar “I Skywatcher of skyclan give you the life of Faith in StarClan to let them guide your path” Darkpath had a strong feeling of helplessness and felt very loyal to StarClan The next cat was a molted brown she cat who was Darkpath’s dead sister “Hello my brother I missed you I give you the life of love as strong as a mother to her kits” instead of a sweet feeling as he expected it was a felling of rage, love, and devotion. four more cats came giving him four more lives. The next cat was whom he new and loved most, his mother “ I Dappledfeather give you the life devotion to what you know is right” And the last cat whom Darkpath definitely knew, Dunestar “I give you the life of tireless energy and loyalty to your clan it wasn‘t golden paws fault” Darkpath felt pain and yet a great feeling with it. LOVE. “wait WHAT what about Goldenpaw what did he do did he did he kill you” Darkpath whispered to Dunestar but it was to late all the starry cats began to speak their voice “Darkpath from this night forward you will be known as Darkstar, May all of StarClan light your path” every StarClan cat said at once yet it sounded like one pure voice. Darkstar was amazed yet scared of what was happening He couldn’t stay forever as he wanted he had a clan to take care of now after all he was leader of his clan. Yes he was leader he had responsibilities, , Darkpath the with a sigh, I cant see her any more there is know way and Dunestar I will avenge your‘ death help me do so. Then his tears began to fall there was no way he would be able to kill his own little brother.
Lilypaw was so angry I could claw his face off right now and I should have oh I’m so mad at him UHHHHH Lilypaw thought to her self Lilypaw stalked over to Blackpaw whose wounds were already almost healed and fell asleep.
*thump * *thump * *thump* what is that Lilypaw thought there it is again*thump * *thump* “STOP” Lilypaw said and it did “sorry I was just trying to wake you” Blackpaw snorted “With what a rock!” “um no actually. It was my tail and I‘ll hit you with it if you don‘t get up or should I say Darkpath I mean Darkstar will he wants to take you for training with me and Minnopaw!”
“don’t you mean Goldenpaw you do know that minnopaw is a medicince cat aprennitce”
“yes I know but Stardapple wants to teach her some moves just incase and Darkstar isn‘t really happy with Goldenpaw besides Goldenpaw is still in the medicine cat’s den ”
“oh yahh” Lilypaw suddenly remembered her argument with Goldenpaw the night before she now wondered what he wanted to tell her so desperately maybe she should go talk to him…
“LILYPAW you fell asleep again” Blackpaw was sitting down and he yaned Lilypaw cave a snort of laughter “what!” Blackpaw looked confused and he fell over making Lilypaw laugh even harder “nothing you just looked like a kit just born when you yawned and and then you fell over”
“what’s so funny about that?” Growled Blackpaw as he jumped at Lilypaw starting a play fight. That went on for awhile when Darkstar came into the scene.
“what are you to doing I thought we were going to do some real fighting today” Darkstar meowed. “Right now?” Lilypaw inquired “well if you don’t want to… ” “Oh we do lets go hurry up lest go get Minnopaw!” stated Blackpaw “WAIT! For me!” Lilypaw called as they took off Blackpaw and her were getting to be good friends, “please wait for me I just almost died yesterday” “fine I guess I can wait for you slowpoke!” “Hey” Lilypaw ran right past Blackpaw making some wind. Both breathing hard they entered the medicine cats den, “Minnopaw, Stardapple! Its time to go!” they said in unison and both gave mrrows of laughter. “ha? Oh yah I‘m awake.” said Minnowpaw starting to doze off again, but when Lilypaw pounced on her tail Minnopaw stood strait up and headed farther into the cave. “Stardapple it‘s time to go do some fight practicing in the forest.” Minnopaw mewed “yes I know, do you want me to come or do want a real warrior to show you how to fight?” Stardapple replied tiredly “I want you to come you are my mentor you know.” “I‘m not feeling up to it and I have to talk to Darkpath about something” Stardapple said slowly and carefully watching what she said. “what do need to talk to him about besides he the one training us!” Minnopaw meowed “oh yes I had” Stardapple paused “forgotten” she seemed in her own world at the moment so Minnopaw decided she would just go without her. “Stardapple isn‘t going she doesn‘t feel well” “really maybe I should see if she is ok” Darkstar said quickly from behind Blackpaw and Lilypaw. “she is the medicine cat I think she can take care of her self” exclaimed Minnopaw “I guess your right” Darkstar said slowly and backed off hesitantly. “Lets go , NOW” Darkstar, in truth, did not want to speak to Stardapple at the moment afraid of what she might have said to him.
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Post by Rainstar on Nov 11, 2007 1:45:14 GMT -5
HERE IS A CHAR LIST Allegiances Skyclan:
Leader: -Dunestar -- Deputy: Darkpath  -Lilypaw Medicine cat: Stardapple --- black she-cat white and gray spots -Minnowpaw Warriors: *Foxclaw-- Orange-red tom
+Treepelt-- brown and white she-cat(one girl revolution)
+Raccoonmask-- gray tom raccoon like face and tail
*Deertail-- Brown she-cat white tail an white 3 striped legs
=Talonheart-- Cream & orange striped she-cat
Icefire-- white/blue and fiery orange she-cat (Mr. lonely)
=Newdawn-- orange tom
^Sagepelt-- pale gray tom
$Rockclaw-- Black tom
$Tinysong-- small white she-cat(can you see me now)
Apprentices:
Minnopaw-- mostly gray tortoiseshell she-cat Clearpaw--white she-cat with silver tinted fur and silver eyes that are almost whit(Man-eater) Goldenpaw-- gold tom w/ black stripes (perfect) Blackpaw-- Black tom with white paws
Queens: Kit- Lilykit (Angel of darkness) ^Spottedawn-- beautiful brown and cream tabby she cat with blue eyes
-Emeraldeyes ginger she-cat with emerald eyes Elders: Petalnose-- pale gray she-cat only elder in clan
Rainclan:
Leader: (Rainstar- Red tom w/ blue sports
Deputy: (Ashenrain- Black she-cat with gray spots
Medicine cat: !!!Lunapool black she-cat with blue eyes
Warriors: )Embershadow Black She-cat with reddish-orange colored eyes and paws
Mudfoot Brown and cream tom
)Flamingeyes Black tom with Bight orange eyes
COPPERFOOT 0Rippedsky Black tom with white on cheast
Nightinvader ugly tom that dies
0Sleekfur- Brown tabby she-cat
Apprentices: Heatherpaw-- B-E-A-U-TIFUL brown and gray spotted she-cat (later falls in love with Goldenpaw) Queens:
Elders: Sloefur reddish she-cat
Moonpool gray she cat
Flameclan:
Leader: Silentstar black she-cat with orange face(only part of it))(Headstrong)(
Deputy: Tearingrain blue tom with rugged stripes Like tears running down his face beneath his eyes)Over and over(
Medicine cat: Quickstep Blue and silver tabby she-cat
Warriors:
Rapidthunder Blue-gray tom with small
Dingoclaw Orange-tan Tom
Windwhisker gray she-cat with gray stripes that tail and face
Dewdrop gray she-cat
Beetail black she-cat with yellow striped tail
Twopaths Tom with split tail black and white
Gonelight Black tom with unusual blue eyes
Apprentices:
Whisperpaw- (Whisperwind) Solopaw-(Solosong maybe) Mistpaw-(Mistfeather) tortoroshell and gray she-cat Shellpaw-(shellfish) Violetpaw-(Violetmist) gray-purple colored she-cat
Queens: Silkpelt- white she-cat with very silky pelt- mother of Twopaths kits - - mutekit, expressionlesskit, Elders: Heavystep- large tabby tom
Morningsoot grey she-cat
Bloodclan Leader: snake Deputy: Ice
Warriors: Mimik Bubble
Copper Fox Goop
Blood Raven Blubber
Iron Midnight thingy
Echo Dawn Crow
Mold Fern Queens:
Karp Thorn Violet
Fire Storm Murk Thunder Mist Brook Rock Swamp Lightning
Bird Heron Shadow
Flood Frog ] Apprentices
Moss Rock ] Hay
Grass Sap ] Barley Cobra Pebble ] Wheat
Cloud Dune
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Post by Rainstar on Nov 11, 2007 1:47:38 GMT -5
the names in () are their theme songs I was really bored and i might post on youtube
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Post by RAinstar on Dec 2, 2007 17:37:51 GMT -5
OVIOUSLY i continue to forget to login but here goes:
"lets go"Lilypaw mewed "ok"Blackpaw responded and the 4 cats moved twards the sandy ditch that was in the woods.
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"Attak me, now" Darkpath said without even taking a second Minnopaw barreld into Darkpath
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heatherstripe
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Take my blood...... it's cold anyways.
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Post by heatherstripe on Dec 4, 2007 0:22:47 GMT -5
please write more i want to know when lilypaw finds out that goldenpaw loves her and it was kind of hard to red alittle bit. but other wise it was awesome!!!
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heatherstripe
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Take my blood...... it's cold anyways.
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Post by heatherstripe on Dec 4, 2007 0:26:39 GMT -5
please write more i want to know when lilypaw finds out that goldenpaw loves her and it was kind of hard to red alittle bit. but other wise it was awesome!!!
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Post by AmberOwlMossAmberfoot on Dec 5, 2007 18:37:51 GMT -5
*not bothering to log in*
Pleeease write more? :3
xD Your Clearpaw has the same theme song as mine. <33
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Post by RAinstar on Dec 5, 2007 21:06:56 GMT -5
she deos lol oh i will continue to write this my freind keeps telling me to and i will have the second chapter like in a half hour (6;07 now)
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 5, 2007 21:15:13 GMT -5
"oof" Darkstar grunted as Minnopaw hit him. he stood up as they both recoverd "How was that?" Minnopaw asked "good a little faster though i ciould have moved if i had wanted to"Darkstar meowed Minnopaw purred in delight. "Ok your turn Blackpaw" "what, ok" Blackpaw tried and knocked Darkstar on his back. hard. "Amazing!" Darkstar meowed
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 5, 2007 22:06:38 GMT -5
"really?" "YES" "ok,ok my turn my turn!"Lilypaw mewed "ok go ahead"Darkstar meowed Lilypaw ran up to her mentor paws streached out wide. She landed on the ground Darkstar had moved tottally out of her reach. "why didn't i get you just like minnopaw and Blackpaw did?" "minnopaw has been in fighting before and blackpaw has been training for aty least a moon now"Darkstar reasurred her. "oh, ok can i try again?"Lilypaw inquired "yes go on now" Lilypaw hurtled her self tward he darstar's right and just as he began to move left she turned that way and hit him knoking them both off their paws. "Good, Very, very GOOD!"Darkstar purred,"ok time to go back" "ahhhhh"the three apprentices mewed "hey sorry time to go" "fine" Lilypaw grumbled and the group set off. as the walked Darkstar whispred to Lilypaw "would you like to explore the territory with me later" DArkstar asked
" just you and me?"
"of course." later that day Lilypaw walked into the medicine cat's den. "Goldenpaw hey i'm sorry about last night and so what did you want to tell me?" When he did not answer Lilypaw looked at ware he had been and began to panick. "Goldenpaw's missing!" a pool of blood was surrounding ware he had been and bloody paw markes were left ware they were draged up at the entrance to the cave
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 5, 2007 22:21:59 GMT -5
Darkstar ran into the den"what's happened ware is my brother!" he screeched
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 6, 2007 22:45:48 GMT -5
Blood dripped from darkstar's mouth, a voles tail dangling out of from it he dropped it right in the pool of blood ware his now missing little brother, Goldenpaw, had been only moments before.
Chapter #3
"whats happend" meowed DArkstar in pretend Panick
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Post by Rainstar on Dec 7, 2007 0:22:31 GMT -5
"He was just gone!" Lilypaw Mewed"i just came in here to say sorry cause wehad a fight last night and well he is not here and he was dragggad just a little while ago by the looks of it i didn't do anyTHING" "I know, i know it ws not your fault" Darkstar
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Post by Shadowstar on Dec 7, 2007 23:43:12 GMT -5
Darkstar killed him, didn't he? Lol, my cat(Emberpaw/flame/star) 's theme song is Going Under by Evanecene and Animal I have become by Three Days Grace.
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