Post by Rainstar on Nov 12, 2007 20:07:23 GMT -5
i was re reading the darkest hour when i decided to make this the prophecey sucks but ohwell
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Tigerstar wasn’t always evil . . . .
I walked the path to high stones I was going with my mentor, Sunstar. Sunstar always took me every ware with him, Sunstar was like a father to me that is after my father, Fireclaw had died. Fireclaw was deputy at the time when he disappeared and he was found dead. His body was ripped apart savagely. No one in the patrol knew what killed him the only thing found that might suggest what killed my father was a tooth with black grass attached to it.
“Tigerpaw hurry up, there’s the entrance, mother mouth it’s called ” Sunstar called, so I ran over to him and we started to race, we always had fun together when it was just the two of us, well the deputy, Tawnyspots, and her apprentice, Bluepaw came with us but they were far behind. We came up to Mother Mouth breathing hard, giving mrrows of laughter in-between breaths.
“So when do we go inside its getting dark” I asked my brown pelt tingling I had no idea what I was about to experience.
“when Tawnyspots and Bluepaw catch up” he meowed back
“ok, thanks” I said as we watched The two cats come up the hill and down the slope to us,
“why don’t we race like Sunstar and Tigerpaw ” I heard Bluepaw ask her mentor, she was so pretty her blue fur her eyes the color of rain I loved being at her side and I hoped we would always be together. I knew I’d stay by her side through thick and thin but would she to me? Tawnyspots didn’t answer just asked Sunstar “ who do you want to stand guard out here?”
“You and Bluepaw, I want to take Tigerpaw with me” Sunstar told his deputy.
“you mean Bluepaw doesn’t get to come inside with us?” I asked as Sunstar and I entered mother mouth.
“No she doesn’t I‘m sure she will eventually” Sunstar told me reassuring me. We walked forever I had no sense of direction but me paws seemed to guide me down the right path, farther and farther we went down into the caves depths, then we were there. The moonstone was not shining as I expected, nothing like Sunstar had described had he really lied to me. Then just as I was about to ask a light so brilliant filled the cave the moon shone directly over the moonstone making it shine like the stars. For what seemed like forever I couldn’t open my eyes the light beamed on through the caverns, I wondered if Bluepaw could see the light from ware she was, I hoped so, she deserved to see it like any real leader would. Bluepaw and I, when we were kits always used to pretend she was leader and I was her loyal deputy we would rampage around the nursery side-by-side play fighting against the other kits, now Whitepaw, Lionpaw, Darkpaw, and Redpaw. Darkpaw always pretened to be the medicine cat he is training as one now he really enjoys it, he will be a good medicine cat. When the light finally faded down Sunstar had already walked up to the moonstone. Then he touched his nose to it and slept. I wasn’t sure if I should but I did as he did anyway. The stone was cold but burned like fire, even if it wasn’t painful at all, I fell asleep quickly. When I opened my eyes I was in Shadowclan territory, I had no idea why, I must be dreaming, I thought. Then I saw a dark shape coming from the marshy swamp. It was my father!
“Fireclaw! Dad! Is it really you!” I yowled in exitement and joy.
“yes it is me” My father replied I ran to touch noses with him but his serous face stoped me.
“whats wrong” I asked
“Hard times are coming Tigerpaw,
Peace will end
Fire will come sweeping Thunderclan
Then one cat whose fur is of oak an enemy
The blue-silver-grey is to be led to power
But you my son can take it
Take the power right from her claws
You can rule all
Discover who killed me avenge my death
Do it until your last final breath
The brother of scourge that flame colored cat
A tom who is just a kitty pet
He is the one but if you will find him
Will be answered in 15 moons to come
Keep the peace hold the land
RULE ALL MY SON
And goodbye ”
His voice was that of a snake his eyes were as cold as Ice. I was so afraid my father never had acted like this before I had to tell Sunstar!
My eyes fluttered open I stood straight up panting hard.
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Tigerstar wasn’t always evil . . . .
I walked the path to high stones I was going with my mentor, Sunstar. Sunstar always took me every ware with him, Sunstar was like a father to me that is after my father, Fireclaw had died. Fireclaw was deputy at the time when he disappeared and he was found dead. His body was ripped apart savagely. No one in the patrol knew what killed him the only thing found that might suggest what killed my father was a tooth with black grass attached to it.
“Tigerpaw hurry up, there’s the entrance, mother mouth it’s called ” Sunstar called, so I ran over to him and we started to race, we always had fun together when it was just the two of us, well the deputy, Tawnyspots, and her apprentice, Bluepaw came with us but they were far behind. We came up to Mother Mouth breathing hard, giving mrrows of laughter in-between breaths.
“So when do we go inside its getting dark” I asked my brown pelt tingling I had no idea what I was about to experience.
“when Tawnyspots and Bluepaw catch up” he meowed back
“ok, thanks” I said as we watched The two cats come up the hill and down the slope to us,
“why don’t we race like Sunstar and Tigerpaw ” I heard Bluepaw ask her mentor, she was so pretty her blue fur her eyes the color of rain I loved being at her side and I hoped we would always be together. I knew I’d stay by her side through thick and thin but would she to me? Tawnyspots didn’t answer just asked Sunstar “ who do you want to stand guard out here?”
“You and Bluepaw, I want to take Tigerpaw with me” Sunstar told his deputy.
“you mean Bluepaw doesn’t get to come inside with us?” I asked as Sunstar and I entered mother mouth.
“No she doesn’t I‘m sure she will eventually” Sunstar told me reassuring me. We walked forever I had no sense of direction but me paws seemed to guide me down the right path, farther and farther we went down into the caves depths, then we were there. The moonstone was not shining as I expected, nothing like Sunstar had described had he really lied to me. Then just as I was about to ask a light so brilliant filled the cave the moon shone directly over the moonstone making it shine like the stars. For what seemed like forever I couldn’t open my eyes the light beamed on through the caverns, I wondered if Bluepaw could see the light from ware she was, I hoped so, she deserved to see it like any real leader would. Bluepaw and I, when we were kits always used to pretend she was leader and I was her loyal deputy we would rampage around the nursery side-by-side play fighting against the other kits, now Whitepaw, Lionpaw, Darkpaw, and Redpaw. Darkpaw always pretened to be the medicine cat he is training as one now he really enjoys it, he will be a good medicine cat. When the light finally faded down Sunstar had already walked up to the moonstone. Then he touched his nose to it and slept. I wasn’t sure if I should but I did as he did anyway. The stone was cold but burned like fire, even if it wasn’t painful at all, I fell asleep quickly. When I opened my eyes I was in Shadowclan territory, I had no idea why, I must be dreaming, I thought. Then I saw a dark shape coming from the marshy swamp. It was my father!
“Fireclaw! Dad! Is it really you!” I yowled in exitement and joy.
“yes it is me” My father replied I ran to touch noses with him but his serous face stoped me.
“whats wrong” I asked
“Hard times are coming Tigerpaw,
Peace will end
Fire will come sweeping Thunderclan
Then one cat whose fur is of oak an enemy
The blue-silver-grey is to be led to power
But you my son can take it
Take the power right from her claws
You can rule all
Discover who killed me avenge my death
Do it until your last final breath
The brother of scourge that flame colored cat
A tom who is just a kitty pet
He is the one but if you will find him
Will be answered in 15 moons to come
Keep the peace hold the land
RULE ALL MY SON
And goodbye ”
His voice was that of a snake his eyes were as cold as Ice. I was so afraid my father never had acted like this before I had to tell Sunstar!
My eyes fluttered open I stood straight up panting hard.
