Post by coalfur on Jan 13, 2008 18:07:53 GMT -5
Okay look i got bored and i wanted to type something any thing, so i did.
Coalfur hissed. The plump mouse she had been stalking dissappeared under the roots of a thick hawthorn tree. She drew herself up and glanced behind her. Her apprentice, Fernpaw, had stepped on a stick. The tiny tan she-cat was gultily hanging her head. Coalfur sighed. She wove around the the tree and lept over a fallen oak. She turned to call to her apprentice whan a strange scent wafted past her unusual pink nose. It smelled like clear air, fresh streams, mud, and most ominous, cats. By now Frenpaw had scrambled over the log and was standing at Coalfur's side. Both the she-cats gazed at eachother. Coalfur was going to send Fernpaw home to get help but they couldn't risk it now. If the cats were close by it could mean certain death. Coalfur flicked her smoky black tail and crept forward. She had only crept forward five tail lenth when she heard the sound of crunching sticks and dried leaves. At first she thought it her apprentice but when Coalfur glanced back the she-cat was just as surprised. Coalfur moved forward again. She came to a entire clan of cats. They were moving forward warly glanceing nervously form side to side. Huge broad shouldered cats surrounded thin sleek wiry cats along with kits, apprentices and elders. All of them had mud streaked down their sides, hiding the ture color of their pelts. The entire group was inching towards Thunderclan camp. They looked as if they had nver seen so many trees in their life. Coalfur lept out of the bushes then. She figured she could just run if they attacked. Instead relief shone in their eyes, as a huge tom stalked out from the head of the group. Hidden beneath the mud Coalfur could see a white pelt. He approached her and bent his head in a sign of respect. "Greetings." His voice sounded strange. But at least she could understand him. She dipped her head in return. Perhaps these cats were peaceful. "We are looking for Thunderclan." he meowed, "Have you seen them?" His green eyes locked on her own and she found that she couldn't look away. "I am Thunderclan." She meowed, "Who are you and what is your business here with us?" Jsut then Fernpaw emerged from the forest and tripped over her self. The white purred in amusement. "We are the Tribe of Rushing Water and we come to talk with Thunderclan." Coalfur flicked her tail and spun around. Quickly she led them threw the green forest towards the Thunderclan camp.
If you think i should finish this then please let me know.
Coalfur hissed. The plump mouse she had been stalking dissappeared under the roots of a thick hawthorn tree. She drew herself up and glanced behind her. Her apprentice, Fernpaw, had stepped on a stick. The tiny tan she-cat was gultily hanging her head. Coalfur sighed. She wove around the the tree and lept over a fallen oak. She turned to call to her apprentice whan a strange scent wafted past her unusual pink nose. It smelled like clear air, fresh streams, mud, and most ominous, cats. By now Frenpaw had scrambled over the log and was standing at Coalfur's side. Both the she-cats gazed at eachother. Coalfur was going to send Fernpaw home to get help but they couldn't risk it now. If the cats were close by it could mean certain death. Coalfur flicked her smoky black tail and crept forward. She had only crept forward five tail lenth when she heard the sound of crunching sticks and dried leaves. At first she thought it her apprentice but when Coalfur glanced back the she-cat was just as surprised. Coalfur moved forward again. She came to a entire clan of cats. They were moving forward warly glanceing nervously form side to side. Huge broad shouldered cats surrounded thin sleek wiry cats along with kits, apprentices and elders. All of them had mud streaked down their sides, hiding the ture color of their pelts. The entire group was inching towards Thunderclan camp. They looked as if they had nver seen so many trees in their life. Coalfur lept out of the bushes then. She figured she could just run if they attacked. Instead relief shone in their eyes, as a huge tom stalked out from the head of the group. Hidden beneath the mud Coalfur could see a white pelt. He approached her and bent his head in a sign of respect. "Greetings." His voice sounded strange. But at least she could understand him. She dipped her head in return. Perhaps these cats were peaceful. "We are looking for Thunderclan." he meowed, "Have you seen them?" His green eyes locked on her own and she found that she couldn't look away. "I am Thunderclan." She meowed, "Who are you and what is your business here with us?" Jsut then Fernpaw emerged from the forest and tripped over her self. The white purred in amusement. "We are the Tribe of Rushing Water and we come to talk with Thunderclan." Coalfur flicked her tail and spun around. Quickly she led them threw the green forest towards the Thunderclan camp.
If you think i should finish this then please let me know.