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Post by frostclaw4ever on Feb 2, 2008 21:21:30 GMT -5
Title: New Beginning Chapters: Unknown Author: Frostclaw Pairing: CrowXFeather Rating: PG Spoilers: New Prophecy Summary: This is if feathertail never died in the cave, and if she lived, ever wonder what would happen? what would be different? I can't wait to see were my brain takes me! Warning: Well, I plan to kill stormfur in the next few chapters, I'm not sure when tho. I do love stormfur, but someone has to die, it's just part of almost every book Disclaimer: I do NOT own warriors! if i did every cat would have a cookie X3 Beta: None Cover: None yet( or ever, idk yet ) Author's Notes: I can't wait to see what happens, yes i know, it's my story, but i still will want to read it like i wasn't writing it. New Flight Chapter 1; Crowpaw Crowpaw's heart shattered as he heard a sicking crack as feathertail's body landed on the ground, now limp. Crowpaw yowled " Feathertail! " He raced over to her body, he said repeatedly " Feathertail, are you ok? " His heart was torn, stormfur raced to feathertail's body " Feathertail! " the tribe cats lingered over to see that sharptooth was dead, they smiled and cheered until they saw the limp she-cat. Stoneteller trotted over with brambleclaw, squirrelpaw, and tawnypelt. Stoneteller began to examine feathertail, Crowpaw watched, his heart aching. Unable to bare the thought of life without feathertail. He shook the thought away, She would make it, she had to. Crowpaw nosed feathertail's fur " wake up, please wake up " He suddenly heard a small whisper " crowpaw " He looked up quickly, feathertail's eyes were slits. His heart leaped, she was awake! that was a good sign! He licked her fur over and over until it looked more that brand new " Your ok! Thank Starclan! " She nodded and stormfur mewed, relief in his voice " Don't ever scare me like that again! i was sure mother was coming to take you away! " Feathertail rolled her eyes " you worry to much " Crowpaw purred as stoneteller worked on feathertail's wounds, Sharptooth was no more, feathertail was safe, and now they just had to finish their journey. Everything seemed to be going right, for now.
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Airilae-Chan
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Time for a return! And a new name <3
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Post by Airilae-Chan on Feb 2, 2008 21:33:28 GMT -5
Hm, its good so far. Continue soon!
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Post by frostclaw4ever on Feb 2, 2008 21:41:15 GMT -5
yay! people like it
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Post by frostclaw4ever on Feb 2, 2008 21:42:03 GMT -5
i just posted this not long ago, maybe 20 minutes, so i'll probly post another shapter by tuesday, most likely sooner.
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Post by frostclaw4ever on Feb 2, 2008 21:56:31 GMT -5
i ment to say chapter hehe
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Post by Frostclaw on Feb 2, 2008 22:23:24 GMT -5
I forgot to mention it involved BrambleXSquirrel and StormXBrooke, also there is some romance, I'm new to this thing, sorry about my mess up, which i hope i don't make often XD.
Suspicion Chapter 2; Stormfur
Stormfur licked feathertail's head, happy that she was safe. everyone seemed happy, no more worries, the journey ahead couldn't be as bad as sharptooth. He thought, would it be bad? worse that sharptooth, no. The idea left his mind. Everything seemed so peaceful that it didn't even seem like anything ever happened. Suddenly he heard feathertail wimpier and his attention turned right to her. Her eyes were pained as she looked at her right shoulder, it was broken and twisted in a sicking way. He winced, not able to even think of the pain. Crowpaw mewed frantically " feathertail? whats wrong? " stoneteller looked at feathertail's shoulder. " it's broken " squirrelpaw gasped a little. " don't worry, it'll mend soon enough, she just needs to work on it a little " squirrelpaw seemed to relax a little. Stormfur nodded, he was relived, feathertail always wanted to become a warrior, and now she could. Feathertail sighed in relief and laid down, wincing a little. Stormfur licked her sister's forehead and walked over to Brooke. He smiled " hello Brooke " her eyes shined " Hello Stormfur, how is feathertail? " Her eyes were concerned, and stormfur smiled again " she's fine, a broken shoulder but nothing that will stop her. " he laughed. Brooke purred and her eyes seemed to relax a bit " thats good, i was worried she might join toeh. " Stormfur had to think before remembering that toeh was their starclan. " yes, I'm very happy " Brooke purred " so are your Friends, especially crowpaw " Stormfur turned to see crowpaw licking feathertail's fur while he watched her sleep. Stormfur watched, unable to take his eyes off of crowpaw and feathertail. " Something wrong stormfur? " Brooke's voice was concerned. Stormfur shook his head " nothing, i think I'm just hungry, thats all. " She smiled. " then lets go hunting, we need the food anyway " Stormfur nodded and followed brooke out of the cave, watching crowpaw the whole time.
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Post by frostclaw4ever on Feb 2, 2008 23:10:27 GMT -5
New Surprise chapter 3; Brooke
Brooke walked into the forest, stormfur walking beside her. They froze and watched a Sunny spot in the dark forest, a mouse had crawled out and nibbled at a seed, they both watched. Soon a hawk grabbed the mouse as they launched forward, clawing and tearing at the hawk. It dropped the now dead mouse and grasped stormfur with it's sharp talons, He hissed. Brook launched at the hark, scoring at it's eyes, it dropped stormfur's body and began to fly away. She hissed and bit into it's neck, it now began to hurl toward the ground. she launched into a tree as the hawk collided with the ground with a thud. Brooke ran over to stormfur, his back fur was red with fresh blood and his head was bleeding from a head wound. He moaned and she gasped, she felt a pang of guilt and agony. She nosed him and he moaned more, she mewed as she grabbed him " don't worry, I'll get you back to camp " She dashed off, abandoning the dead hawk.
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Post by frostclaw4ever on Feb 3, 2008 15:20:06 GMT -5
New Problems Chapter 4; Tawnypelt
Tawnypelt licked her lips, the fresh taste of mouse on her tongue. She felt great, nothing seemed wrong, feathertail was sleeping peacefully, Squirrelpaw and brambleclaw were ranting about what to do next. " We should head out now, then we can get home sooner " brambleclaw mewed. " No, we need to be healed and at the top of our game before leaving " Squirrelpaw protested. Brambleclaw sighed " that could take moons! we need to finish our journey before anything worse happens " Tawnypelt sighed, they sounded like squabbling ducks. She knew she couldn't sleep with that racket " Would you be quiet! When feathertail wakes up we can see how she feels and see what she thinks we should do! " She heard squirrelpaw pad away annoyed, brambleclaw sighed and followed her " squirrelpaw " Tawnypelt rolled her eyes, what mouse-brained fools. She couldn't believe brambleclaw was even her brother, what a mouse-brain. She pricked her ears as Brooke ran in holding stormfur, tawnypelt trotted over to Brooke, stormfur, and the small group of cats that had gathered. Brooke's voice was alarmed and worried " and then the hawk dropped him! i wasn't sure what to do so i came back as fast as i could! " Brambleclaw mewed " what happened to the hawk? " " What does it matter?! Stormfur is injured! " Squirrelpaw mewed annoyed. Brambleclaw nodded slightly and moved so stoneteller could get through. Tawnypelt looked around at the cats, some of their face's were alarmed, most were calm, not worried by the hawks that lived in the territory. Tawnypelt growled as she saw crowpaw was still laying by feathertail " Crowpaw! What are you doing?! " he lifted his head from feathertail's fur and blinked. Tawnypelt filled with rage " Stormfur is hurt you know!! " crowpaw nodded " i don't see why to come over their, we are just in stoneteller's way. " Tawnypelt hissed " You are just a selfish little kit! All you care about is yourself! " She turned before crowpaw could say anything and dissapeared into the group of cats. She stood next to her brother and squirrelpaw, watching stoneteller work on stormfur's injuries. Stoneteller finally stood up after a moment " he just needs some rest, then his wounds should heal in a few days " Tawnypelt could hear brook sigh in relief. the small group of cats split apart after a moment, only brooke, stormfur, and tawnypelt were left. " it's a good thing he's OK " Brook mewed quietly as she sat next to stormfur. Tawnypelt nodded " we will be able to go on our journey soon enough " Brooke winced at the words, tawnypelt blinked " something wrong? " Brooke shook her head and looked up smiling " i think i just sat on a thorn in the forest, thats all " brooke looked back to the sleeping tom. Tawnypelt nodded and turned away, seeing the moon rising into the night sky.
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Post by frostclaw4ever on Feb 3, 2008 19:31:27 GMT -5
Broken Feather Chapter 5; Feathertail
Feathertail smiled at a young kit, the gray kit smiled back. " I'm feathertail " she purred, the kit's eyes grew with fear and she mewed " whats wrong? " She turned and saw a mountain lion launching toward them. Her eyes grew wide and she turned to run, then felt the ground disappear below her as she began to plummet into nothingness. She jolted awake, panting. a voice mewed " Feathertail? you OK? " the voice sounded concerned, she looked around and saw crowpaw, she nodded, relived the nightmare was over. " just a bad dream " she replied. Crowpaw nodded " OK " Feathertail looked around " so what happened while i was asleep " she felt crowpaw stiffen, something was wrong. She turned to crowpaw " what happened? " Crowpaw looked at the ground " stormfur was injured by a hawk " Her heart cracked " Is he OK?! were is he?! " she tried to scramble to her paws only to mew in pain and fall back to the ground, her shoulder was still broken. " Feathertail! be careful! are you OK? " She nodded " were is stormfur? how is he? " Crowpaw put his tail on her mouth " calm down, he's fine, just resting. He has a back wound and a small head wound, he's fine. " She relaxed " thats good. " He nodded and smiled " so how do you feel? " She sat up slowly, wincing a little. " I'm good, my shoulder is still broken tho. " He mewed " thats why you should be resting " She rolled her eyes and he laughed " i forget, nothing stops you " She nodded as brambleclaw padded over " hello feathertail, do you feel better? " Feathertail nodded " i feel much better, besides the broken shoulder " Brambleclaw nodded " when do you think you can leave? " before she could answer a sharp hiss sounded from behind her " You expect her to follow you with a broken shoulder?! " Crowpaw's voice was full of rage. Brambleclaw mewed " I'm only asking when she thinks she can leave, we want to leave as soon as possible. " Crowpaw growled at brambleclaw, brambleclaw just looked at feathertail " just tell me when you feel up to leaving " then he walked away. Feathertail sighed and turned to crowpaw " i can answer my own question's you know, I'm not mute! " He nodded " i just can't believe he wants you to walk about with an injured shoulder!! " He spat. She rolled her eyes, he was impossible. She limped over to the cave entrance and stared up at the crescent moon, hoping everything in riverclan was going smoothly.
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Post by Starry on Feb 4, 2008 19:01:36 GMT -5
Awesome Sage!!! ;D ;D More!!!
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Post by frostclaw4ever on Feb 4, 2008 19:35:58 GMT -5
Lol, sure star, and everyone else. Here is Chapter 6
Stormy Beginning Chapter 6; Brooke
Brooke laid next to stormfur, watching him sleep. She thought of the forest, how afraid she was of loosing him. She had realized that she loved him, She had a hidden fear tho, so hidden she couldn't figure it out. It was a fear, of something, maybe even someone, possibly both. She blinked away from her thoughts as Stormfur jolted awake " stormfur? " She mewed, worried if something was wrong. He looked at her " sorry, just a bad dream. " He smiled, She smiled also, unable to be sad around him. " Thats good " He stood up, slightly wincing from his back. " Be careful, don't make it worse " She mewed with the utmost concern. He laughed " I'm fine, don't worry about me, what about you? " He mewed, suddenly his eyes starring into hers, she felt warm all of a sudden and smiled " I'm fine, that hawk didn't stand a chance, to bad i forgot it in the forest. " He laughed again " aww, i wanted to eat it after what it did " They began to laugh. He mewed " should we go on another walk? our last one was ruined " She hesitated " but your back " He laughed again " I'm not that weak, lets go " he began to walk away and she reluctantly followed. They walked side by side into the forest, She made up her mind and was about to talk when he began to speak. " It's so nice out, I'm glad it's not stormy " He was watching the blue sky, a few clouds beginning to drift above them. She nodded " it might storm soon tho, the clouds are coming quite quickly " He smiled " you worry to much " She smiled and said " can i tell you something? " Things were already racing in her mind. " Sure " He replied. She took a deep breath and was about to begin when tawnypelt walked in " Hey you two, we've been looking all over for you, we need you back at camp stormfur. Brambleclaw wants to see if we can leave, and if not now, when we will. " Stormfur nodded " ok tawnypelt, I'll be there soon, tell them I'm coming " She nodded and walked away. Brooke waited until tawnypelt disappeared fully before saying " i love you stormfur! "
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Post by Starry on Feb 5, 2008 18:17:32 GMT -5
Fantabulous!! ;D ;D ;D XD that face is cute
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Post by frostclaw4ever on Feb 6, 2008 0:00:17 GMT -5
well, here you go. hope you enjoy.
New Start Chapter 7; Stormfur
Stormfur blinked, he turned to face brooke, her eyes shining. With worry and fear, then a hint of sadness as the seconds ticked by. They stared at each other for what seamed an eternity, Thoughts racing through his mind. " brooke I " Brooke kept staring at him, as if tho in the next moment he would be gone. " I love you to " Brooke smiled and relief pored into her eyes. " for a moment i though you didn't love me " He smiled " how could i not love you? " They touched noses, her eyes joyful. " We should go back to camp, they are waiting for me " Her eyes then glazed with an icy sadness. " But... that means that you'll leave me and the tribe " He realized she was right, he would be leaving. " Don't worry, i will come back. No matter how far i will have to travel. " she smiled and nodded, but her eyes were still the same. They walked back to the cave, the journeying cats were grouped together. Stormfur licked brooke's ear and walked over to them " I could come with you, i can handle it " Feathertail's kind voice mewed. Then he could see the gray body of crowpaw wince a little, obviously worried. " No you should stay here feathertail, it will be safer and you won't have to travel far, also it would help if you Don't walk on your shoulder much, not Go on a journey. Feathertail's tail twitched, annoyed. Brambleclaw nodded " then we will leave at sunrise " They all nodded, then split up into different groups and places. " What a bunch of mouse-brains they are " Tawnypelt's annoyed mew sounded from behind him. He laughed a little and turned to her " Yea, you could say that " She flicked her tail " Worried about nothing, honestly, it will be easier on the way back because we know were to go " He agreed " yea, now we know what to watch out for " Tawnypelt nodded " well, i'm gonna go rest. Gotta be ready for sunrise " He nodded and tawnypelt walked away. Stormfur got up and saw brooke not far away, he could tell she heard the whole conversation. " Brooke, don't worry. like i said, i'll be back before you know it. " He walked over and licked her cheek, she nodded " I know, but... it's going to be a long journey, and with many cats with you it will take longer than if you went alone. " She had a point. " but we would be safer and more protected, also we know which way to come now " She nodded, licked his ear and mewed quietly " would you like to get a mouse and then rest? your going to have a long journey back to your home " her voice sounded hurt, but he had to go " sure " Even though brooke would be pained, he knew they would be back.
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Post by Starry on Feb 6, 2008 6:12:14 GMT -5
Awesomeness Sage! ;D
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Post by frostclaw4ever on Feb 6, 2008 15:50:06 GMT -5
ty, i'll try to post more. i'll post the next chapter later today
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