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Post by shadow on Nov 3, 2007 18:59:46 GMT -5
Title: The Last Blood of the Cheetahs Chapters: A lot Author: Me. Pairing: Floating & ( not gonna tell ya!) Spoilers: Um, Secrets of the Clans Summary: Floatingpetal is the last warrior to carry the blood of the cheetahs in her veins. Long ago, when Tigerclan, Lionclan and Leopardclan roamed the forest, there was another clan, Cheetahclan. But much like what happened to Skyclan, Cheetahclan was driven out. Floatingpetal has been the target of many cats ever since the day she was born. On the day she was born her parents, both warriors with the blood of cheetahs, were brutally killed along with her brother. They were killed by warriors who carry the blood of the lions. Floatingpetal must stay alive. Warning: Romance, drama, tradedgy... Death, viloence. Disclaimer: Omg I sooo don't own warriors if I did, Willowpelt would have been having Runningwind's kits, and Mousefur would have had Whitestorm's. Beta: None Cover: None
Ancient Tigerclan-
Leader: Darkeningstar- fearsome blood red tom with pitch black stripes and black eyes ( mate of Fadingpelt)
Deputy: Blackstripe- orange tom with deep brown stripes and olive eyes ( younger brother of Darkeningstar)
Medicine Cat: Witheringflower- frail small pale orange she-cat with pale black stripes and blue eyes
Warriors:
Fightingchance- handsome tiger tom with fog colored eyes
Fiercesoul-twin of Fightingchance
Braveheart- incredibly handsome tom with a golden pelt and black stripes with green eyes
Watching Queens( she-cats that watch over the alpha female's kits)-
Everheart- peaceful she-cat tiger with grass colored eyes
Castedshadow- she-cat tiger with yellow eyes
Queen-
Fadingpelt- pure white tiger with jet black stripes and striking ice blue eyes
Kits-
Thrushkit- tiny white tiger female
Whitekit- large white tiger male ( future leader)
Ancient Leopardclan-
Leader: Troutstar- handsome tom leopard with red eyes ( mate of Twilightmoon)
Deputy: Shallowpool- handsome leopard tom with grey eyes( brother of Troutstar)
Medicine Cat: Goldentail- pretty she-cat leopard with green eyes
Warriors:
Singedheart- light bronze colored leopard tom with moss colored eyes
Fallentree- big brown colored leopard tom with amber eyes
Nighthingycher- handsome black leopard tom withdarker black spots and blue eyes
Watching Queens:
Duskcloud- tiny leopard female with ebony eyes
Starshimmer-beautiful leopard female with fawn colored eyes
Queen ( or Alpha Female):
Twilightpool- drop dead gorgeous silver snow leopard with lime green eyes
Kits:
Fishkit- large black leopard tom- kit with grey eyes ( very future leader)
Minnowkit- copy of her mother
Lionclan-
Leader: Sunstar- huge amber colored tom with gentle green eyes ( mate of Sundance)
Deputy: Copperheart- copper colored tom with hazel colored eyes ( eldest son of Sunstar and Sundance)
Medicine Cat: Moonlight- golden, silver she-cat with clear gold eyes
Warriors:
Goldenflame- giant lion with cold gray eyes
Fallenleaf- golden brown tom with big blue eyes
Fieldgrass- soft gold tom with grey eyes
Lionclaw- golden tom with black eyes
Ambernight- amber, gold tom with almond brown eyes
Firelight- large gold tom with cold black eyes
Watching Queens:
Honeypetal- light gold she-cat with green eyes
Hazeleyes- gold she-cat with purple eyes
Alpha Queen:
Sundance- most beautiful she-cat with a golden pelt tinged in bronze and green eyes
Kits:
Ivorykit- handsome white tom with blue eyes
Winterkit- beautiful white she-cat with blue eyes
Ancient CheetahClan
Leader: Risingstar- handsome tom with gold pelt speckled by glossy black spots with brown eyes ( Mate of Spottedpelt)
Deputy: Cheetahflight- incredibly handsome cheetah tom with wild green eyes ( lover of Amberlight)
Medicine Cat- Longpoppy- very tall, skinny golden and black spotted she-cat with yellow eyes
Warriors:
Darkpelt- tom with a dark ginger pelt, dotted with black with flame colored orange eyes.
Flyingfeet- very fast golden and black tom with dark blue eyes
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Post by shadow on Nov 4, 2007 17:50:27 GMT -5
Prolouge Last Breath
Soft songs aroused from the still standing forest. It was all a perfect symphony. Every forest thing was chiming in to the warm, peaceful melody. Water of a waterfall fell to the awaiting pool, the birds chirping their fast paced happy tunes, the trees whisping to each other through their near leafless branches, the leaves that rustled softly on the ground as the wind swept them up, and the sound of the wind whistling past them all. Dancing to a sweet song, no one could hear. In the sky set the fat bright yellow sun, around it colors that differed from the warmest orange to the softest purple radiated. Across from the breath-taking sunset was the silver round moon, and around it a light navy sky with few twinkling stars. A perfect scenery for the perfect song of nature. This was almost a perfect forest night, if it wasn't for the hideous plot distant relatives of Lionclan were planning to do.
Muffled noises of cats voices traveled to my awaiting ears we were hidden, but oh so close to them. The largest, Goldenflame snapped his head toward the bush we were hiding behind. He looked directly at me, but he must not have seen my fearful eyes. " Cheetahflight." I cried in a barely audible voice to the tom who I was pressing myself into, my mate. I could feel pain in my stomach, as the tiny bodies of our near-born children squirmed in their protests to our delay. My faithful soul mate licked me and I slipped my muzzle beneath his chin. We are going to die, I know it. I told myself. One of the males nearest to us, Firelight, I think his name was, heard my barely audible voice.
" AhHHHH!" His voice rose to a shrill cry of triumph. " GOLDENFLAME!! " His voice echoed throughout the woods, " I FOUND THE TRAITORS! FOUND 'EM!" He began at a pace so slow to me it seemed like I had no need to be running for my life. But I found myself trailing on my mate's paws; running not for my life, but for the lives of my kits. I had to get far away, far enough away from them to where I could have my kits and hide them. It only took seconds to break far enough away from them to where we were safe.
Cheetahflight stopped abrubtly, " Amberlight, hurry behind that waterfall!" he commanded I obeyed willingly and slipped beneath the light water. Entering the dark cave I realized this was the cave that Cheetahflight's sister lived. I shot toward a dark crag in the rocks. I huddled myself in to it, thanking Starclan there was enough room for me and my kits. Cheetahflight braced his body over the small cave I was nestled in.
" Cheetahflight?" A soft voice drifted from a space between the cave roof and the highest rock clearing. A cream and cheetah pelted face with twinkling green eyes peered over the rigde.
Cheetahflight's stone face softened for his younger sister, " Yes, Ripplingbrook, it is Amberlight and I. I am sorry, I fear I have brought trouble to your cave, we are being chased by cats who carry Lion blood."
Ripplingbrook's young face crinkled into folds of confusement, " Hurry, you and Amberlight get up here!"
He nodded and raced for me, " No!" I screeched softly, " To-...Late!" I cried in pain as the two kits that would probably be the last warriors to carry the blood of the Cheetahs were born.
Ripplingbrook was in tears now, " Up here! Get up HERE!" she called in a tense voice.
Cheetahflight dashed for me just as Goldenflame and his group of Lions entered. An evil smile broke out on his amber-golden face, " Ha,ha,ha. Looks like 'ittle Cheetahs are gonna die!" He laughed and the others joined in. I watched in terror as Ripplingbrook mouthed, " Bring the kits to me!" I nodded.
Cheetahflight yowled in rage and leaped with teeth bared and claws unsheathed at the nearest tom. While Goldenflame and the others were completley distracted I made a made scramble out of the crack and up toward Ripplingbrook. She grasped the first kit gently and turned to race away, but stopped.
" Wait! What are you naming this little girl?" she smiled down at my daughter.
Fury flamed up in my throat, " Does it matter?" I screamed. My little burst of anger drew that tom Firelight's attention. His gaze shot toward me. I pressed closer to the wall of rock I was up against. The tom kit mewled sadly giving away my hiding place. Firelight lumbered toward me and jumped at me. We were both trapped and I could either save my life or my son's life. Madly I picked my son up, but Firelight lashed out at me, scoring his big claws down my shoulder ripping chunks of fur of. I didn't care, and just tried to toss the kit up to safety, but as the blood started to flow I began to feel dizzy. I turned around slowly and feebly raised my paws with my kit in my mouth. Firelight cheerfully thrust his bodyweight at me.I could hear the sheepish cries as my son was muffled beneath the massive weight.
Miracuously Cheetahflight jumped and knocked Firelight off me. My son was half dead already. " Cheetahflight!" I sobbed, " Name him now!" I demanded through my tears.
He gave me a weary look," Name him Cheetahkit in our honor!"
In that brief moment I was glancing at Cheetahkit I noticed he had a long gash in his side from Firelight's razor blades. He was dead. I let out a long wail. " NO!" I hurled my body on top of my son cuddling him close to my body. I left Cheetahkit there on the ledge. I would mourn him later, for now, I was out to kill Firelight. To my dismay the tom was already sprawled out on the floor dead. Cheetahflight had killed almost half of them. Only four were left. Goldenflame and his three largest minions. I was at my mates side before he could blink.
Cheetahflight smiled at me with a loving, yet pained look, " For a queen who just gave birth you fight as well as me!" He laughed at his thingyiness. Then seriously added," I love you.." And he glanced up at the limp little body of cheetahkit, silently telling me he knew.
I nodded," I love you too." Then we turned as one and with a great battlecry we raced into the group of Lions. When we fought as a pair was when we fought our best, and soon only Goldenflame was left. But the hateful glint in his eyes let me know he meant business now.
" DIE!" He screeched and flung himself down on Cheetahflight. I watched in wretched horror as they fought. But the huge Lion swatted Cheetahflight's light and slender body to the side. While my mate was knocked out Goldenflame took advantage of the situation and lumbered toward him. I stole a glance at Ripplingbrook. The elegant she-cat's perfect face was crumpled and tears stained her milky fur. I couldn't stand it.
" No!" I whimpered and thrust myself toward him. And as Goldenflame bit down to bite Cheetahflight's neck he got mine instead. I could feel his teeth as the warm blood gurgle past his cold fangs. " Uh-Uh-ugh-uuughhh. Noogh" I panted as I hit the ground.
Goldenflame shrugged his shoulders and brought his weight down on Cheetahflight's body. I could hear the cracks and the tear-jerking scream. But they sounded so far away. Goldenflame chuckled and merely strolled out of the cave. I feebly lifted my head and eyed Cheetahflight who was laying crushed on the floor, thanking Starclan that his sides still fell up and down. I inched closer and closer to him so I could be with him when I died.
" Amberflight!" His voice cracked in pain as he wiggled his paralyzed body to wrap around mine. It came out sounding like " Ambuhflit!" Though.
Ripplingbrook face was so crinkled I wanted to laugh and tease her that it would freeze that way." What are you going to name your daughter?" She wailed, but it sounded more like, " What- sobs- re yo- sobs- oing tu- more sobs- name you- sobs- aughter?"
Using all the breath I could manage I wheezed, " Floatingkit - cough- because my heart floats at the thought- coughs- at the thought that she might be the one to save Cheetahs." I turned my head to look at Cheetahflight one more time. " I love you," I mouthed weakly and he replied the same. I pressed my head against his chest, and we both died.
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Post by shadow on Nov 9, 2007 19:38:42 GMT -5
Chapter 1 The Last Cheetah
An overly beautiful lithe Windclan she-cat with a silk, sleek pelt weaved her perfectly formed body through the group of cats. All of whom were very distantly related to her, but so distant, her family's royal bood had dried out long long ago in their families. She was the only Windclan cat that carried the blood of the last leader of Cheetahclan in her veins. It flowed so freely and purely, that the upper part of her face, chest and paws were all printed with the prized pelt of Cheetahclan. " Congratulations Floatingpetal!" murmurs whispered all around her. But groups of Thunderclan, Riverclan and Shadowclan cats all carried on with their immature conversations. As she passed some Thunderclan cats she overheard them saying, " What make her so special? She is just a princess! Not a princess even. Just 'cause she looks like a cheetah doesn't mean she has the right to sit with the Leaders!" The she-cat rolled her piercing blue eyes and smoothed her cream fur. Her leader, Runningstar had called her up to sit with her because she had recently been made a warrior. When she reached the wiry tabby she perched herself on a low lying branch between Tealstar and Runningstar.
I could tell I fitted right in among the leaders. All of which were descendents of the big cats. Each big cat had found their own clans, Cheetahclan fitted in perfectly among the speedy Windclan cats, Tigerclan rejoiced in becoming Shadowclan, Leaopardclan with their fishing talents were content with Riverclan, and Lionclan the clan that killed my parents, my aunt, and my brother. Even though I trembled when I looked at the massive tabby who was leader of Thunderclan, I knew that somewhere in his deep twin pools of amber their resided the gentleness and love that the great leaders Sunstar and Copperstar of Lionclan had shown.
Tealstar, the petite silver and white she-cat with teal eyes stood up first. Even for an overly- well fed leader, she managed to stay thin. " Riverclan is doing fine. We have our newest apprentices here today," her silky voice drifted to my ears and I stole a quick gance at the three new apprentices. " My son, Leopardpaw, my other son, Newtpaw and my daughter Rainpaw. " She said proudly. A large black tom stood near them, he was showing as much pride as Tealstar, The father.
I quickly could tell which name was who. Leopardpaw was the handsome leopard pelted tom, coutesy of the last fully leopard blooded leader, Leopardstar. Newtpaw was a black tom with a brown paw. Rainpaw clearly resembled her mother.
The bold Riverclan leader was the the third female leader her clan had ever had. As Risingstar, leaderof Thunderclan raised to speak the she-cat interrupted him, " We have two new queens and my mate, Blackestriver fought off a badger. He chased it to Shadowclan territory, so you might want to watch out Mountainstar." Her voice grew sharp and cold as she addressed the chocolate brown tom.
Yowls of anger sounded off from the scattered group of Shadowclan cats. With a stern gaze, Mountainstar silenced them, " Thank you Blackestriver for chasing it into our territory. " Floatingpetal felt a small bit of admiration for the leader, he was one of the only Shadowclan leader who referred to Shadowclan territory as belonging to all Shadowclan cats, not just himself.
I watched with a regal posture as Blackestriver gave a modest grin, " Anytime." His voice was as rough as his looks.
Mountainstar flicked his tail at the bold remark, " Where was I? Oh yes, Shadowclan has one new litter of kits, and two new warriors. As most of you know, my deputy Burntleaf died from a mysterious death. Now thanks to Blackestriver I know who did it." He glared softly at Tealstar who shrunk under his mature gaze.
" Eh- Hem!" an annoyed voice demanded. All eyes turned to rest upon the firery gold tom. Risingstar smiled deviously in spite of himself for grasping everyone's attention, " Floatingpetal, I know all my clan rejoices that you live. Don't we?" his voice hardened as he faced his scattered clanmates. " Don't we?" He repeated louder.
" Oh yes!" 's and ," Of course sir!"'s rolled off the grumpy Thunderclan cat's tongues.
Satisfied, the beastly tom faced me, then switched to face the whole group of cats, " Thunderclan is thriving this Leaf-fall. We are lucky to have the most prey we have had in seasons! Thank's to the extra supply of food, we have three pregnant queens, and all apprentices and elders are getting well-fed." He said with dignity.
I swiveled my head to see Runningstar roll her sea-green eyes. I struggled to maintain my want to laugh. Runningstar gracefully stood, " Windclan is doing well too. We have a gorgeus new warrior, Floatingpetal and a handsome new warrior, Fogheart."
As she continued on about Windclan's welfare, I locked eyes with my best friend Fogheart. He didn't look like me, but I was closer then him then I was to my aunt Ripplingbrook before she died during kit-birth. Fogheart had a pale grey and light blue pelt mixed in with cream and dusty brown. He had a pure pelt of fog, hence his name. But his eyes were what mystified me, they were wide and showed an innocentcy but behind that there was a mischievious, rebel. All of that was contained in his handsome pools of striking bright green.
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Post by shadow on Nov 11, 2007 11:50:15 GMT -5
Chapter 2 After the Gathering
I drifted along beside the small group of Windclan cats. Some walking, some jogging, and some running. But they all moved as one. Each step was part of a dance that no one could hear except for themselves. I glanced over at Fogheart. He ran alone and seemed bored. I decidedto spice up this boring trip home and picked my way toward him.
" Hey Fogheart." I purred and blushed at the same time. almost everyone knew he liked me and I liked him.
Fogheart turned but kept his pace and smiled, " Hey Floatingpetal. I was watching you during the Gathering you looked spectacular." He instantly wanted to bite his tongue after saying that.
" Thank you, I was watching you too. You looked handsome!' I laughed and he nudged me out of the way of an upcoming bush.
I blushed, " Sorry, and thanks."
" Aw, it nothin'. Hey, normally you are not so uncordinated.' He playfully ran his tail over my back.
I tingled and wanted to savor every touch he had given me in the past minutes. Even the bruise I had in my shoulder from when he shoved me out of the way of the bush. I just giggled, gave him a sultry look and shouted, " I bet I can beat you to camp!"
Before he could accept I shouted, " Ready, Set, GO!" I shot away from him.
" Hey no fair!" he chuckled and raced after me.
I turned to stick my tongue out at him and before I could, I tripped over a small rock. My crash landing sent me rolling into the middle of camp.
Fogheart had fallen too and was rolloing right on behind me. We were both laughing hysterically and the senior warriors and elders were rolling their eyes at us. I silently wished my aunt was with me, she had an excellent sense of humor and could make even the most depressed widower laugh.
Suddenly Fogheart and I collided, we were both rolling as one, when we finally stopped, he was on top of me. We both fell silent then he shook his pelt and gently stepped off me.
" Sorry." he mumbled and helped me up.
When we were both sitting up we stared at each other for a while and then I swiftly licked him. We both fell on our back and began to laugh again.
" We are soooo immature for warriors!" I shook off my pelt and stood up.
" Yes I know!" he chuckled and followed me. Before we knew it, we were sharing a rabbit under the sunset with our tails intertwined.
" Floatingpetal!" three tiny voices squealed and I whipped my head around to see Runningstar's three kits barreling toward me with their tired mother and father at their heels.
The youngest, a large black tom with black fur and a white patch around his eye reached me first.
" Hey Sleekkit!" I purred and glanced at Fogheart to see if he was watching me.
The black and white tom was almost exactly like his father. Tall, and slim. But he had a completley opposite personality. Sleekkit was tough, but he was the of the group. He was more sensitive then his feisty sisters, but he loved to join in their fights.
" Hey!" he called back as his sister tackled him and they started to fight.
Blazingfire, their father caught up to them and scooped up his daughter like freshkill.
" Hey Robinkit!" I purred as the middle kit stumbled toward me. Sorrow pulled at my heart as I gazed at her hazy blue eyes. She had been born blind, I felt terribly for her because she was always being picked on. Luckily she had two siblings and fierce parents to stand up for her.
Robinkit beamed at me and shot toward my voice. She had a beautiful cherry red-brown pelt that glistened in the sun. She had a cheerful personality and was the most thoughtful of the litter.
" Hey Floatingpetal!" She cried and raced toward me, colliding with my tail and stumbling into my chest where she began playing with my fur.
" Ugh!" Runningstar grumbled and sondered toward me.
" Sorry Floatingpetal and Fogheart. But you know how playful the kits are." Blazingfire apologized as he wrestled Sleekkit and Mintkit.
Mintkit was the eldest of the three. She had a beautiful cream pelt that was coverd in chocolate brown stripes that matched her mint green eyes. Mintkit was the feisty kit. Her answer to every dilema was a battle. That's what she enjoyed most; battles and winning.
But Floatingpetal managed to find some love in her heart for the battle-loving she-kit.
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Post by Tigerfur on Nov 16, 2007 16:17:32 GMT -5
This story is EXCELLENT! I hope you update again soon! ;D
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Post by shadow on Nov 17, 2007 19:50:53 GMT -5
Chapter 3 A Robin Spreads her Wings
Nothing. No, Nothing at all...
Pathetic, it is what I see every day. Nothing. Absoloutley noothing! It is soooo terrible, unfair and terrible. There was nothing wrong with my parents, nor my grandparents, nor my siblings. Just little ole, Robinkit.
As I blinked open my sleep-deprived eyes, I was welcomed by the usual. Nothing. I could feel the warm bodies of my siblings as they snored on beside me. I knew who they wore, I just would never know what they looked like. Of, corse they could tell me but it wasn't the same.
Mintkit just said she was prettier then me, and Sleekkit declared he was black. Wow, what good, detailed summaries those were.
But not everyone in the clan was like that, especially my parents, who spent most of their time describing things to me with much detail.
I loved them dearly, even Sleekkit and Mintkit sometimes, but they aren't the one who describe things the best, no its the she-cat Floatingpetal. My best friend.
She described me as a below average sized kit with a pelt as bright red as cherries, mixed in with a softness of deep brown. but when she described my eyes I felt like I could actually see them, as if I was staring into a pool, gawking at my own reflection.
She said my eyes were wide, full of curiousity and brimming with youthful joy. she told me my eyes were layered, the bottom layer of my iris's she had said was cream, the next pale blue, then the next brighter blue, yet still soft. Then the next she said was the lovliest, with silver flecks that sparkled.
I also loved the way she described my family, Runningstar, she had said was elegant and muscular, with a wiry brown pelt that matched her complex one green eye and one black eye. Blazingfire, was a strong firey orange tom with a palyful glint in his amber eyes. Sleekkit, was perfectly black and white. Mintkit, a pretty cream and dark brown tabby with a love of fighting.
The way Floatingpetal described them, it was as if I could actually see them just as clearly as she could.
I aroused to my paws and jammed my paw into the burlier body to my left. I giggled softly, evven though Mintkit was more active then are lazy, go-lucky brother, she would never have the perfectly muscular body of a tom.
Sleekkit sat abrupt and mewed, " Wha? Wha Robinkit?"
I laughed and used my best judgement to determine where he was and shoved him in the shoulder, I missed and got him in the chest though.
By this time Sleekkit was fully awake, he gave my face an affectionate lick, " Wanna a go'n play?"
" Don't no, what is the weather like?" I snapped.
" Oh, uh its pretty clear," He said softly.
" Well then come awn!" I tackled him to let him no I wasn't upset.
Quickly the tom rose to his feet, then he began to walk at a steady pace in front of me, laying his coarse tail on my back to lead me. I made no effort to shrug it off for I was not in the mood to play heart-mender today. Instead I held my cherry-brown head parallel to the ground and pranced along behind him. Sweeping my feet gracefully off the ground and staring straight at the heated bodies I felt around me.
It pleased me when I caused the warriors and apprentices to rethink my being blind, it gave a blind kit like me higher self esteem.
" Sleekkit," I purred, " Where are you taking me brother?"
The black and white tom never moved his head, just kept walking forward while he talked, " I am taking you to the hill where mother and father fell in love to see Shimmerkit and Bronzekit!" he laughed.
I thingyed my head, " Whooo are they?" I racked my thoughts trying to find a trace of the names somewhere inside them, but I did not.
Sleekkit shook his well groomed head, " They are the kits that were born a day before us, you have just never seen them-"
I felt my sightless orbs tighten with contained fury, " You know I can not see!" I hissed through my white fangs.
He flinched away from my stinging words, " Sorry, you just do not know them because Mom keeps us in her den."
I nodded and quickened my pace. Silently I imagined what my brother was seeing, Hmmmm maybe there were few sparse trees with bare leaves and glistening white bark, they casted illuminous shadows on the springy, lively, bright green grass, several leafless bushes dotted the rolling hills and cast a faint line between the grass and the periwinkle blue skies that held wispy white clouds.
" ..... and its cool that Mintkit like him cause, she is picky ya know. But its not unusual for me to like Shimmerkit 'cause she is soo pretty and all." He interrupted my detailed imaginings and brought me quickly back into the real world.
I suddenly felt a flow of adrenaline race through my body... " ...and its cool that Mintkit likes him cause, she is picky ya know." Was what Sleekkit had stated. Woah!! Wait, Mintkit, Mintkit?! my sister liked someone?! This was too amazing, my brilliantly choicy, snob of a sister liked someone! This meant he had to be drop dead handsome!
" Wait!" I cried gleefully, " What does Bronzekit look like?" I wanted to laugh at how I sounded, like a giddy flirty apprentice.
" He is a handsome bronze tom, with a real flow-y pelt. His eyes," Sleekkit shuddered momentarily, " they are black, coal black! But around the edges there are flecks of gold. Sometimes, his eyes change color, ranging from glitter-y topaz to a sullen gold. He has pretty dark rings under his eyes and is muscular."
Imagining him as my brother described him was almost like seeing him.
A lanky, semi muscular tom with a runners body and gangly unusually cold limbs, coated in a pelt of bronze, fit for even the cats of Starclan. Strands of his shaggy, yet wonderfully silky fur whipped about as his black, or gold eyes flickered. Heavy circles hung under his perfect eyes, as if he had not slept in a while and a perfect, heart-melting crooked smile on his godly face.
" Shimmerkit is prettier though," he stopped and tentively looked around, " She has pretty sparkling blue eyes, a silver pelt and she likes me!" he declared proudly.
" HA!" I cackled, " Shimmerkit likes you?!" I laughed heartily at the ridiculous thought, " Yeah, of course she does!"
Abrubtly I stopped as scents of other cats wafted to my nose and I felt hot blood prickle beneath my now rosy cheeks.
" Actually I do," a honey sweet voice drifted my way, " Sleekkit is my best friend."
I imagined the silver she cat with a hurt look on her angel-like face and her sparkling blue eyes possessing worry and distress.
Sleekkit instantly broke away from me to greet her. I felt alone, my guide had left me and anger swelled inside me. But if there was one thing blindness taught me,it was to bottle all your feelings inside. That way you would not be hurting other people.
A sturdy figure bent down toward me and I caught a better whiff of the tom.
Oh and Holy Starclan did I like it! He smelled better than anything I had ever smelled. Just smelling him made me want to be closer to him and press my nose into his inviting aroma that floated inside his fur.
" Hey," came the voice of an angel, only driving me closer to madness, causing me to become wobbly and dizzy.
" Uhhhhh, heeeyy," I tried to purr but my voice came out as a dry meow.
He pressed himself against me in a friendly way, only I wished there was more than newfound friendship between us, " I am Bronzekit,and I believe your name is Robinkit."
OH, hearing him say my name was the worst. I felt like my entire insides were crumpling and giant fluttering wings were spreading and forming on my heart. So I spread my wings and tried to act confident, by puffingout my chest, batting my cloudy blue eyes, and trying to cause the lust in my fur to glisten.
" I belieeeve you are correct,"
" I believe I am, so have you met my sister?"
" No, but Sleekkit has been filling me in."
" Ha, I thought he would, he a huge infatuation with her, and vice versa. Shimmerkit claims she is in love. " he paused and I swear he looked my way, " And she's so lucky too, because she found her soul mate so young. And me? well I know I am never going to have a mate. I just feel like I will never meet the right she-cat,"
" Maybe you just are not looking hard enough, maybe there is a she-cat you know who would be just right for a tom like you."
I swear a crooked smile broke across his face and it brought me back to my previous fantasy of him on the hilltop, waiting for me.
The bronze tom licked my cheek and I blushed deeply, " Ya never know, ya never know," he sweetly purred into my ear.
If none of you noticed, or have ever read the Twilight series: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, and upcoming Breaking Dawn, you would not know that Bronzekit represents Edward, Robinkit represents Bella, Shimmerkit represents Alice, Sleekkit represents Jasper, and Mintkit represents Rosalie.
But none of them are vampires.
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Post by shadow on Nov 29, 2007 18:22:15 GMT -5
Chapter 4 What I am here For
I stood alone on SkyRidge, the beautiful ivory rock was now used as the place where I called my gatherings. It was much nicer than the old limestone rock I used to stand on. This one was large and stood out amongst the quiet background. The rock was ivory white, and pale, lucious green vines crept their way up to the Depuy's ledge and my sitting place. The Deputy's Ledge was a nice, roomy ledge lined with soft, bouncy pale green moss. My seat was much nicer though, it was completley flat and could fit all my family, it was lined with the same moss, yet the outer edges were decorated niceley with purple flowers. At the bottom of the SkyRidge sat a reflecting pool lined by huge slabs of dark teal rock. Just a few inches below my seat, crystal clear water gurgled out and streamed into the reflecting pool, yet it was so soft and clam it made no noise and caused but the smallest ripple.
I gazed sleepily at my reflection. Secretly I was glad that Robinkit was blind, that way she did not have to know how much a fool I looked.
My pale, wiry brown fur never stayed down in the right places, and always stood up in tufts on the top of my head. I knew I had to be pretty, how else would I had gotten a mate as good and handsome as Blazingfire?
I guess if you took the time to look for my hidden beauty, you would find it.
My fur was the richest shade of misty brown, I had the most muscular, curvy figure out of all the older she-cats, and best of all my eyes were a breath taking sea green.
I was so focused on my reflection I did not even notice my mate Blazingfire leap up beside me.
" Hey dear," He hummed into my ear.
I flicked my bushy tail in greeting. and rolled over on my back so I could face him. I met his cold grey eyes and sat up and pressed myself into his warm flame orange fur.
" The kits are being hyper." He stated.
" Ooh," I pretended to be suprised, " Oh and do not tell me, Mintkit attacked Robinkit, Sleekkit tried to break the fight up and now they are all squabbling!"
I could hear the sarcastic sigh he made and licked him, " You, my dearest Runningstar, are much to good at this for a first time queen."
" Yeah, I know!"
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Post by Mosspath on Dec 2, 2007 12:25:37 GMT -5
Please continue!
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Post by Larelpelt on Jan 23, 2008 22:15:17 GMT -5
That was sooooo awsome! Please keep writing! You've combined my two all time fave series: WARRIORS and Twilight! YAY YOU! ;D
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shadow
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Post by shadow on Jan 24, 2008 17:17:47 GMT -5
Sorry put the wrong chapter on the wrong story!
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Post by RainehChan on Mar 23, 2008 20:34:43 GMT -5
0.o Did I just fall in love with Bronzekit? lol, but seriously, amazing story Dovey. You really should keep it going, I want to know what happens!
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