Starting a Village }{ Adventure

[Shadowstar]

Soot, he sounds the most sarcastic.

[Minty]

I finally figured out a way to get my chapters on my computer to my parent's computer. I've been typing like mad, so I'll put all the chapters from my computer to here.

Chapter 7

One of the cats, a big red one, lunged at Tin-Tin.
He kicked out and flipped the cat over in one fluid motion.
"Wait!" shouted the red cat to the other cat, a yellow kitten who was looking at the ground.
"They are not Flesh and his commrads!" the red cat continued.
"Who?" asked Soot.
"Nothing," said the red one quickly "By the way, I'm Bunk and this is Ben" he said pointing to the yellow kitten.
"Soot, Tin-Tin, Brownie and Callie" said Soot pointing to each of them in turn.
"We are making a village just for cats, do you want to join?" asked Tin-Tin.
"Yes please," said Ben politely.
"Well, I'm sleeping now!" announced Soot.
"Thanks for the announcement," said Tin-Tin, rolling his eyes and curling up next to Callie.

Soot got up at the crack of dawn and hunted a while. He froze when he heard paw steps, but it was only Ben.
"Hey, let me help you," Ben offered.
"Be my guest!" Soot replied.
Soon, they returned with tons of food.
"Hey, there you are," Callie said.
"Hey, here's a mouse," Soot replied.
Then, they all worked gluing bricks together to make buildings.
"This will be where our leader sleeps," Tin-Tin explained after they had finished a building.
"Who's that?" asked Soot.
"We'll all vote in a couple of days," Tin-Tin replied.
"Where's Brownie?" asked Callie suddenly.
"What do you mean?" Tin-Tin asked.
"He's gone!" Soot exclaimed.
"Nonsense!" Tin-Tin snapped" Let's go back to the sleeping area and wait for him,"
They all agreed, so they went to sleep.

But, Brownie never came back and the moon was soon up.
Tin-Tin went to sleep and woke up every 10 minutes to see if Brownie was back. Still, Brownie never showed up.


Chapter 8:

"It's Monster Night!" exclaimed Soot joyfully the next morning.
"Well we're searching for Brownie," Tin-Tin replied.
"I know but . . ." Soot began, but Tin-Tin cut him off.
"WE ARE!" he boomed.
"Ok,Ok" Soot muttered.

Meanwhile, Brownie was stuck in a cage in cat jail!
It was a small enclosed room with a door that had no crack. In one corner, there was a sink.
"No! Get me outta here!" Brownie shouted.
"There is no way out of these cages," said a wise voice beside him.
He turned to see a Siamese in a cage next to him.
Suddenly, Human Fleeing walked in.
"MEOW!" shouted Brownie.
The Human Fleeing walked over to Brownie's cage and he jumped out of it when it opened the cage.
Suddenly, the Human Fleeing turned the tap on and ran out.
"It flooded us!" screamed the Siamese.
The water was already starting to collect on the floor.
Brownie ran over to a cage where a huge black and orange cat was held.
He bit the lock and the cage swung open.
The water was already an inch deep!
Together him and the black and orange cat opened all the cages and all the cats, five of them, were out.
But, the water was already up to their necks.
Brownie helped the others hop on top of the cages.
He helped the last one, a kitten probably Soot's age up onto the cages.
"What's your name?" he asked, turning to the Siamese.
"Simon," he replied.
"Simon will help you!" Brownie yowled and jumped into the water.
Then, he swam towards the door.
Suddenly, he tripped and fell into the water.
"No!" he shouted as his head went under.
As Brownie came up, he hit his head and fell down unconscious.

[Minty]

Chapter 9:

Soot had searched the whole day and was tired and worried.
"Where is he," Tin-Tin moaned. Callie went up to comfort him.
"I'm sorry," said Ben, coming up to Soot.
"Thanks," sighed Soot.
"Here," said Ben handing him a mouse.
"Thanks," said Soot again even though he felt sick.

Brownie opened his eyes and saw the orange and black cat pulling him up on a ledge above the cages.
"The water's already on the ledge!" Simon exclaimed.
"Ledge . . above . . saw . . when . . swimming" Brownie said groggily.
He was right, there was a ledge directly above them.
Simon tried to climb up, but fell down. Eventually, he made it.
Brownie felt the huge orange and black cat pull him up.
All he could do was stare, since he couldn't move.
He saw a little grey and white paw appear, and then the kitten climbed up.
Finally the last cat, a blue-grey cat climbed up.
By then, the water was touching their feet and their heads were touching the roofs, so they couldn't go any higher.

Tin-Tin couldn't sleep, he kept imagining horrible things happening to Brownie. Suddenly, he had an idea.
He quickly poked Callie.
"Wha?" she asked, confused.
"I think I know where Brownie is," he replied.
"Where?" asked Callie, jumping up.
"Cat Jail!" he exclaimed.
"I know where one is," Callie said.
They woke up the others and set off with Callie in the lead.

Brownie turned to the kitten and asked "What's your name?"
"Cotton," she replied.
"Climb on my head," Brownie ordered.
Cotton nodded, but screamed as water engulfed their heads!


Chapter 10:
Soot and the others followed Callie and soon arrived at the cat jail.
"Soot, can you come with me and Callie into the cat jail?" Tin-Tin asked.
"Sure!" Soot replied and turned to Ben "You coming?"
"We'll stay," Ben and Bunk replied.
So, Soot, Callie and Tin-Tin raced in.
They ran up to a door marked "Cat"
"How do we open it?" Tin-Tin asked.
"Like this," Callie replied and began meowing really loudly.
The others took up the chant and then they all raced under a table.
Soon, a Human Fleeing walked up and opened the door.
When he did, tons of water flew out.
Soot saw a brown shape flying past, Brownie!
He raced to a pretty little grey and white kitten and pulled her under the table.
"Thank you," she whispered looking up at him.
"What's your name?" Soot asked.
"Cotton, yours?" she replied.
"Soot," Soot replied.
"Can you help me up?" Cotton asked.
"Of course!" he replied and pulled her up.
"I'm Max and this is Page," said an enormous black and orange cat, pointing to a blue-grey cat.
Suddenly, Soot and Cotton were swept against the wall by an enormous wave!

Tin-Tin quickly leapt into the water and grabbed Soot's scruff. Then he hauled him to the top of the table.
"Cotton!" Soot gasped.
"Who?" Tin-Tin asked.
"The kitten," Soot exclaimed hysterically.
Tin-Tin took a deep breath and leapt into the water. He soon located the kitten and also pulled her up onto the table.

"Cotton!" Soot exclaimed when he saw her.
"I'm fine" she said.
That night, Cotton and Soot curled up together and soon fell asleep.

[Minty]

Chapter 11:
"Soot!" shouted a voice the next morning.
He blinked and looked up to see Tin-Tin coming over to him.
"Can you go get ten pieces of paper and ten pens for us to vote for with?" Tin-Tin asked.
"Sure!" Soot exclaimed and then added "Can Cotton come?"
"Yes she can," chuckled Tin-Tin in amusement.
"Cotton! We've got a mission!" Soot shouted.
"Ok," she replied and hopped up.
They quickly shared a mouse and set off.
Soon, they came to a dusty old road.
Soot waited for a car to go by and then raced across.
Seconds later, Cotton ran up next to him.
"There's the store," said Soot, pointing with his tail.
He and Cotton raced into the door, dodging Human Fleeings, and went to the stationary section.
"Here," said Cotton and grabbed a pack of pens.
Soot leapt up and got ten index cards.
"A Human Fleeing's coming!" Cotton suddenly cried.
They ran away from the isle and out the doors of the store.
Soon, they came back to the village.

Tin-Tin was exhausted. They had been working for three days and were finally finished with the village!
"Caats!" he called and they came running.
"It is time we voted for the leader of our great village!" he said and handed out the paper and pens Soot and Cotton got.
Soon they had all voted and put the votes in Tin-Tin's bucket.
He walked over to it but, suddenly the ground under him gave way and he plummeted down.


Chapter 12:
"Tin-Tin!" Callie screamed.
She grabbed his scruff and pulled him out.
"Thank you!" Tin-Tin cried.
"Your welcome, you ok?" Callie replied.
"Fine" Tin-Tin replied and went over to the bucket.
"Tin-Tin, Tin-Tin, Bunk, Tin-Tin, Tin-Tin" he read "Tin-Tin, Callie, Tin-Tin, Maxwell, Tin-Tin"
"Tin-Tin wins!" Callie said.
"Thank you all!" Tin-Tin cried, shocked.
"You deserve it!" Brownie replied.
"So, we have five sleeping houses and ten cats," Tin-Tin said "Callie, do you want to sleep in my house?"
"You bet!" Callie replied.
"Me and Soot could share a house," Cotton suggested.
"Yeah!" Soot added.
"Sure, how about Ben and Bunk share a house?" Tin-Tin asked.
"Ok," Ben replied.
"And then, Page and Simon and Brownie and Maxwell," he offered.
Everyone agreed, so Tin-Tin began to walk back to his house.
"So who's going to be the second-in-command?" Max asked.
"I don't know, but we'll call him or her the vice-leader," Tin-Tin replied "I'll tell you tommorow,"
He and Callie walked back to their house.

Meanwhile, Soot and Cotton decided to go hunting on the dark.
They raced down from the village and laughed as they fell down.
Suddenly, Cotton jumped on a mouse and handed it to Soot.
"Thanks!" Soot said as the delicious flavor seeped down his throat.
"A storm's coming," Cotton predicted.
Just then, it began to rain.
"You know your weather!" laughed Soot.
"Race you back to the village!" Cotton challenged and dashed off.
Soot laughed and followed her.
"Cotton the hole!" he screamed.
But it was too late, she had already fell down and he also fell as he tried to grab her.

[Minty]

Chapter 13:
Tin-Tin couldn't decide who to choose - Callie, Soot or Brownie,
"Callie," he said.
"Yeah?" she replied.
"I have no idea who to choose?" Tin-Tin said.
"Well, you think and choose," she said.
"Do you think Soot is too young?" he asked.
"He has promise," she replied.
"Thanks, goodnight," Tin-Tin replied.
"Goodnight," Callie murmured and put her paw over her face.

Soot grabbed the edge and reached over to grab Cotton as well. Unfortunately, he just fell and hit her.
"Oww!" she moaned.
"Are you alright?" Soot asked, worried.
"My leg hurts," she groaned.
"Help!" he shouted.

Tin-Tin woke up with a voice shouting.
"Soot!" he shouted and ran out.
He found Soot and Cotton huddled in the hole he had fallen in.
He tried to grab Soot, but missed.
Finally, Tin-Tin managed to grab Soot's scruff and yanked him up.
Next, he grabbed Cotton.
He watched as Soot gently helped Cotton to their house.
Then, Tin-Tin finally got some well deserved rest.
When he woke up, he called all the cats together.
"I had trouble deciding who to choose," he announced, " But finally, I decided on Callie!"
"Thank you!" said a shocked Callie.
Tin-Tin hopped away and went to talk to Brownie.
"I'm sorry," Tin-Tin apologized.
"That's fine, I understand," Brownie replied.
"Wanna go hunting?" Tin-Tin asked.
"Sure!" Brownie replied.
"Ok, let me go get my bucket to put our catches in," Tin-Tin said and walked away.
Suddenly, Simon screamed "Human Fleeings are attacking!"


Chapter 14:
Callie ran up to Tin-Tin
"We'll have to fight them!" she exclaimed.
Tin-Tin looked at her in surprise "They'll beat us!"
"We have to try!" Callie argued.
She leapt at a Human Fleeing's legs and it screamed and ran.

Soot was helping Cotton run.
"Hide here," he said, pointing to a bush.
Then, he ran back to fight.
Hissing, he jumped on a Human Fleeing's back.
Soot saw another one run to Cotton.
She tried to run, but the Human Fleeing was faster and it grabbed her.
Soot ran and bit at it's legs.
It screamed and dropped Cotton.
Then, it ran away.
Soot turned back and saw the last Human Fleeing running away.
"We're safe!" he shouted joyfully.

"We did it!" Tin-Tin cried.
"Yip!" Callie replied.
"Wanna go hunting with Brownie" Tin-Tin offfered.
"That sounds great, I'm starving!" she replied.
As they were running, they passed Page.
"Hi, Page how are you?" asked Tin-Tin
"Good thank you," she replied.
"Well, bye now," he said.
"Bye," she replied and ran off.
They hunted and were soon full.
"Do you think the Human Fleeing's will come back?" Tin-Tin asked that night.
"They might," Callie replied "Tommorow's my Birthday,"
"How old will you be?" he asked.
"Eight years," she replied.
"Well, I'll make sure you have a great Birthday," Tin-Tin promised, washing her.
"Thanks," Callie replied before she fell asleep.

[Minty]

Chapter 15:
Tin-Tin woke up way before the sun was up the next morning.
He had to get Callie's party ready.

Soot woke up with an idea. He quickly woke Cotton
"We could sail the pond!" he said.
"With what?" she asked.
"You'll see" he said, smiling.
Cotton laughed and said "Ok, let's go!"
They ran up to the pond and Soot pulled out a hughe sailboat from behind a bush.
"Wow!" Cotton exclaimed.
"You like it?" Soot asked.
"I love it!" Cotton replied "Let's try it out!"
They pushed it onto the pond and hopped on.
He quickly tugged on a rope, pulling out a sail.
"Where'd you get the materials for it?" Cotton asked.
"You know when we raided the store for gifts for Callie's Birthday?" Soot asked.
Cotton nodded.
"So, I secretly grabbed materials and hid them," he continued.
"And you built it last night as well/" Cotton asked.
"Yip!" Soot replied.
"Did you sleep at all last night?" Cotton asked.
"Nope!" Soot replied, yawning.
"Let's get back to the village for Callie's Birthday party!" Cotton said.
"Ok," Soot agreed and sailed back to the shore.
They hopped out and ran back.
"Your leg seems better," Soot remarked.
"Yip!" Cotton replied joyfully.
The rest of the day, they partied and gave gifts.

The next morning, Brownie woke up and felt mud in his fur.
That's odd, he thought.
"What's with the mud?" Brownie asked Max.
"Who knows?" Max replied.
Brownie was still worried so he got up to look.
Just as he did, a huge wave of mud hit him.


Chapter 16:
Brownie was swept against and struggled to see.
He couldn't move and he thought, Am I going to die?

Soot was sleeping soundly when the wave hit him.
He knocked Cotton and they hit the couch they had taken from a store.
Cotton started whimpering and he licked her ears reasurringly.
Suddenly, he got an idea. they had built a tunnel that led from their house to the clearing.
"Cotton, the tunnel!" he shouted.
Barley able to move, he slid to the opening of the tunnel.
He saw Cotton, and they both crawled into the tunnel.

Tin-Tin woke with Callie poking him frantically.
"There's a mudslide coming!" she shouted.
He jumped up and they ran for shelter.
Suddenly, a wave of mud hit them and Tin-Tin was flung into a tree.
Then, everything went black!

Brownie grabbed the window and tried to climb out.
He eventually got out and ran.
But, the wave still caught up to him.
Suddenly, another cat pulled him away.
Brownie looked up and saw Page.
"Thanks," he puffed.
"Your welcome," Page replied.

Soot scrambled through the tunnel.
He felt Cotton behind him. She was crying and his heart broke for her.
Soot finally pulled himself out and turned to help Cotton.

When tin-Tin came to, he saw Callie looking very worried.
Then, he felt another wave throw him back.

[Minty]

Chapter 17:
Callie ran up to Tin-Tin.
"It was only a small wave," she murmered, licking dirt from his fur.

"We have to help Max!" Page exclaimed.
She and Brownie ran back up to Brownie and Max's houses
There, sat Max trying to sit up.
Page ran up and grabbed him.
Then, they all struggled to the clearing.

"I'm so scared!" Cotton cried.
"It's ok, it's over," Soot soothed.
"Are the others ok?" Cotton asked.
"Let's go see?" Soot suggested.
There they saw Page, Max, Brownie, Callie and Tin-Tin.
"Where's Ben, Bunk and Simon?" Cotton asked.
"Right here," puffed Bunk, walking up to them. Behind him, was Ben and Simon.
"Are we all safe?" Tin-Tin asked.
"Yes!" they all replied.
"Our sailboat!' Soot suddenly exclaimed.
He and Cotton raced up to the pond to see their sailboat all smashed up.
"You worked so hard!" said Cotton.
"I know," Soot said sadly as he followed Cotton to the Village.
"I'm still so scared," Cotton whimpered that night.
"Nothing's going to happen," Soot assured her.
"I hope so," Cotton muttered.
Soon, they managed to fall asleep .
Soot woke up with Cotton poking him the next morning.
"Tin-Tin has an announcement!" she said.
Soot followed her into the clearing.
"We are going back to the Cat Jail to get more cats for our Village!" Tin-Tin declared.
"Cool," said Soot.
"I have chosen Callie, Brownie, Soot and Cotton to come with me. Let's go!"

Chapter 18:
"Where will they sleep?" asked Soot.
"In that big building behind them," Tin-Tin replied.
"What if we get caught?" Cotton whimpered.
"We won't," Soot assured her.
Cotton looked skeptical so he added "We'll be careful,"
Soon, they arrived at the Cat Jail and sneaked in.
Then, they raced to the door marked "Cats".
There they waited until a Human Fleeing opened it.
They raced in, but the Human Fleeing saw them!
"No!" wailed Cotton.
Soot quickly pulled her under a table.
Suddenly, the Human Fleeing grabbed Tin-Tin.
"No!" Callie screamed, leaping at the Human Fleeing.
It screamed, dropped Tin-Tin and ran out.
"Tin-Tin!" Callie cried, running over to him.
"I'm fine," he replied and hopped next to the first cage.
Callie and the others copied him, each opening one cage.
Soon, all of them, five cats, were out of their cages.
"Back to the Village we go!" Tin-Tin exclaimed.
Cotton screamed as a Human Fleeing began chasing them.
"Calm down, we'll get back safely," Soot said softly.
Soon, they arrived home and the Human Fleeing was nowhere to be seen.
"What's your names?" Tin-Tin asked.
A Siamese with red, orange fur on his tail, paws, muzzle and ears stepped forward and said "Flame"
Next, two lilac twins said "Jack and James,"
"Leif," said a big cat with green, orange and yellow spots.
Tin-Tin pointed to the last one, a tiny one month old kitten with spots.
"Callie,can you raise him?" he asked.
"Sure!" Callie replied.
"Ok, his name will be Patch!" Tin-Tin yowled and walked back to his house.

Chapter 19:
"Let's go for a swim!" said Soot the next morning.
"Sure!" Cotton replied.
They ran up to the pond and dove in.
"Race you to the other side!" Cotton replied.
"Your on!" Soot replied.
They swam and suddenly Cotton went under.
"Very funny," Soot said, rolling his eyes.
But, after a minute, she still didn't pop up.
Soot took deep breath and swam down.
He saw Cotton with her foot stuck in a hole.
He swam down to her and loosened her foot.
Then, they both popped up.
"Thank you!" Cotton cried.
"Let's get you back to the shore," Soot said, helping her swim.
"Thank you!" Cotton said once they were on the shore "You saved my life!"
"Your welcome," Soot replied "Where are we?"
He looked around but couldn't see anything familiar.
Suddenly a Human Fleeing jumped out.
"Soot, run!" Cotton screamed.
Together they fled from the Human Fleeings.
"Cotton, no!" Soot shouted as six Human Fleeings jumped out of bushes.
"Noo!" she wailed and ran through one's legs.
Soot tried to follow her, but had to run another way as a Human Fleeing almost grabbed him.
He dashed into the pond.
Unfortunately, so did three Human Fleeings.
The other three ran to where had Cotton went.
Soot saw the Village and half swam, half ran towards it.
But, a Human Fleeing grabbed him and hurt his leg.
He turned around and bit it's hand as hard as he could.
Then, he opened his mouth to call tin-Tin.
But, a Human Fleeing stood on his tail.
When he turned around, it grabbed him and shoved him in a cage.

Dun dun dun!
I'll probably put Chapter 20 up tomorrow.
I've added a chapter so there's now 32 chapters

[Shadowstar]

Wow, now that is a lot of chapters. But I read them all, and they are good. Congrats

[Minty]

Sorry I haven't posted in 10 days.
Well, here's chapter 20 and 21:

Chapter 20:

Cotton cowered behind a group of large plants.
"Soot!" she cried and then went quite as she saw the three Human Fleeings that were chasing her.
She shrunk back and hid behind another bushel.
A hand swiped at her and she ran towards the Village.
But, Cotton soon saw all the Villagers fighting against hundreds of Human Fleeings.
She squeaked and ran for a tree.
Just as she started climbing up, a Human Fleeing grabbed her leg.
Then, it pulled her in a cage.

Tin-Tin was fighting another cat as it tried to grab Patch.
"Callie!" he shouted.
She ran from behind another house.
She had scars and her ear had a bite in it.
"Get the others and get out!" he said.
She nodded and ran off.
Soon, she came back with all the others and they raced off to a far out den.
When they arrived, Tin-Tin looked and saw that Simon, Soot, Cotton and Brownie were missing.

Soot ran around his cage, looking for an exit.
Suddenly, he saw Cotton trapped in a cage next to him.
"Cotton!" he exclaimed.
She looked at him and said "They got you too!"
"We'll get out of here, I promise!" Soot guaranteed.

Tin-Tin gulped as he saw seven Human Fleeings blocking the exit.
Callie leapt at one and bit it but it just grabbed her and walked away.
"Callie!" Tin-Tin screamed.
Then, the Human Fleeings left and it was all quite.
After a while, the remaining cats walked back to the Village.
Tin-Tin walked straight to his house, feeling miserable.
He hardly slept as he slept without Callie for the first time in many nights.


Chapter 21:

"No Callie!" Soot cried as her cage was put on the other side of his.
"We've gotta get out!" she exclaimed.
"How?" Soot asked.
"I don't know," she sighed.
Soot turned to Cotton and saw her slumped in a corner.
He didn't want to disturb her so he lay down and went to sleep.
About an hour later. he woke up.
"Callie, how do we get out!" soot asked.
"I don't know!" Callie moaned "Oh, I hope Tin-Tin's Ok!"
"Isn't Simon here?" Soot asked.
"Yeah, I'll ask him," Callie replied.
"Cotton?" Soot said softly, turning to her.
"Yeah,?" Cotton replied sounding close to tears.
"We'll get out of her, I promise,"he promised.
"No we won't!" she cried.
He was about to reply when Callie said "Soot?"
"Yeah?" he asked turning to her.
"Simon's trying to figure it out," Callie said.
"Ok, thanks," he replied.
Soot sighed and ate the disgusting pellets in his bowl.
Suddenly, Simon screamed "There's a tornado coming!"
Cotton shrieked and flung herself to the back of her cage.
Soot bashed against the door, trying to open it.
"Come on, open!" he fumed.
Then, it began to rain really hard.
Cotton screamed as a siren went off.
Suddenly, Soot saw the tornado in the distance.
"No, No, No, No!" Cotton screamed.
Soot flung himself against his cage door again but it wouldn't open.
"We'll all die!" Cotton screamed.
"No we won't," Soot said.
What if she's right? he thought, What if we're doomed?

Dun dun dun dun
As always, please review!

[Minty]

There's 11 chapters left so I wanna know watcha think so far.
Once I get one more review I'll continue.

[Minty]

No one's reviewing!
Here's the Allegiances:

Leader: Tin-Tin
Vice-Leader: Callie

Citizens [Adults]
Brownie
Bunk
Page
Simon
Leif
Flame

Citizens [Kittens]
Soot
Cotton
Jack
James
Ben

I'm begging you, PLEASE REVIEW!

[Shadowstar]

Plot: 8/10
Well, I've actually seen a few stories like this, but I didn't take much off, considering yours is rather original and creative. I like it ^^

Readability: 9/10
Not hard to read at all, I just found that a few things happened too fast ^^ I'm being picky, I know, but I'm writing a real book myself, so I tend to be very annoying with pickiness lol

Mechanics: 8/10
I caught a few errors, but not much

Originality: 9/10
Very original! Creative, I like that ^^

Characters: 10/10
Even with the formatting of the story, you do get an idea of the characters, which I like. My favorite's Soot, he's hilarious ^^

Description: 8/10
Like I said before, with the formatting it's hard to develop and be descriptive, but you did an okay job ^^

Continuity: 10/10
It continues well, and you seem to update very fast ^^ Unlike me, I take forever

Overall: Since I don't know how to calculate percentage, I'll just give it a B ^^ lol

[Minty]

Thanks Shadowstar!
I've been too busy writing book 5 in this series to type. I'll try to do the next chapter tonight and post it tonight or tomorrow.
Does anyone know any other good warrior based writing forums besides this one and fanfiction?
thanks

[Shadowstar]

Yeah, there's Warriors Cloud, but unfortunatly, it kinda died, Autmunstorm, Silverfog, Lightningstar, Snowstep (the admin) and I (Shadowstar) were the only active members, but now it's only me

wcloudfan.proboards57.com/index.cgi

There's the link if you want it ^^ And I have my own fanfiction forum, but it's not Warriors ^^

[Minty]

YES! I'm going to the Matchbox twenty concert on Sunday!
Once I get over my excitement, I'll post the next chapter.