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Post by Airilae-Chan on Feb 28, 2008 16:11:11 GMT -5
I really like the story! Continue soon!
That site looks interesting, I might make an account for myself tomorrow^^
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Post by Minty on Feb 28, 2008 22:00:29 GMT -5
Thanks Pineclaw. I specially typed the next chapter tonight so I could put it on this site. But then, my parents computer wouldn't read my Mp3 player{which is what I use to get files from my computer to my parents and visa versa}. I can't put it on tomorrow, because I have school and then we'll be out of town, Saturday my friends coming over and Sunday I've got my concert. So, I'll put it on Monday.
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Post by Airilae-Chan on Feb 29, 2008 12:50:38 GMT -5
I guess I can wait that long. I think... Have fun at your concert^^ Oh yeah, I made an accout on Warriors Cloud too
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Post by Minty on Feb 29, 2008 20:14:23 GMT -5
Thanks Pineclaw My friend's not coming over and we got back earlier than I expected so here's Chapter 22 {From now on, they'll all have names}
Chapter 22: The Tornado Strikes "Cotton, stay calm," said Soot. "Help me!" she cried. "You'll be alright, I promise," Soot reassured, licking her ears through the cage bars. "Brownie!" Cotton exclaimed and Soot realized that the brown cat must be on the other side of Cotton. Suddenly, Soot got an idea. "Cotton, your claws!" he exclaimed. Using his own, he chipped at the lock until he heard a click and the door swung open. "Yes!" he cried and leapt out. There was another click and Cotton landed next to him. Soon, Simon, Callie and Brownie followed them out. Soot saw the tornado far too close for his comfort. "Soot!" Cotton cried out. He spun around and saw her foot was stuck in the bars of her cage. He ran to her and tried to pull her paw out. Suddenly, the tornado hit. "Aagh!" Soot screamed as debris flew all around him. "Go to a shelter!" Callie screamed over the wind. Suddenly, a huge piece of wood hit him and he blacked out.
When he came to, he saw Simon yanking on Cotton's paw. He blinked and felt Callie pulling him to a shelter. Soot struggled to stay awake. Finally, he gave in to the blackness. "Soot! Soot!" a voice screamed and he jerked his eyes open. "Soot!" Cotton exclaimed and shoved her face in his fur. "I'm fine," he assured her. "I'm exhausted!" Cotton yawned. "We should all get some rest," Brownie said. Cotton nodded and cuddled up to Soot. Soon, both of them were deep asleep. Soot woke up a while later. Cotton got up, her jaws parted in an enormous yawn. He licked her head and said "Let's go home,"
There you go. Important Author's note: Somewhere, my characters cry and yes I do know cats don't cry in real life so no one needs to alert me of this. Also, I'll exalt everyone who reviews.
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Post by Airilae-Chan on Mar 1, 2008 5:12:18 GMT -5
I love this story! Write more!
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Post by Minty on Mar 1, 2008 11:06:39 GMT -5
Thanks Pineclaw I'll write more today
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Post by Minty on Mar 1, 2008 13:15:47 GMT -5
here's Chapter 23
Chapter 23: Going Home After walking for about an hour, they rested under a huge tree. "We're around halfway there," Simon announced. "Your kidding," Soot groaned. "It seams like I have more stamina than you," Cotton said mischievously. "Not a chance!" laughed Soot. They walked for another hour until they saw the village. "Home!" Callie exclaimed. It was early morning so they crept in.
Tin-Tin woke up with something beside him. Could it be? "Callie!" he exclaimed. 'Yip," she replied, licking his ears. "Oh Callie, I thought I'd never see you again!" he exclaimed "Let's call a meating," He and Callie walked into the clearing and shouted "Cats!" Soon, they were all gathered around them. "Tell your story!" Tin-Tin shouted. So, they got up and told what had happened. "Did you get a tornado?" Soot asked. 'Nope, it must have missed us," Tin-Tin replied.
"Can we sleep now?" Cotton asked. "Of course," Tin-Tin chuckled. Cotton raced off with Soot right behind him. "They cleaned it!" she exclaimed. Soot stepped inside beside her and saw that she was right, the house was mud free. He leapt on the couch and soon dozed off. Soot opened his eyes later and saw Cotton was gone. He yawned and went out into the bright, sunny day. He then went to the food pile and got a mouse to eat. Suddenly, something jumped on him! He struggled to kick it off but couldn't. It loomed over him and aimed for his throat.
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Post by Minty on Mar 1, 2008 23:54:06 GMT -5
Chapter 24: Raiding the Human Fleeing Store Then, Soot realized who's grey and white fur it was. "Cotton, get off!" he exclaimed. She laughed and hopped off him. "Aw, the kittens play fighting," Leif said sarcastically. "Shut up, you ugly cat thing," Soot snapped. Soot heard Max growl "Open your big fat mouth, and I'll wipe that stupid grin off your face!" as Leif walked past him. Soot laughed and passed his mouse to Cotton. After they had eaten, they decided to raid a Human Fleeing store. Once they had told the others where they were going, they set off. "Let's sneak in that window," Cotton suggested. "Good idea," Soot agreed. They snuck in and went to the cat section. "Toy mice!" Cotton exclaimed. "Cool," Soot said. Suddenly, he got an idea. "Wait here," he instructed. He raced off to the electronic section. Where was it? Oh there. He dashed back to Cotton. "Here," he said. "A portable DVD player!" Cotton exclaimed. "Yip," he replied. "Thanks you so much!" Cotton said, pressing her muzzle against his. "Let's go get some DVD's for it," Soot suggested. "Sure!" Cotton agreed. They chose some cat DVDs and dashed out of the store. "Beat you to the Village," Soot challenged. "No way!" Cotton laughed. Soon, they arrived back at their home. Soot chose a DVD and put it on. Suddenly, there was a bang on their roof. "What's that?" Cotton asked, cowering behind Soot. "It's nothing," Soot soothed. There was two more bangs then nothing. Cotton lay down to watch. Soot jumped when he thought he heard breathing. "Cotton, I don't think we're alone," he said.
Chapter 25: Attacked and Sickness Cotton pressed herself against Soot in fear. Suddenly, the thing pulled Soot by the tail and he realized it was a badger. "Soot!" Cotton cried. "Get out!" he shouted. But, Cotton didn't go out, Soot saw her leap on the badger. "No!" he shouted and pushed her away. Finally, he broke free of the badger and dashed away. "Soot, I thought you were dead!" Cotton cried. "It's ok, let's go get help"Soot assured her. With the help of the others, they soon chased badger out. "Let's go sleep!" Soot said. "Yeah," agreed Cotton. They raced into their house and leaped on their couch. Soot put his head on Cotton and soon drifted off into sleep. He woke up in the morning feeling sick. Cotton wasn't up yet so he quietly lifted his head. He felt an extreme pain and jerked it down. Cotton woke up a little later. She stretched and said, "Soot, you ok?" "I feel sick and my head hurts," he explained. Cotton licked his ears and said "I'll get you something to eat," "No thanks, I feel nauseous," Soot said. "Ok, wanna watch a movie?" Cotton offered. "Sure," he agreed. They watched and Soot felt a little better. "I'm kind of hungry, could you get me something?" he asked. "Of course!" Cotton said and ran out. A moment later, she came back with a huge rabbit. They it and Soot fell back asleep. When he woke up, it was night and Cotton was fast asleep. Soot got up and went outside. Suddenly, he heard Cotton scream "No, not you!"
Chapter 26: Flesh Soot ran back and saw Cotton running from a huge cat. Soot jumped at it but it just batted him away like a pesky fly. "Ow!" he groaned as the world went black. Soot woke up with Cotton screaming. The huge cat bit down on her leg. "No!" he cried and suddenly, he knew who could help Cotton. He sat up and with all his strength and cried "Max!" The orange and black cat soon appeared and tackled the huge cat. Soot ran to Cotton and dragged her ever so gently away. "Get up!" he cried because she wasn't moving. "Cotton! Don't die!" Soot screamed. Finally, she opened her eyes and croaked "I'm . . . . . . alright," Soot sighed in relief and turned back to where Max was fighting. He saw the evil cat fleeing from the village. "And don't come back!" Max shouted after it. "Who was that?" Soot asked. "My . .e . .evil brother . .Flesh," Cotton croaked. Soot nodded but suddenly froze as he remembered something Ben and Bunk had said. When they had first met them, they had attached them because They thought they where Flesh and his commrads. "What?" Cotton asked. "Um, nothing, let's go sleep," Soot said. The next morning, Cotton was still hurt and Soot was hurt and sick. After three days of resting, they felt all better. Soot and Cotton crawled through their tunnel and jumped out the other side. "It's snowing!" Cotton gasped. "Cool!" Soot exclaimed. Cotton leaped in the snow and threw it at Soot. He laughed and tackled her to the ground. Leif walked past and sneered "Aw, the kitties playing in the snow," Soot rolled his eyes and ignored him. "What a fool!" he laughed after Leif had gone. "Like you?" Cotton teased. Soot jumped at her and pinned her down. Suddenly, Leif shouted "Foxes!"
Chapter 27: Human Fleeing's Attack Soot jumped off Cotton and ran to Leif. "You fool's are too easy to fool!" he sneered. Max growled and leapt at Leif. Nobody tried to stop him as he bit down hard on Leif's foot. Leif squealed and ran to his side of the big house. "What an idiot!" Cotton hissed in disgust. Soot nodded in agreement and threw snow at Cotton. They played in the snow for the rest of the day. Then, they went to their home to sleep. Soot, got up at the crack of dawn the next morning. Suddenly, Tin-Tin ran past. "Human Fleeings!" he schreeched. "Cotton, get up!" Soot cried. She jerked her head up and they ran from the house. They dashed behind a big clump of grass. "Don't let them get me!" Cotton cried. "I'd never let them hurt you," Soot whispered. Cotton shrieked as a Human Fleeing walked past. Suddenly, it turned and reached for them. "No!" Soot cried as they ran. Then, one Human Fleeing shouted and all the others ran away. "Are you ok?" Soot asked. "Fine," Cotton said and cuffed him on the head. He growled playfully and leaped on her. Cotton slipped away and ran into their house. Soot followed her and put a movie on. Cotton cuddled up to Soot and watched. "We need more," Soot said, "This is the last one," "We can get more at the store tomorrow," Cotton replied. Suddenly, Callie screamed, "They got Tin-Tin!"
Yeah, there's only 5 chapters left! I'll put more on tommorow, but for now, I'm exhausted!
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Post by Minty on Mar 2, 2008 11:13:09 GMT -5
You see, I'm a horrible typer, so it takes 3x more energy and time for me to type than other people.
Chapter 28: Vice-Leader for a Spell "No!" gasped Cotton. She and Soot dashed towards Callie. "I saw the Human Fleeings put him in a cage and I thought he escaped but . ." Callie trailed. Soot felt horrible, the cat whom had saved his life three times, gone? "What? No!" Cotton cried. "We'll have to save him," Callie said, close to tears. "That means your leader," Cotton said quietly. "I guess," Callie said glumly, "Soot, your vice-leader,"' "What? Thank you," Soot said. "Your welcome, please leave so I can think," Callie sniffed. "Of course!" Soot replied and they walked out. "Congrats, I heard," Brownie said as they walked past him. "Thanks, but I think you'd do better," Soot replied. "You'll do fine," Brownie said and then sighed, "Oh I hope Tin-Tin's ok," "Me too," Soot said glumly. "I'm happy for you," Cotton said as they walked. Soot knew she meant it so he said, "Thanks," They put on the movie and sat down to watch. "Soot!" Callie called. "Can't we watch in peace?" Cotton exclaimed. Soot laughed and ran to Callie. "Yes?" he asked. "I want a group of 5 cats go get Tin-Tin," she replied. "Callie, I retire as vice-leader," Soot decided. "Very well, go get Brownie for me," Callie replied. "Yes Callie," Soot said and ran off. He told Brownie and went to Cotton. "What's up?" she asked. "I retired," Soot meowed simply. "Why?" Cotton asked. "I didn't want the job," Soot replied. "Ok, now can we finally watch this movie?" Cotton asked.
4 chapters to go!
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Post by Minty on Mar 2, 2008 12:34:39 GMT -5
I'm typing on my computer so I can put the rest of this story on today . So I'll finish the story in an hour or so! ;D
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Post by Minty on Mar 2, 2008 13:33:53 GMT -5
Chapter 29: Argument
Soot stretched and began washing himself. It was two days since Tin-Tin had disappeared and Callie had spent all her time talking with Brownie about a rescue mission. "About time you got up!" Soot teased as Cotton got up. Instead of laughing, she just sighed and walked to the food pile. "Huh" Soot muttered to himself. "What's wrong?" he asked. "Huh, nothing, oh nothing," Cotton said nervously. "Your lying!" Soot growled. "No I'm not!" Cotton argued. "Fine then, lie!" Soot spat and stomped off. "Little argument?" Leif said in mock sympathy. Soot yowled in anger and leapt at Leif. Soot clawed Leif's side and bit his nose. "Ow!" Leif yowled as blood streamed from his nose as he ran. Soot smiled to himself and decided to hunt. He returned that night, grabbed a mouse from the food pile and headed to his house. "Hey," Cotton meowed warmly. But, Soot was still furious at her for lying. He ignored her and lay in a corner. "Be a spiteful fur ball then!" Cotton spat. "Why are you lying? Please tell me!" Soot begged. "I can't," Cotton cried. "Whatever!" Soot growled and spun around. "Soot I'm sorry!" Cotton pleaded. "I'm not friends with lyers!" Soot spat and lay down to sleep. The next morning, Cotton was gone when Soot woke up. He saw her when he got up though. Cotton was on one side of the village. She looked around nervously and crept out. Soot decided to follow her so he snuck out. She led him past the pond and through the thick grass. Suddenly, she stopped and Soot gasped as he realized what she was doing.
Chapter 30: Secret
Cotton was feeding food to Tin-Tin through a cage. Suddenly, Flesh came up and said "Good job," Soot nearly screamed, Cotton- the cat who he was closest to, was working with Flesh and they'd catnapped Tin-Tin. Soot had seen enough, he ran blindly back to his house. He was about to tell Callie, but first he wanted Cotton's side of the story. So, he waited until she came and leaped on her. "Soot, what are you doing?" Cotton asked as Soot pinned her down. "Thought you could catnap Tin-Tin and get away with it, huh?" Soot screamed, blinded by rage. "No, you don't understand, Flesh forced me to help him, he said he'd kill me if I didn't!" Cotton cried. "Why should I believe you?' Soot asked. "Why would I lie to you?" Cotton said softly. "I believe you, but will Callie?" Soot asked. "Flesh took him to Dallas?" Cotton cried. "Who?' Soot asked. "Tin-Tin!" Cotton cried, "Oh Soot, what have I done?" He pressed his muzzle against her fur and said, "Let's go see Callie," "Will I be banished?" Cotton asked. "If you are, I'll go with you," Soot promised. "You would?" Cotton sniffed. Soot nodded and they walked to Callie. "I see," Callie said when they were done telling her, "I'll talk to Brownie about a rescue mission," "Will I be banished?" Cotton asked nervously. "No, it's not your fault," Callie said firmly. "What about Flesh?" Soot asked. "Cotton will go meet him with Max sneaking be-" Callie said but Cotton cut her off. "He's already gone," Cotton said. "You may go," Callie said, smiling for the first time since Tin-Tin had gotten taken away. They ran back to their house and curled up to sleep. I hope we can save Tin-Tin, .Soot thought
Chapter 31: The Announcement
"I'm scared Flesh will come back to get me!" Cotton said the next morning. "I'm not very tough, but I'll protect you," replied Soot. Cotton laughed and licked his ears, "Thanks!" That day, they returned the other DVD's and got more. "Hey guys!" Leif called as they walked back. "Hey Leif!" Soot called back. "When did he become nice?" Cotton asked, shocked. "Oh, I cut his nose open the other day," laughed Soot. Cotton chuckled and said, "Callie is still talking to Brownie about rescuing mission," "When I went to her, when I was vice-leader, she said she was going to send 5 cats on a rescue mission," Soot replied. "Who do you think will go?" Cotton asked. "Brownie and who-knows who else," Soot replied. "Let's go watch I movie," Cotton suggested. "Sure!" Soot agreed. After they had watched, they cuddled up to sleep. "It's freezing!" complained Cotton. "You're telling me!" Soot said. The next morning, it was even colder. "There's ice everywhere!" exclaimed Cotton, who got up first. Soot got up and saw she was right. "Wow!" Soot exclaimed. Cotton started to run, but slipped and fell. Soot laughed and tried to follow her. He also slipped and landed next to Cotton. She laughed and slided to the house with Soot behind her. "Brr!" Cotton complained. Soot nodded and huddled up to her. The whole day, they stayed inside, trying to get warm. "I wish Tin-Tin was here," Cotton sighed suddenly. "Me too!" Soot agreed. "Caats!" Callie called. Cotton and Soot leaped up and walked over to their tunnel. "You all know that Tin-Tin is in Dallas," Callie said, "and I have chosen 6 cats to rescue him and they are . . .
Chapter 32: Off to Dallas
. . . Flame, Max, Cotton, Soot, Brownie and Page," Callie declared, "You will leave in one week, you may go to your homes!" Soot gasped, they were gong to save Tin-Tin! "What?" said Cotton. "Oh boy!" Soot exclaimed. They ran back to their tunnel and climbed home. "This will be so cool!" shouted Cotton. "I know!" Soot replied. "Let's sleep," suggested Cotton. "I doubt I'll be able to, but ok," replied Soot. Cotton rested her head on Cotton and they eventually fell asleep. They ate food and rested the next day.
Soon, it was the day before they were leaving. "Let's go walk around, it might be the last day we see the village," Soot suggested. "You really think we won't come back," Cotton shivered. "No we'll come back, just we won't see the village for a long time," Soot suggested. Cotton nodded and they ran off. Later on, they returned and went to talk to Callie. "So, where do we go?" asked Soot. "You go that way for about forty miles," Callie said, pointing with her tail, "Then sneak on a plane to Dallas and go to Main Street where you will find a huge cat jail," "Okay, thanks," Soot said. After that, they went to sleep and woke up the next morning. They spent the morning saying goodbye to everyone. "Caats!" Callie shouted. Once they had all gathered, Flame, Page, Soot, Cotton and Max got up. "Brownie will be the leader of the mission and Soot and Cotton will be the navigators!" Callie announced. The cats cheered as the six set off. Soot turned to Cotton and said "Let's go to Dallas and save Tin-Tin!"
Yes! I'm done! Next weekend, I'll start Off To Dallas
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Post by Airilae-Chan on Mar 2, 2008 16:31:15 GMT -5
Hooray! They're going to save Tin-Tin! *Cheers* Shame its over, but there's gonna be another one! *Dances with happiness*
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Post by Shadowstar on Mar 8, 2008 16:45:21 GMT -5
Yay for book two ^^ I wish Soot had stayed as vice-leader though I like him lol
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Post by Redwood on Jul 12, 2008 16:28:22 GMT -5
Hi I'm Redwood! GREAT story. I'm going to go read the next one right now!
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