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Post by Minty on Mar 26, 2008 18:20:31 GMT -5
I've found Cotton, I just need Soot.
Chapter 6: Airport Battle Cotton screamed as Flesh leapt at her. Soot pushed Cotton out of the way and jumped at Flesh. They met in midair and Flesh bit down on Soot's throat. He dropped on the ground and lay still. He thought of his poor mother. She had died while defending Soot against a huge cat. Was he doomed to die the same way? Soot glanced up and saw Flesh pinning him down and aiming at his throat. Soot's head reeled, I'm going to die! But, he soon felt Flesh's weight pulled off him. Soot looked up and saw Brownie holding Flesh's scruff. Flesh kicked Brownie back and dashed away. I'm so sorry!" Cotton cried, running over to Soot, "You were nearly killed and I just stood there!" "I don't blame you," Soot assured her. "Thank you!" Cotton exclaimed. "What gate, what time?" Brownie asked. "Gate B7, in about two minutes or so," Cotton replied promptly. "Well go!" Brownie exclaimed dashing off. They all set off, Soot saw Flame and page had joined them. Soot looked up at the screen as they ran and figured they had a minute left. "Run!" Soot shouted and they dashed even faster. Soot leaped onto the ramp and ran into the plane unseen. They others were right behind him and they all dashed into the first closet Soot found. "Aah!" Cotton exclaimed as the plane accelerated. She was flung around and bashed Soot. "Sorry!" Page said as she slammed into Flame. Then, they all flew into one corner as the plane lifted off. Soot froze as he heard footstep when the plane leveled out. Then the doorknob started turning.
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Post by Minty on Apr 12, 2008 22:41:35 GMT -5
Wow, I'm SO sorry i haven't updated in 17 days! I really haven't felt like typing but I'll force myself now!
Chapter 7: In Dallas Cotton must have heard it to, for she pushed Soot behind a large bowl. "Human Fleeings!" Soot hissed to the others. They nodded and scrambled behind containers and boxes. The Human Fleeing opened the door, grabbed a plate of food, and shut it again. Soot sighed in relief. "This will be a long trip!" Said Cotton. The rest of the flight was uneventful and by the time they arrived in Dallas, it was dark. They slipped out of the plane and dashed to a clump of bushes. "Now we just find Tin-Tin in the cat jail in Main St. and go home!" Brownie announced. "Oh joy!" Soot said sarcastically. Cotton laughed and said "Tired?" "You bet!" Soot replied, then turned serious "I wish my mother could see this," "What happened?" Cotton asked. Soot explained to her what had happened. Cotton turned pale and said "um, I'm so sorry!" Then, she quickly whirled around and lay down. Soot shrugged as he washed his tail.
Soot woke up the next morning before anyone else. He decided to go hunting and hopped up. Sniffing around, Soot located a mouse and swiftly killed it. After killing two more, he went back to Cotton. "Hey, want some food?" he asked. "Sure!" replied Cotton. "We're off!" shouted Brownie.
After two more days of searching and getting lost, they finally found Main St and the Cat jail. "About time!" Cotton exclaimed. Soot nodded and laughed. "Soot, Cotton, scout ahead!" Brownie declared, anxious to see his brother. "Sure!" Cotton replied. They dashed off into the building. "Tin-Tin!" Soot cried as ha saw him lying in a cage.
Yeah, uneventful, but important. Next chapter you meet two characters, one SUPER important, the other important in it's own way. So again for not updating, please forgive me.
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Post by Minty on Apr 20, 2008 9:52:13 GMT -5
Why's nobody reviewing!?! *sigh* I'll just keep waiting.
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Post by Wildstar on Apr 20, 2008 22:39:49 GMT -5
Hey pouncer its wildpaw Awesome story! Soot is sooo cool! LOL. I'm going to exalt you! That is the good one, right? Can you tell me which one is good so I can do it! Brownie is awesome!!
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Post by Wildstar on Apr 20, 2008 22:41:38 GMT -5
P.S. On my profile it says i'm 33 I must have entered the wrong date I am so not 33!
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Post by Minty on Apr 21, 2008 11:13:32 GMT -5
Thanks a lot Wildpaw, exalt's the good one. Yeah, I kind of like Brownie, he's kind of . . . . . well, boring. I guess that's why I chose Soot as the main character. Thanks again, I was beginning to think I would have to find another site. I'm home schooled and taking a break, so when I'm done with my school day, I'll put up the next chapter.
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on Apr 21, 2008 18:08:31 GMT -5
I love it! I think I like... Soot! He has so much personality.
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Post by Minty on Apr 21, 2008 20:16:37 GMT -5
Thanks Onyxfur! ;D
Chapter 8: Abby and Nestle Tin-Tin lifted his head and said "I was just sleeping!" "Oh, you scared me!" replied Soot, sighing in relief. Soot fiddled with the lock on Tin-Tin's cage and soon it popped open. tin-Tin hopped out and Soot shouted, "Cotton, I got Tin-Tin!" She came running, followed by a brown kitten. "Who's he?" Soot asked. "I kitten I rescued," Cotton replied. "I'm Nestle," the kitten said, nodding. "Cool name!" Cotton exclaimed and Nestle blushed. "Soot," Soot said. "And I'm Cotton," Cotton said. Suddenly, a voice shouted, "Get me outta here!" Soot spun around and saw an cute Abyssinian kitten. He quickly bit the lock and swung the door open. "I'm Abby," the kitten introduced herself. "I already heard your names," Abby added as Soot opened his mouth. "Let's going, the others will be waiting for us," Soot said. "The others?" Abby asked. Soot and Cotton told them all about their village. "Tin-Tin!" Brownie cried, running towards his brother. "Hey Brownie!" exclaimed Tin-Tin, "Is Callie OK?" "Who they?" Flame asked. "Nestle and Abby, they want to join us," Cotton replied. The group walked for an hour until they came to a bush. "We'll rest!" Tin-Tin announced. Soot saw Cotton chatting excitedly to Nestle. Abby followed his gaze and asked, "You two close?" "Yeah, very," Soot nodded. Abby studied him and said, "Why you look sad?" "Oh, it's nothing," Soot said. "Tell me," begged Abby. Soot sighed and told her about his mother. Abby licked Soot's ears and said, "Let's sleep," "OK," Soot replied and lay his tail over his nose. Soon, he was fast asleep.
Just so you know, Nestle's name is pronounced Nestlay.
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Post by Minty on Apr 22, 2008 9:01:57 GMT -5
I'm about to begin home school, so I'll post after I'm done.
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on Apr 22, 2008 15:59:34 GMT -5
What genders are Abby, Nestle's and Brownie and Tin-Tin??
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Post by Minty on Apr 22, 2008 18:59:37 GMT -5
Nestle, Brownie, and Tin-Tin are males, and Abby is a female. Have you read Starting A Village?
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on Apr 22, 2008 20:17:59 GMT -5
No, not yet. I'm going to read it now!
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Post by Wildstar on Apr 23, 2008 1:32:56 GMT -5
Hi everyone on this site (onyxfur....didn't it used to be onyxfurr??? pouncer and me!) I like Nestle and Soot and Brownie kind of. Nice story! Oh, onyxfur, I exalted you!
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Post by Minty on Apr 23, 2008 8:29:41 GMT -5
Thanks Wildpaw, yeah I don't really like Nestle 'cause he kinda stole Cotton in a way. Oh, but I'll get back at him! Yeah, Onxyfur, Starting A Village is the first in my series, it'll help you understand this one.
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Post by Minty on Apr 23, 2008 8:31:28 GMT -5
Oh, and Wildpaw, I saw you live in New Zealand, do you like rugby? Be cause all my family were originally from South Africa and I love rugby.
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