Pineclaw is a COOKIE
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Post by Pineclaw is a COOKIE on Apr 23, 2008 11:54:45 GMT -5
I can't believe I haven't reviewed for so long! I'm sorry Pouncer. Anyway, the last few chapters were fantastic indeed! Nestle and Abby seem cool. I can't wait to hear more about them! Update SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
Wildpaw: ...I'm on this site too! *Sobs*
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on Apr 23, 2008 16:49:41 GMT -5
I just read everything in Starting A Village! I understand everything now, and I know some of the other characters too.
Thanks Wildpaw, for exalting me!
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Post by Minty on Apr 23, 2008 17:03:16 GMT -5
Thanks Pineclaw and no problem thanks Onxyfur as well I'll post later, I'm feeling lazy now.
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Post by Wildpaw lazy on Apr 23, 2008 17:11:38 GMT -5
Sorry Pineclaw (is a COOKIE?).Now we are four!! Hey pouncer saw you were online! Your story is great!! How come I can't PM you???
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on Apr 23, 2008 19:01:42 GMT -5
You can't PM guests. Pineclaw? a cookie? ...strange
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Post by Minty on Apr 23, 2008 19:17:38 GMT -5
Thanks Wildpaw, just click on the icon with a little note in a envelope thingy.
Chapter 9: Another Visit From Flesh "Hey, how's it going?" asked Soot the next morning as they traveled. "Why do you care?" Cotton asked. Soot bristled in surprise. "Sorry for asking," he hissed. "So, um, who's your leader?" Abby asked. Soot knew very well that she knew when he'd told her the day before. She was obviously trying to stop the quarrel between Soot and Cotton. After a while, Abby groaned, "When are we stopping?" "You pure-breads are so soft," Soot teased. She growled playfully and smacked him. Suddenly, Soot heard page scream. He looked ahead to see Human Fleeings. Cotton yowled in fear and Nestle licked her ears. Abby almost leaped at one, but Soot said, "No, they'll take you away!" She sighed and nodded. Just then, the cat he least wanted to see leapt at Abby. "Flesh!" he yowled as Cotton's brother bit at Abby. Abby yowled and and scratched Flesh's nose. Then, Soot jumped on Flesh's back. Flesh screamed in fury and ran off. "Good job!" croaked Soot. "Thanks," puffed Abby. "What happened?" Cotton asked, coming over. "Flesh happened," Soot replied. Cotton's eyes opened wide and she mumbled, "On, no!" "Who's Flesh, " asked Abby. "My evil brother," Cotton replied. Soot looked up and saw the Human Fleeings running. "You OK Cotton?" Soot asked worriedly. "Fine," she growled and went over to Nestle. Soot sighed and began walking again. Soon, thanks to Soot's directions, they reached the airport. "Gate G1, five minutes left," Nestle recited after returning from getting the flight information. "Good job!" said Cotton. Soot rolled his eyes and followed the others. Suddenly, something grabbed his scruff and pulled him away. Soot then realized who it was.
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Post by Airilae-Chan on Apr 24, 2008 0:41:36 GMT -5
Yes, Pineclaw is a cookie. I didn't have time to log in, and being me, wanted a creative name instead of 'Pineclaw Is Logged Out' XD Thank you for the complement, by the way.
ZOMG! Soot! Something pulled him away! COME BACK, SOOT, COME BACCCCCCCCK!
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on Apr 24, 2008 17:07:03 GMT -5
NOOOOOOOOOOOO! SOOOOOOT! Who is it??? Is it Flesh? A Human Fleeing?? And I'm going to change my name to Onyxfur a crazy kitteh (off topic. I know )
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Post by Minty on Apr 24, 2008 20:53:19 GMT -5
Thanks Pineclaw and Onyfur Is A Crazy Kitteh
Chapter10: Back To Oklahoma "Callie!" Soot exclaimed, "What are you doing here?" "Seeing how the mission's going," she replied. "We got Tin-Tin, the plane's leaving!" said Soot. They ran in the plane and into the closet. "Soot, you're OK!" Abby exclaimed. "Yip," Soot replied. He sighed sadly when Cotton just glanced at him as if she didn't care and went back to washing Nestle. "Callie!" Tin-Tin cried. Callie twined her tail with his and said, "You're alright!" "Our mission's nearly done!" Brownie exclaimed. As the plane lifted off, they crashed into each other. Cotton clawed Soot's nose as he hit her. He growled and leaped on her. Nestle pulled them away and said, "Leave her alone you bully!" Soot felt like clawing the stupid idiot's ears off, but he stopped himself. Cotton pressed her head against Nestle and Soot barely kept back a growl. "Um, so how long will this flight be?" Abby said, again feeling uncomfortable with Soot and Cotton's fighting. After a while, they reached Oklahoma City. "Go!" Tin-Tin shouted and they dashed towards a clump of grass. "How'd you end up in the pound? You'd think Human Fleeings would take care of an Abyssinian. Abby shrugged and said, "You get sick Human Fleeings," Soot nodded and curled up next to her. "Soot, get your fat carcass up!" Abby called the next morning. "Thanks for the lovely good morning," Soot said playfully. "We're leaving!" Nestle shouted, sounding annoyed. Soot spat, he was through being polite to Nestle. "Yeah, yeah, yeah" He growled. "It's such a great day!" Abby said cheerfully. Cotton spat and Soot said, "Careful, you might explode with happiness," The next morning, Abby was gone. Soot gasped as he saw a riddle in the sand. It was signed by Flesh.
Dun dun dun! Die Nestle! Die!
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on Apr 25, 2008 19:50:14 GMT -5
First... Soot... then Nestle... NOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY MUST YOU LEAVE US IN TENSION! ??!!!!
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Post by Airilae-Chan on Apr 26, 2008 2:15:12 GMT -5
ZOMG FLESH HAS TEH RIDDLE! Abby! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...
I like Abby. Shes kewl. On the other hand, I do NOT like Nestle. I am waiting for the moment when Soot violently murders Nestle, and Cotton falls in love with him again, and they become mates, and have pretty little kittuhs, and...Okay, I'm gonna calm down now.
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Post by Dovewing on Apr 26, 2008 12:53:00 GMT -5
I kind of like Abby, she's stopping Cotton and Soot from fighting, and I DON'T WANT ABBY TO DIE!!!!! *cries*. Anyways, this series is very good, and i exalt (probably misspelled) you Pount!
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Wildpaw is a LAZY kitteh
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Post by Wildpaw is a LAZY kitteh on Apr 27, 2008 16:03:21 GMT -5
Hi sorry I haven't posted for a while I was away for a while. Great story Pount Abby is cool but NESTLE IS NOT!!!!! Why is Cotton being evil? Sorry if that question makes you think I am an idiot! How come Onyxfur and Pouncer have changed their names?? What does Pount mean? I am going to change my name too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Minty on Apr 27, 2008 17:50:39 GMT -5
Pineclaw: Thanks, it won't exactly happen like that . . . . . Onyxfur The Crazy Kitten: Thanks for the review and yeah, I'm a big fan of cliffhangers! XD Dovewing: Thanks, yeah Abby is cool Wildpaw: Thanks. Don't worry, I don't think you're an idiot because of that question, you'll find out in a few chapters. Yeah, everyone was changing their names, so I decided to as well. Pount is how my little brother says Pouncer, my cat.
Chapter 11: Riddles To find the cat, Go to the house of a bat. If you want her to be fine, find a pine Flesh
Soot felt the world spinning, he had to put his claws in the ground to not fall. "Soot!" shouted Cotton. "What?" Soot growled. "We're leaving!" Cotton spat. "Go get Tin-Tin!" Soot replied. Soon, Tin-Tin came. Soot showed him the riddle. "Home of a bat's probably a cave," said Soot. "Stop!" Tin-Tin shouted to the others. They all stopped and came running. "What's up?" Page asked. "Yeah, why we stooping?" added Flame. All the cats started talking at once and Tin-Tin shouted "Shut up!" "I'm going looking!" Soot said and dashed off before anyone could protest. He smiled as he figured it out. He remembered seeing a small cave. Soot kept dashing until he found it. Then, he scanned the area. "Yes!" he cried as he saw a big pine tree On it was: I'll admit that one was easy, This one will make you queasy. There is a snake, By a lake. One it will be a stone, That I will loan. Find it in an hour, and you have full power.
Oh no!, Soot though, If I don't find her in an hour, then she dies. He ran towards a lake that was nearby. The walk took him about half an hour. Soot checked the time on a clock tower. He searched for a snake, but couldn't find anything. Soot saw a windy trail - like a snake! He checked the time to see he had fifteen minutes left. Soot ran down the path at full speed looking for any weird stone. He found nothing and, with each growing second, grew more worried. Soot still couldn't see anything. Another check of the clock told him he had five minutes left.
Sorry for the riddles, but I'm not to good at them.
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on Apr 27, 2008 17:55:27 GMT -5
Wait, in Chapter10: Back To Oklahoma, it said that ~Abby~ was gone, but then you said Die ~Nestle~ Die.
Which one is kidnapped?
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