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Post by Autumnleaf on May 9, 2008 17:46:37 GMT -5
Okay, so I'm listening to Bella's Lullaby from the Twilight Series. You should read it, it's a good series! Anyway, I thought about when Spottedleaf died and Firepaw was angry. I'm going to write that part in my own words...Hope you like it! And I know that it's different, COMPLETELY different, but still, I like it!
Firepaw listened as the thunder grew closer, bringing with it much needed rain. He padded into the apprentice's den, and immediately headed over to Graypaw. "Hello, Graypaw," Firepaw meowed in greeting to his long-haired friend. Graypaw grunted and crunched a flea. "So, how's the prey running?" Graypaw asked. "Great. But you should know, since we're training together!" Firepaw purred happily. It was cut off as a queen's mournful yowl echoed in the empty clearing of the ThunderClan camp. "Let's go, Graypaw!" hissed Firepaw. The pair raced out of the den. Frostfur was in the clearing, with her head thrown back to the thick gray sky. "My kits!" she yowled. "Someone has taken my kits!" Tigerclaw immediately called to the Clan, "Whitestorm, stay where you are. Warriors, guard the boundary!" Firepaw headed over to the entrance to camp. A tortoiseshell shape stopped him dead. Spottedleaf! Bluestar padded over. "She has been struck by a warrior's blow." she murmured quietly. I will always be with you...a whisper came on the wind to Firepaw. I will watch you from the stars.....
Alright, I hoped you liked it!!! Search every den, apprentices!
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Post by Autumnleaf on May 9, 2008 17:48:08 GMT -5
Oh, wait, something messed up... "Alright I hope you liked it!!! Search every den, apprentices!" Sorry about that...oops.
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Post by Lightningstar on May 10, 2008 14:54:34 GMT -5
It was a little short and fast-moving, but I like the concept. Keep working on it a little bit! ^^
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Post by Autumnleaf on May 11, 2008 13:22:09 GMT -5
Ok! Thanks Lightningstar! You and Dovewing are my top readers! (sorry if i missed anyone)
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