Post by .MOSS{Shadow} on Mar 9, 2007 19:27:17 GMT -5
Title: Jealousy
Chapters: N/A
Author: Moss-shadow (spirit-tree@comcast.net)
Pairing: Hawk/Bramble vs. BrambleXSquirrel
Rating: Minor slash in rewrite, reducing it to more of a PG slash
Summary: Eyes green with envy can be vulnerable
Warning: Some swearing has been cut, but bits remain
Disclaimer: The closest I'll ever get to owning Warriors is having dreams where I am one.
Beta: None. All mistakes are mine.
Cover: N/A
Author's Notes: Alrighty! This is a rewrite to my fic "Jealousy." Almost all mentions of Hawk/Bramble have been erased save for ONE tiny bit. As Blizz suggested, a few references of "the asshole" have been modified (and cleaned).
She stared off at the two of them, their broad shoulders beside one another. The brothers walked off together, their striped tails curling in delight. She stood behind them, a fire burning in her eyes.
The sight made her sick. He should be with her, not some pompous tom she despised. And to think he'd had pledged love to her only to gallivant off with that... asshole!
Her claws sunk into the soft Earth, imagining it was the vulnerable throat of that devious tom. She could almost feel the scarlet blood staining her paws, the stench flooding into her nostrils, the sweet taste of love she'd receive after--
Her emerald eyes burst with flame. Green--the color of envy. She was jealous of that StarClan-damned cat. She glared at their figures walking off together.
Fears erupted behind her angered eyes. She saw their striped brown fur brushing together. The brother's sick tongue swiping over the other's ear. Their two bodies came closer together still. Their two eyes--two ice, two amber--gazing at each other in sick perversion.
It should be her laying against him. It should be that asshole blocked out.
She closed her eyes to hide from the thoughts. Damn them both.
Chapters: N/A
Author: Moss-shadow (spirit-tree@comcast.net)
Pairing: Hawk/Bramble vs. BrambleXSquirrel
Rating: Minor slash in rewrite, reducing it to more of a PG slash
Summary: Eyes green with envy can be vulnerable
Warning: Some swearing has been cut, but bits remain
Disclaimer: The closest I'll ever get to owning Warriors is having dreams where I am one.
Beta: None. All mistakes are mine.
Cover: N/A
Author's Notes: Alrighty! This is a rewrite to my fic "Jealousy." Almost all mentions of Hawk/Bramble have been erased save for ONE tiny bit. As Blizz suggested, a few references of "the asshole" have been modified (and cleaned).
"Jealousy"
She stared off at the two of them, their broad shoulders beside one another. The brothers walked off together, their striped tails curling in delight. She stood behind them, a fire burning in her eyes.
The sight made her sick. He should be with her, not some pompous tom she despised. And to think he'd had pledged love to her only to gallivant off with that... asshole!
Her claws sunk into the soft Earth, imagining it was the vulnerable throat of that devious tom. She could almost feel the scarlet blood staining her paws, the stench flooding into her nostrils, the sweet taste of love she'd receive after--
Her emerald eyes burst with flame. Green--the color of envy. She was jealous of that StarClan-damned cat. She glared at their figures walking off together.
Fears erupted behind her angered eyes. She saw their striped brown fur brushing together. The brother's sick tongue swiping over the other's ear. Their two bodies came closer together still. Their two eyes--two ice, two amber--gazing at each other in sick perversion.
It should be her laying against him. It should be that asshole blocked out.
She closed her eyes to hide from the thoughts. Damn them both.
i hate slash... 
