Post by //holly.leaf\\ on Nov 10, 2008 21:12:03 GMT -5
Title: Traitor
Chapters: I don't know yet.
Author: Aquafrost and Erin Hunter (I got the idea from Long Shadows but this is my perspective)
Pairing: LeafXAsh, LeafXCrow, SquirrelXBramble
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Long Shadows all the way!!!!! Plus a little Eclispe.
Summary: My perspective of Long Shadows before I read it.
Warning: Death and SPOILERS, SPOILERS, SPOILERS.
Note: I cannot stress how extremely spoiling this is. It will RUIN the whole book. It will include all the things I found out:
I will reveal:
- the death of a fairly major character
- the identity of the "traitor"
- the Three's parentage
- a spoiler between the traitor and Squirrelflight
- if Leafpool is in love again
- how the death was done to the character
- Lionblaze likes the traitor
- another Clan-switch
- a she-cat that might die
- Hollyleaf and Jaypaw thinks of something; Hollyleaf thinks and Jaypaw does
- funny things
- a character returns
- the mysterious Tribes by the lake
- Jaypaw masqurading as someone
- Jaypaw falls in love with someone
- ShadowClan seems much more... protective
- who might have killed the character
- and a lot of other things that will ruin the book
Again, I reccomend that you do not go too far ahead.
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ARE YOU SURE YOU WANNA READ THIS?
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Fine then. But it 's your fault if you read this... and ruin the book...
Chapter One
Hollyleaf blinked, the sun shining on her black fur. She squinted and got up, stretching. Padding wearily out of the den, she remembered the disastrous Gathering not long before. It still chilled her heart to remember that ShadowClan had deserted StarClan... because of Sol.
Her fur bristled at the thought of him. Sol was the one who had encouraged Blackstar to desert their warrior ancestors.
"Sad, isn't it?" asked Jaypaw.
Hollyleaf jumped. She hadn't noticed Jaypaw. "Yeah... it's like" - she lowered her voice to a whisper - "like StarClan has deserted the Clans, too. They didn't hide the moon. It was like they - like they've given up on us."
Jaypaw looked horrified at this. "They haven't," he mewed harshly.
Something in Jaypaw's voice told her that he was lying. But she had to trust her littermate. She needed to.
Jaypaw turned at a call from Leafpool. "Gotta go," he mewed and hurried off to the medicine den.
Lionblaze padded out of the den, yawning. He looked bleary with sleep, and Hollyleaf wondered why. He wasn't on the midnight patrol!
"We're going over to the ShadowClan border," he mewed.
"Alone?"
Lionblaze shrugged. "Of course not! We're going with Brambleclaw."
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The morning had been raw and cold, but as Hollyleaf padded through the forest with her brother and father the clouds began to clear away.
She tasted the air and smelled a strong scent of squirrel. She glanced at Brambleclaw, who nodded, and crouched, putting each paw softly down on the forest floor. Suddenly a rustling sounded on the other side of the border
The squirrel looked up all of a sudden.
Mousedung!
She leaped, but it scurried away. Hissing, she glared at the ShadowClan side. Russetfur stalked out with a squirrel in her jaws.
"What are you doing here?" she asked, snarling.
Hollyleaf blinked. "I'm here because I'm trying to catch some food for my Clan."
Lionblaze stalked up beside her, growling, "Why would you care? We're not on your territory!"
Russetfur just hissed irratably and turned around.
"What's with her?" asked Lionblaze quizzicaly.
"Let's get back to camp," Brambleclaw mewed. "Firestar might want to know about this."