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Post by Minty on Apr 30, 2008 11:59:07 GMT -5
Thanks Isis, Dovewing, Onyxfur The Crazy Kitteh and don't worry Wildpaw-Yellowfang Rocks, you're not acting like a beta. I changed the error, thanks for telling me. As for Flame, he was always there, I just didn't mention him 'cause he's not that important. I'll post the next chapter later, I'm trying to do one a day.
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Post by dovewing is logged out on Apr 30, 2008 16:03:17 GMT -5
W00t! another chapters comeing sooon! ;D P.S. I got the name from Pineclaw/Isis's poat from a while ago...
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on Apr 30, 2008 16:38:57 GMT -5
Yay more chapters!!
P.S why do you hate Nestle?
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Post by Minty on Apr 30, 2008 17:39:22 GMT -5
Thanks Dovewing Thanks Onyxfur, I hate him 'cause he just came along and stole Cotton.
Chapter 14: Still Friends? Soot stared at Cotton, jaws agape. "But I saw a big cat kill my mother!" he said. "That was Flesh, he told me to kill her or he'd kill me," Cotton explained, "I saw a kitten my age cowering behind her, I felt really bad, but I had to!" "Flesh held her down and . . . I bit her neck," Cotton was sobbing by the time she finished her tale. But, it can't be true!" Soot said. But, even as he said it, he remembered a small cat killing his mother. "Are we still friends?" Cotton whimpered. "I don't know," Soot said truthfully. Soot walked over to Abby and lay down next to her. "What's wrong?" Abby asked sleepily. Soot sighed. He didn't feel like talking, he was shaken to the core by Cotton's secret. Soot sighed again and told her. Abby gasped and said, "I won't tell anybody!" "I'm so tired," Soot groaned when he saw the sun rising. "Of course, I'll go tell Tin-Tin and get some food for you when you wake up," Abby replied. "Thank you," Soot murmured before he fell asleep.
He woke up later, feeling a bit better. Abby was sitting next to him. "Here," she said, handing him a mouse. "Feeling better?" Abby asked. "yes, a little," replied Soot, "I'm going to talk to Cotton," "OK," nodded Abby. He walked over to Cotton, who was slumped in a corner. "Cotton," he said. "Yeah?" she replied. Soot pressed his muzzle against hers and said, "I forgive you," "Thank you!" Cotton exclaimed. Soot licked her ears and said, "Let's get Abby to look at your leg. Cotton nodded and they walked over to Cotton.
Soot shivered, it was the next morning and it was freezing. He remembered Flesh was dead and smiled.
Soot's loyal, if i was him, I'd never talk to Cotton again.
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Post by Wildpaw is a PIE on Apr 30, 2008 18:47:10 GMT -5
Sorry Pineclaw if you think I'm copying you I just think it is a great idea! Great story Pount if I was Soot I would probably not talk to Cotton again either and then I would go kill Flesh agin and again and again.............................................................. :0 P.S. Thanks for the PM!
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 1, 2008 17:35:35 GMT -5
Yay! I thought they would break up forever but they didn't! I agree with Wildpaw, if I was Soot, I would have murdered Cotten... or soomething.
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Post by Dovewing on May 1, 2008 18:07:05 GMT -5
Isis/Pineclaws a cookie, and Wildpaws a pie.... Wat does that make me? anyways, Soot really is loyal, Soot+Cotton=4ever ;D Maybe I'm a cupcake.......
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Post by Minty on May 1, 2008 18:37:10 GMT -5
Thanks Dovewing, Onxyfur The Crazy Kitteh, and Isis. I don't know why everyone's becoming baked goods, but I'll become a brownie I guess.
Chapter 15: Good Old Human Fleeings "Abby!" Soot exclaimed, seeing that Cotton wasn't moving. Abby sat straight up and said, "What?" "Cotton's not moving!" he exclaimed hysterically. "Lick her," Abby replied calmly. Soot nodded and covered Cotton in brisk licks. Soon, Cotton started moving again. "Thank you, you saved her!" Soot exclaimed. Abby purred. "It's so cold!" she complained. Soot nodded and curled up against Cotton. "We're going!" said Tin-Tin. Soot stifled a groan and asked, "Is Callie OK?" "Yes, Abby saved her," Tin-Tin replied. "Do we have to go?" Cotton asked. "Cotton!" Soot exclaimed happily. "Yes we have to go," Tin-Tin said. "Oh, alright," sighed Soot. He stretched and began to get up. "Let's go," Abby said. Cotton slowly got up and began walking. Soot and Abby followed her. Suddenly, three Human Fleeings jumped out behind them. "Run!" shouted Flame. They dashed away with the Human Fleeings following them. "Come on Cotton!" shouted Soot. He and Abby grabbed Cotton and started pulling her. Soot soon saw the Human Fleeings. "Abby!" he cried as she tripped. "I sprained my ankle," she said so calmly that it surprised Soot. Soot helped her up and they ran as fast as they could. "They're coming!" gasped Cotton. Soot glanced behind him and saw she was right. "Go!" he said. "Oww!" winced Abby. Soot saw the others of their group on an old wooden bridge over a lake. They hurriedly followed them onto the bridge. Soot saw Human Fleeings coming from the other side suddenly. They were trapped.
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Post by Minty on May 2, 2008 9:46:58 GMT -5
I'm not sure if I can post today, we're going to town today and we'll probably be back late.
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Post by Airilae-Chan on May 2, 2008 9:49:57 GMT -5
Ah, that alright, Pount-o-llama. Town is FUUUUUUUUN...I wanna go to town now XD
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 2, 2008 13:19:54 GMT -5
Hmmm.... why is everyone turning into baked goods? I'm going to turn into a banana!
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Post by Dovewing on May 3, 2008 10:17:20 GMT -5
A banana?!? I thought we were turning into baked goods If were baked goods then I'm a cupcake. If were turning into fruits, then I'm a coconut. P.S. I set a new speed record for reading a book Outcast has 317 pages, I read it in 7 hours, would have been less if I didn't have to eat or do 2 hours of math homework...
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Post by Minty on May 3, 2008 10:32:43 GMT -5
Thanks Onyxfur Is A Crazy Banana and Isis. I actually got back early enough to update yesterday, but I got Outcast so all I wanted to do was to read!
Chapter 16: Lost Callie screamed as the wood under her gave way. Tin-Tin ran and, without hesitation, Abby licked Soot's ears and said, "What do we do?" "I don't know!" Soot cried. The Human Fleeings were closing in on us. Soot saw Flame, page, and Brownie getting ready to leap into the hole. "What?" Soot shouted, "You can't just leave us here!" But, they had already leaped in the river. "Soot!" screamed Cotton. Soot took one last look at the Human Fleeings and shoved Cotton down the hole. Abby leaped down, followed by Soot. He winced as the cold water hit him and he couldn't tell which direction was up. Then, he snapped out of it and swam up. Soot saw Cotton and Abby swimming next to him. When he finally got to shore, he coughed and collapsed, exhausted. "The," Cotton began but cut off, spluttering, "The Maps!' "We left them on the bridge," Abby exclaimed. Even she, who was always so calm sounded worried. "Where are the others?" Soot asked. "I don't know!" Abby replied. "So you mean we're lost and alone?" Cotton asked. "I'm afraid so," Soot replied grimly. Cotton pressed against he in a vain attempt of warmth. Soot soon fell asleep and he woke up later. "I'm sooo hungry!" Soot complained. "I caught a tiny squirrel earlier," Abby said, handing him one third of a stringy squirrel. "You have it," he said. She blinked in gratitude and started eating. "We have to get going!" he said. "Where?" Cotton asked. "I don't know, but we're going to die if we stay here in this freezing weather with no pray!" Soot replied. They got up and began walking. They plodded in silence, each too glum to talk. How long, Soot thought, Can we survive like this?
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Post by Dovewing on May 3, 2008 11:30:22 GMT -5
Oh no, pour catz! all alone, without a bananna or a pie or a cookie or a cupcake or a coconut, AM I A CUPCAKE OR A COCONUT!!!!!?
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Post by Minty on May 3, 2008 11:32:38 GMT -5
Cupcake sounds better
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