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Post by Minty on May 6, 2008 17:48:59 GMT -5
Thanks Isis.
Chapter 20: Been Better Abby suddenly dashed and leaped at Soot. He got pushed out of the way of the tree. "Abby, you OK?" Soot asked. "Fine, you?" Abby replied. "Fine thanks to you," Soot said, "Where's Cotton?" "There," Abby said, pointing with her tail to where Cotton was staring blankly at nothing. "Thank you," Soot said to Abby. Abby licked his ears and said, "Let's go," They got up and saw the dog was dead. Cotton joined them. She looked near death and was hobbling. Soot pressed up against her and they began walking. They trudged through the snow towards a little pond. "Let's get something to drink," Soot said, his voice was monotone. Abby nodded and began to drink. Cotton just stood there, still staring blankly. Soot shivered and lapped up the icy water. Way off, they heard a twig snap. "Wha-" Abby began, but soot slapped his tail over his mouth. They waited in silence until Soot whispered," We're being followed," Abby twitched her ears and Cotton remained still. "Give her time, she's still shocked from Nestle's death," Abby whispered in Soot's ear. He nodded and motioned with his tail for them to follow him. Soot jumped as a bush rustled. They ran as fast as they could until they were sure they were safe. "Abby?" Soot asked. "Yeah," she replied. "Do you think we're being followed?" Soot asked. "Unfortunately," Abby sighed. Soot swallowed in fear and said sadly, "Cotton's still just staring," "She's in extreme shock after all that happened," Abby replied. "I know, I just miss her so much," Soot said, "How you?" "been better," Abby said. Soot shook his head sadly as the bedraggled trio trudged on.
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Post by Dovewing on May 6, 2008 18:50:54 GMT -5
Who's following them? Friend or foe??? I need to know!!!!
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Post by Minty on May 6, 2008 19:50:35 GMT -5
Thanks Dovewing, you'll learn soon. [glow=red,2,300][/glow]Chapter 21: A Watery Grave[glow=red,2,300][/glow] Soon, the three travelers came to a huge lake. "We'll have to build a raft," said Soot. Abby nodded and walked off. She returned with several big, strong pieces of wood. Soot soon found some reed and he and Abby worked all day on the raft. Then, they helped Cotton on and began paddling. "Left!" Abby yowled. They had decided she would give directions. Soot gasped as he saw huge storm clouds coming. "Right, hurry!" shouted Abby. He paddled right as fast as he could. Suddenly, a huge wind knocked them and Soot clung on to the rafts with his claws. Rain soon began to pound on them, lessening his grip. Soot sighed in relief as he saw Cotton had snapped out of her trance and was clinging on. "Aagh!" cried Abby. "Hold on!" Soot shouted. "No!" Cotton screamed as the rain became more intense. Soot scrambled up and got a good hold one a piece of reed. Then, huge waves began pounding on them. "Soot!" Abby cried. Soot grabbed her scruff and yanked her up. Cotton screamed and disappeared under the waves. "Cotton!" Soot shouted. He looked in, but couldn't see her face above the roaring waves. He paddled and leaped in the water. Soot searched for her for a long tome, but never found her. Eventually, he and Abby paddled to the shore and lay down on the ground. Soot felt so miserable he just wanted to disappear and never face life without Cotton. Then, the bush behind him rustled. He tried to hiss, but was too exhausted. Then, he blacked out. When he came to, a rusty red kitten his age was standing over him The kitten looked at Abby and turned to Soot. "Finally, I've found you!" he cried triumphantly. Poor Cotton! That was defiantly the hardest chapter to write yet.
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 6, 2008 20:14:52 GMT -5
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Post by Dovewing on May 7, 2008 15:46:38 GMT -5
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I'm sad
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 7, 2008 17:12:56 GMT -5
*Goes insane*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
COTTTTOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!
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Post by Minty on May 7, 2008 18:02:58 GMT -5
Thanks guys, I'm sad too! Again, please join my warrior fan fic site: thunderclanwarriors.proboards83/index.cgi[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 22: The Kitten[/glow] "Andy!" Soot exclaimed. "I've been tracking you forever Soot!" the rusty kitten replied. "Abby, this is my friend from when I was two months old," Soot said. "Nice to meet you!" Abby said. Andy touched noses with her and said, "Nice to meet you too," Soot thought of Cotton and collapsed to the ground. "What's up?" Andy asked. Abby leaned forward and hurriedly whispered in his ear. "Oh," Andy said. "Soot lives in a cat village that I'm joining, want to come?" Abby asked. "Sure!" Andy agreed. Abby purred and turned to Soot, "We should go," "I'm sorry about Cotton's death," Andy added. "OK, thanks," Soot said. Abby helped him up and he slowly walked. After walking for two hours, Soot said, "Want to stop?" "Of course," Abby replied and shouted, "Andy! We're stopping!" "OK," he said and walked over to them. Abby caught a huge rabbit and they all shared it. "Goodnight,"Abby said, lying shyly next to Andy. The whole time, Soot had tried to keep his mind off of Cotton. But now, he saw her face and began to sniffle. After a long time, he fell asleep. The next day, they began walking again. Andy told them about his life and soot talked about the village and told Andy about Cotton. "We should rest, it's getting dark," Soot said. "OK," Abby agreed and they settled in a big bush. Suddenly, a huge net fell on Soot
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 8, 2008 20:48:09 GMT -5
NO! it's not a Human Fleeing right? *crossesfingers even if I am a human* Soot better escape from that net!!
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Post by Minty on May 9, 2008 2:30:05 GMT -5
I'm bored and are trying to stay up all night. So here is links for what the cats look like: Cotton - kittenwar.com/kittens/18230/Soot {Imagine his head darker and with blue eyes} - kittenwar.com/kittens/6591/Abby - www.abytopia.com/kittens_html/one_of_em.htmI can not find Andy! So, picture a rusty red kitten with green eyes Callie - en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Katze_in_Tunesien.jpgAlso, here's Pouncer's link - kittenwar.com/kittens/154318/And here's a one-shot about Cotton: The Worst Three Months In My Life by Cotton My first three months were the worst in my life. Flesh, my brother, was such a bully, but I never thought he'd commit a murder. It was a bright, sunny day. My Human Fleeing owner was on it's computer when Flesh slashed his throat. He then killed many cats, and some I helped him with. Yes, I'm sad to say, I'm a murderer. Now before you say how evil I am, let me tell you this: I only killed because I knew Flesh would kill me if I didn't. Don't get me wrong, I feel horrible about the murderers. My life was a total misery. One day, I just ran, ran from Flesh, ran from the murder, ran from everything. I got captured by a Human Fleeing and put in Cat Jail. Some lunatic flooded it and I got saved by a bunch of cats. After that, I met Soot. He gave me hope and changed my life for the better.
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Post by Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~* on May 9, 2008 17:06:24 GMT -5
Wow, I always thought that Cooton was cream coloured with green eyes! Guess I was wrong... ah well.
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Post by Dovewing on May 9, 2008 17:48:56 GMT -5
You changed your advatar, and I like the picture of Cotton, by the way, and I can't belive you killed her!!!!! *cries*
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Post by Minty on May 9, 2008 21:08:49 GMT -5
Dovewing: Yeah, I didn't like my last one. Onyxfur: Weird, but that sounds like a cool cat. I'll put it in Book 8, what do you want his/hers name to be?
[shadow=red,left,300]Chapter 23: Almost Home[/shadow] "Aagh!" Soot screamed as the net, with him inside, flew up. Abby leaped at the tree the net was attached to and bit it. Soot was flung onto the ground. Andy came over and bit Soot out of the net. Soon, he was free. "Thanks," he puffed. "We need food, I'll go hunting," said Andy. "I'll come too," said Abby. "I'll stay!" Soot shouted as they ran off. He lay down and quickly fell asleep. The next morning, he got up and saw Abby and Andy sharing a mouse and chatting. "Hey Soot!" Andy said. "Hey!" he replied and walked over to them. "I hope we're home for Christmas," sighed Abby. When Soot didn't reply, she said, "You miss Cotton, don't you?" Soot nodded and Abby said, "Me too," "Let's go," Andy said. He gave her a lick on the ear and she blushed. They hopped up and began walking. Soon, they came to the lake again. Soot swallowed, "I think I know where to go, we have . . . . we have to cross the lake again," So, they made another raft and paddled across. Soot sniffed as he pictured Cotton's head disappearing under the water. "Want to stop?" Abby asked after they had walked all day. "I'm not stopping 'till I get to the village," Soot replied, determined. Abby nodded and walked by Andy. Soot wondered if there was any chance Cotton lived. "No!" he muttered out loud. It was wrong to get his hopes up.
The next day, Abby said, "Is this your village?" "Yes!" Soot cried, "I'm home!" He ran ahead of the others and shouted, "We're here!" Soon, all the cat gathered around them. They were home!
I really love AbbyxAndy!
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Post by Minty on May 9, 2008 21:50:57 GMT -5
Chapter 24: Home Again "Soot!" exclaimed Ben. "Ben, it's good to see you!" Soot said happily. "Who they?" Ben asked. "Abby, who we rescued from the Dallas pound and Andy, my old friend," Soot replied. "Welcome to our village!" Ben said, "where's Cotton?" The smile immediately ran away from Soot's face and he fell silent. "She died," Andy said sadly. "I'm so sorry!", Ben said, his eyes clouding, "Well, a lot has happened since you left," He was obviously trying to change the subject and Soot complied. "Everyone under two years will now be in that great big building, we met two cats who had kittens which are now one month old," Ben said. "Tell your story!" Tin-Tin, who'd obviously arrived safely home, said. Abby, Andy, and Soot took turns telling about how the got lost, how Andy tracked them down and how they traveled home. "Well, you must be exhausted, go rest," Tin-Tin said kindly. They nodded and followed Ben into the Kitten Building. "This is Kit, Ilid, Tom, Tangerine, Egg, and Ted," Ben introduced six kittens. "And our parents are Zed and Mary!" 'Egg squeaked. "Nice to meat you," Soot said and hopped on a little bed marked, "Soot". "Soot," Ben said later in the day, "You got five points!" Soot blinked and said, "What?" "we earn points and spend them at our new store," Ben explained. "Sounds cool!" Soot replied. "Soot!" Abby called. He dashed over to her and saw she was pointing to Cotton. "Cotton!" he cried, wrapping his tail around her. She pressed her muzzle against his and Soot had never been happier in his life. Soot helped her to a bed marked, "Cotton," and she quickly fell asleep. Then, Ben showed him to a the store and he bought Christmas gifts. He wrapped them and helped the others set up a Christmas Tree. "Hi Soot!" Patch said, "What's Christmas?" Soot told him all about it and went to sleep next to Cotton. The next morning, Cotton woke him up and said, "It's Christmas!"
XD I tricked you! I couldn't kill Cotton!
Chapter 25: Christmas Soot, hopped up and they woke up all the others that weren't already awake. Then, they went to the tree. "Soot will open first!" Tin-Tin announced. Soot chose the one from Cotton and unwrapped it. It was a huge sail boat. He also got a slab of chicken from Abby. "Thanks," Abby said as she opened her one from him. It was a laptop that fully worked. {That's kind of sad, he gives her a laptop and she gives him a slab of chicken!} They had a huge lunch later. Cotton finally seamed happy for the first time since Nestle's death. "The pond's frozen!" Abby gasped. He, Cotton, Abby, and Andy jumped on the ice and skated around. Suddenly, the ice under Abby gave way and she plunged in the frigid water. Andy leaped after her and also disappeared. Soot carefully walked to the edge of the hole and plunged in. Soon, he located Abby and he and Andy grabbed her and started up. Soot swam up and banged his head on the ice. Where was the hole? Finally, he located it and they climbed out. "You're OK!" Cotton exclaimed and helped them to the village. "What happened?" asked Ben. "W - We F- Fell in the ice!" Soot stuttered. "You should have been more careful!" scolded Tin-Tin. They walked to the Kitten Building and lay down. "You OK?" Cotton asked, licking Soot's ears. "F-Fine," he stuttered and pressed closer to her. "There's a piece of paper here," Soot said, stopping his teeth from chattering. He was already tired, but as he read it, he fainted. For, it said: The riddles aren't done, So have lots of fun! Flesh will live on, In another con!
I'm so tired, but happy. Off To Dallas is done! Whoo! Expect Book Three: Who To Trust up on Friday next week maybe. I want to finish writing Book 8 this weekend and we have friends from Colorado over Mon-Fri.
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Post by WILDPAW is a Chocolate Cake on May 10, 2008 0:49:27 GMT -5
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Post by Airilae-Chan on May 10, 2008 0:52:13 GMT -5
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTON IS ALIIIIIIIIIVE! *Does the Cotton-is-alive-dance* KEEP GOING POUNTMAN!
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