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[Dovewing]

I know! I'm a coconut cupcake!
=^..^=

What, wasn't 2 secs ago you're name was pount, not pouncetail?

[Minty]

Well, I changed my name to Pouncetail 'cause I'm so happy there's a warrior character in the Warrior's books with Pounce as a first name part. Unfortunately, in one place it's a male, then in another, it's a male. {Pounce is my cat's real name, I just changed it to Pouncer}

[Minty]

Outcast says Pouncetail is a male! Yeah!

[Minty]

Here's my goal: To type chapters 17-20 today and the remaining five tomorrow.

Chapter 17: Ice
"Cotton, try to remember where to go," said Soot.
"I don't remember anything!" she meowed hysterically.
"Cotton, calm down!" Soot said sharply, "If you panic, you die!"
Cotton was silent for a moment, then she said, "That way,"
They changed direction and began walking again.
"we've gotta rest," Abby said.
Soot nodded and said, "I'm going hunting,"
He only caught a tiny mouse which hardly filled them.
Soot groaned as hunger gnawed at his stomach.
He felt so weak and he lay down to sleep.
He woke up and yawned, "Let's get going,"
Cotton groaned and Abby said, "OK,"
They slowly plodded on.
"Soot, we can't go on like this," Abby said.
She sounded calm, but their was fear in her eyes.
"I know," he replied.
Suddenly, an icy wind hit them and they winced.
"Go to a shelter!" Soot said.
They all trudged to a hole in a log.
Soot lay down next to Abby and he took comfort in her sweet scent as he drifted in and out of sleep.
He gasped as he saw the world was iced over as he awoke.
"Wow!" Abby murmured next to him.
"Look at the trees!' he said.
"They could fall over!" Abby gasped.
"As if we don't have enough to worry about," Soot said grimly.
Abby pressed her muzzle against his comfortingly.
He tried to walk out the log, but tripped and fell.
Abby grabbed his scruff and yanked back in the log.
"Thanks," Soot said.
Abby purred.
Cotton screamed as a loud bang filled the air and a tree crashed right on top of their log.

[Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~*]

*gasp* oh noes!

Random, but please clickez my sis's eggs!!

[Airilae-Chan]

Ooh, do I spot some Soot x Abby going on? XD Great chapter, Pountabilly. Yays, I've almost finished the next Burger Shop comic. -Rejoces-

Random Event Of The Day: I was inspired by Pount'n'roll, and forced my mum to go to town with me O.o

[Wildstar]

Hi Isis (can i call you Pineclaw?) I clicked the thing on your signature is that you? If it is you then you look really cool! Great story Pouncetail (The cat in the book is awesome!)! abby is very calm................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................(sorry)
Onyxfur is a Crazy Banana? I don't want to be a pie,,,, WILDPAW IS A CHOCOLATE CAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Minty]

Isis: You kind of are. Okkkkkkk . . .
Onyxfur The Crazy Banana: Weird
Wildpaw: Thanks, yeah even though Pouncetail's only mentioned about once, he still rules. That's why I like Abby.

Chapter 18: Pinned Down
Soot cried in agony as the log pinned him down.
Abby yowled and tried to claw her way out.
"Cotton!" Soot tied to say, but it came out, "Mmmph,"
Cotton yowled in annoyance when she couldn't get out.
Soot licked her head and pushed with all his might.
He moved a couple of inches.
After a few tries, he popped out.
"Abby, push," Soot said.
She pushed and Soot yanked her out.
"Cotton!" Soot shouted once Abby was out.
"She's unconscious!" Abby said.
"Cotton!" Soot shouted as loud as he could.
Finally, Cotton moaned, opened her eyes and began closing them again.
"No!" Soot cried, "Cotton, stay awake!"
She groaned and said, "Help me out!"
Soot leaped forward and tried to grab her.
"Soot, don't move her!" Abby meowed, "If she has broken bone above her vertebrae, you could paralyze her for life!"
"What do I do?" Soot wailed.
"Check her eyes, if they're pointing in different directions, that means brain damage," Abby said calmly.
Soot hurriedly checked them and said, "They're fine,"
"Ask her simple questions," Abby instructed.
He asked her a few and said, "Fine too!"
"Pinch her foot, see if she feels it,"Abby said.
"She feels it," Soot replied.
"She's fine, let's prop up the tree with wood," Abby said.
Soot quickly pressed his muzzle against hers and said, "Thanks!"
They got several pieces of wood and propped it up.
Then, Soot gently pulled cotton out.
"Wake up!" he shouted.
"She's got hypothermia," Abby exclaimed.

[Airilae-Chan]

Oh dear! Cotton has hypothermia D8

I am REALLY angry right now. You know that story of mine in the oneshot section? The Leaf x Sorrel one? Its on fanfiction.net too, and there are GAZZILIONS of warnings that it contained slash, and someone (Who was a guest...) Had the nerve to review with: That is horrible. What the hell?

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If they wern't a guest they would be dead by now...>.> Oh well, they made the review count higher

EDIT

And yup, that click picture thing in my signature is Isis, one of my roleplay characters ^^ My friend made it for me.

[Minty]

Thanks for the review Isis and yeah, people who normally do that are guests so they can't be traced.

[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 19: Finding Help[/glow]
"If she falls asleep, she might never wake up!" Abby exclaimed.
"Cotton don't go to sleep!" Soot cried, "I . .I-"
"Soot, we have to eat, I'm going hunting," Abby interrupted him.
"OK, thanks," Soot said.
Cotton groaned and said, "I feel so weak,"
"I know," Soot sighed.
Abby came back with nothing.
"I'll make sure Cotton doesn't fall asleep, you get some sleep," Abby said.
"Thanks," Soot said and curled up next to Abby.
He soon drifted into sleep with Abby's gentle licking.
"I'm going to look for help," Soot said when he woke up.
"OK, be careful," Abby replied.
"I will," Soot said, and turned to Cotton.
"Please stay awake, I'll find help," Soot promised Cotton.
She nodded and stared blankly.
Soot charged through the trees.
He cried out in surprise as it began snowing.
But it wasn't regular snow, it was a blizzard.
Soot struggled to continue forward.
"Oww!" he moaned as snow flew in his eyes.
He trudged on the whole day and night.
Finally, when he couldn't walk anymore, he lay down to rest.
The next morning as the sun was rising, he caught a tiny mouse and devoured it.
Then, he continued walking.
He screamed as a huge dog ran right at him, it's lips drawn back in snarl.
He climbed up a tree and held on to a thin branch.
The branch began bending, already weakened by the ice.
Soot hung on as the branch twitched.
The dog saw it's opportunity and hit he tree, shaking him.
Soot yowled as his back legs slid off the branch.
Then, they whole tree suddenly began to fall.

[Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~*]

Trees are falling every everywhere! 83

Keep going Pount-lo-Llama!

[Wildstar]

Great story I like COTTON again!!!!! Oh NO she ahs hypothermia!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT STORY POUNCETAIL!

[Dovewing]

Oh noes!!!!!! I'm sad that I haven't been keeping up with the story for a while, but it wasn't my fault. My INTERNET server wouldn't let me on cause it broke. Curse you Verizon! Curse you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. is the magma the rise of scourge out yet?

[Minty]

Thanks for the reviews. I don't feel like posting, I had to go to town again and i waited in the car most of the day so it WASN"T fun! Please go to my proboard and sign up. It's like the other Warrior fanfic sites, but please join and post. Here's the link: thunderclanwarriors.proboards83.com/index.cgi

[Airilae-Chan]

I joined ^^ Though, Pountster, it dosn't appear to have any rules XD AND A HUMOR SECTION!! D8