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Post by Wildstar on Aug 8, 2008 16:15:30 GMT -5
This is awesome!;D
From Wildpaw, BTW.
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 8, 2008 16:54:54 GMT -5
Thanks! ;D I'll post chapter 10 as soon as I can!
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 10, 2008 15:13:54 GMT -5
Srry I haven't posted in a while. I've been busy. Anyway, here's chapter 10!
CHAPTER 10
Rocktail woke to see gray clouds covering the sky. Careful not to wake Cherrytail, who was curled up next to him, he got up and stretched. He heard thunder rumbling in the distance as he padded outside. He felt a large raindrop fall onto his head. Soon more rain started to fall. Rocktail quickly ran back into the barn. As he shook his pelt, he saw that the clan was gathered around Leafstar. "Once this storm passes, we must leave. We cannot stay here any longer." A yowl of protest came from the back of the barn. "We can't leave yet! The kits are too still too small!" Patchfoot's voice echoed around the barn. Most cats looked as if they agreed with Patchfoot. "Silence!" Leafstar hissed. The clan looked at her in surprise. Rocktail knew why she was so tense. "We leave once the storm passes. Now go rest. This meeting is over." The clan broke into groups, casting confused glances at Leafstar. She never snapped at the clan if they disagreed with her. Soon the tension faded, and the clan started curling up to sleep. He padded over to Cherrytail, who was standing next to Tinywhisker. "Hi," he mewed. "Can I talk to you, Cherrytail?" he asked her. "Sure." They padded away from Tinywhisker. He looked back to see that her eyes were glimmering with amusement. Rocktail felt hot with embarrassment. "What is it, Rocktail?" she mewed, her amber eyes meeting his green eyes. Rocktail sighed. "There's something I thought you should know," he mewed quietly. Cherrytail stared at him, concern in her eyes. "Yes?" "I... I am part of a prophecy. StarClan told Leafstar that SkyClan must find ThunderClan, WindClan, RiverClan, and ShadowClan, and that they must follow rock to survive." Her eyes stretched wide. "How can you be sure it's you?" she murmured. "Skywatcher came to me in a dream and told me the fate of SkyClan rests in my paws." He mewed distantly. Cherrytail stared at him a heartbeat longer, then gave his cheek a lick. "You can do it Rocktail." she whispered. "I believe in you." Rocktail purred. "Thank you, Cherrytail." Giving her ear a quick lick, he padded over to the entrance of the barn. The rain had stopped, and the sun was shining through the clouds. Leafstar appeared next to him. "It's time," she mewed. She padded to the center of the barn. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here for a clan meeting." The clan got up and padded over to her. "It is time for us to leave." Leafstar meowed. The clan gathered to help Clovertail carry her kits and they slowly walked out of the barn. The journey had begun.
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 13, 2008 10:42:22 GMT -5
Why is no one commenting?
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 13, 2008 11:12:13 GMT -5
Wait a minute... *looks at story and smacks self in the head, laughing.* I wrote Sedgepaw instead of Sagepaw! XD LOL!! Let me fix that! XD ............................................................................... ...................................................................Okay, Its fixed. Sorry about that!
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 14, 2008 0:12:35 GMT -5
I am commenting NOW and I really like your story! Nightpaw rocks! Maybe you could call him.......Nightflash........well, if you hate it you can use Appledapples ones! I am bad about making names....
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 16, 2008 19:17:05 GMT -5
Actually I like that name.
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 17, 2008 0:55:33 GMT -5
Oh, thanks! I really like your story! When are you planning on making Night a warrior?
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 17, 2008 12:51:11 GMT -5
Well he's still a kit. But the journey is gonna take a while... hmm... I'm not sure at this point... Also, do you know how to put a cover on? I made one a while ago, but I can't figure out how to put it on. I know I haven't updated in a while. I will soon.
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 18, 2008 1:27:22 GMT -5
Did you draw it or did you make it on Paint (etc.)? If you drew it you would (trust me, I'm expert!) have to scan it through and then upload it. If you made it on Paint (lets just say Paint, for ex.) you would have to save it (DUH!) and then go to www.tinypic.com and upload it. It is pretty simple, really. ;D Yours Fluffily, Wildpaw
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 18, 2008 12:04:23 GMT -5
Oh, Thanks! ;D Here's chapter 11!
CHAPTER 11
Sunhigh had passed by quickly. Now the sky was darkening and a single star shone above. Leafstar lifted her head. "We will rest here tonight," she mewed. Rocktail, who had been carrying Nightkit, set him down next to Clovertail. To his concern, Clovertail was laying on the ground, gasping. Patchfoot sat down next to her and covered her face with licks. The kits looked up at him, fear sparking in their eyes. "Where are we going?" Sunkit squeaked. "To our new home," Rocktail meowed gently. "Now go get some rest." "But we aren't tired," Nightkit complained. "Can you tell us a story?" Barkkit asked. Rocktail sighed. "Very well," he mewed. "Sit down and I'll tell you about the cats that restored SkyClan." He had heard the story many times by his former mentor, Cherrytail. He can barely remember Firestar and Sandstorm on his own. They left when he had first become an apprentice. "Two cats, sent by StarClan themselves, named Firestar and Sandstorm came from far away to restore a lost clan. Firestar was a firey-orange tom, and Sandstorm was a pale ginger she-cat, and Firestar's mate. When they first came here, there were no remaining cats from the old SkyClan, except for one." The kits eyes widened as he went on. "His name was Sky, a very old cat who kept alive the memory of SkyClan. Back then, everyone thought he was mad. But Sky was far from it. He was a true clan cat. Eventually, they had gathered cats to join the clan. In honor of Sky, the cat who had kept the memory alive his whole life, Firestar gave him the name Skywatcher." "Was Firestar a leader?" Snowkit mewed. "Yes. He is the leader of ThunderClan, a clan that lives far away from here. Anyway, Skywatcher had unfortunately died the next day, but his memory is still kept alive. He hunts with StarClan now." The kits stared at him, eyes wide with awe. "Wow," Nightkit whispered, then yawned. "Go get some rest now," Rocktail mewed. As the kits walked to their mother, he saw that Cherrytail was staring at him from across the clearing. Her amber eyes were filled with warmth and something Rocktail didn't know. He was about to pad over to her when Leafstar and Bouncefoot walked up to him. "I want you and Bouncefoot to keep watch," she mewed. "Yes, Leafstar," Rocktail meowed, bowing his head. "Wake up Tinywhisker and Cherrytail at moonhigh, then you can rest." Leafstar padded away. As the night went by, Bouncefoot and Rocktail found no trouble. He was about to wake up Cherrytail and Tinywhisker to keep watch when a new, fresh scent hit the roof of his mouth. He spun around and saw a large, light gray tom cat crouched in front of them, fur bristling. Rocktail let out a hiss. "What are you doing here?" he growled. This cat looked more frightened then aggressive. Then he saw the cat holding up a paw. It was bleeding, and it hung at an awkward position. "Please help me," he whimpered. The cat collapsed on the ground, panting. "Echosong!" Bouncefoot called. Echosong heard the call and scrambled over. Her eyes widened in concern at the injured cat. "Let me get some herbs," she mewed. A heartbeat later she appeared again with her jaws stuffed with leaves. "I'll tell Leafstar," Bouncefoot murmured. He walked across the clearing and into the darkness. Rocktail rested his gaze on the injured cat. "Who are you?" he whispered. For some reason the cat in front of him looked vaguely familiar. The gray cat looked up at him. "My name is Silver. I am looking for Clover." he rasped. Rocktail's eyes flew wide with shock, and Echosong stopped and stared at him, her amber eyes curious. "Why?" The cat's silver eyes landed on him, filled with pain. "Clover... is my sister."
Wow, long chapter!
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 18, 2008 12:13:35 GMT -5
Thanks Wildpaw! It's up on page 1 now! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 20, 2008 2:37:44 GMT -5
Waaahhh! I cant see it! My computer blocks it! Sad! From Wildpaw
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 20, 2008 10:32:18 GMT -5
Oh. Well i'll set my avatar as it temporarily. Chapter 12 is on it's way!
Okay, here's the cover!
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 21, 2008 1:09:05 GMT -5
It still won't show it! Oh well, thanks anyway.
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