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Post by Icestorm on Aug 21, 2008 13:02:24 GMT -5
Oh. Well it has a forest background with a black cat walking in the shadows, and there is a black cat with green eyes in the box on the front. I'll put chapter 12 on later.
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 21, 2008 18:17:08 GMT -5
Man, the cover sounds really cool! If you go on 'Who to trust' in the sagas section and go to Page 7, my cover is there. Well, its not mine, I made it for Pouncer/Sunpelt! ;D
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 21, 2008 20:49:50 GMT -5
Wow, it's really cool! ;D Here's chapter 12!
CHAPTER 12
"Your sister?" Rocktail gasped in astonishment. But Silver had already sunk into unconsciousness. His mind was racing. How had Silver known Clovertail joined SkyClan? Why had he come looking for her? Rocktail shook the thoughts from his head and turned to Echosong. "I'm going to tell Clovertail," he meowed. Echosong stared at him for a few heartbeats, then nodded, and turned back to Silver. He turned around and saw Cherrytail standing in front of him. "Who is that?" she mewed in confusion. "That... that is Clovertail's brother." Rocktail meowed. Cherrytail's eyes flew wide with shock. "Her brother? How-" Rocktail silenced her by pressing his muzzle against hers. "I'll tell you later. First, I have to let Clovertail know." Cherrytail nodded, and they both went across the clearing to where Clovertail was laying. "Clovertail," he whispered. She lifted her head. "Rocktail? What do you need?" "Someone's here to see you." Clovertail stared at him. "What do you mean?" she mewed. Rocktail sighed. "Bouncefoot and I were keeping watch and a cat came up to us. He... he said he was your brother." Clovertail's eyes widened. "Silver? Silver is here?" she asked. "Yes. He's with Echosong." She pointed with her tail to two shadowy shapes. "He seems to be hurt." "I'll be right back, Patchfoot," she mewed, running towards Echosong. Rocktail and Cherrytail soon followed. When they got over, Silver was awake again. "You must help," he rasped to Echosong. "My friend, Flame, was too weak to go on. I promised to bring back help." Silver's eyes landed on Clovertail. "Clover! I hoped you were here," he mewed. "Shh. Don't talk," she whispered. "Don't waste your energy. Just tell us where Flame is." He pointed with his tail in the direction of the old camp. "We'll fetch him," Cherrytail meowed. "Hurry!" Silver rasped as they ran in the direction that he pointed. They soon pick up Silver's scent, and the scent of another cat nearby. Suddenly they saw a bright-orange tom cat. He was unconscious, and blood oozed from a wound on his flank. "He's still breathing," Cherrytail gasped. "Lets get him back to the clearing," Rocktail mewed. They picked him up and ran into the darkness.
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"Echosong!" Rocktail called as they entered the clearing. "We found Flame, but he's badly injured!" She ran over with herbs in her jaws. "You should go now," she meowed to them. before they could move, Leafstar padded up to Rocktail and Cherrytail. "You have done well," she murmured. "You two may rest." Her amber eyes landed on Rocktail. "We will rest here tomorrow and leave the next day." Side by side, Rocktail and Cherrytail padded to the clearing and laid down. Rocktail closed his eyes, and the last thing he felt was the brush of Cherrytail's soft fur as he fell asleep.
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 21, 2008 21:12:12 GMT -5
Poor Flame! Thanx! Looking forward to the next chappie! ;D
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 22, 2008 17:01:42 GMT -5
Look at chapter 11. Cherrytail is looking at Rocktail with something in her eyes that Rocktail couldn't figure out. What was that something....?
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 23, 2008 14:22:39 GMT -5
These are the characters of the Dark Journey, drawn by me. Enjoy!
PS: I don't know why an advertisement is there. Just ignore it! :b THIS HAS BEEN MOTIFIED! NEW PIC AT THE END!
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 23, 2008 16:39:37 GMT -5
Ha! The pics were good but why were most of them from the back? I saw the cover and it is awesome!
>^^<
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 23, 2008 18:29:28 GMT -5
Most are from the back because they are closeups from the clan meeting pic. I'm making new ones soon. Thanks a lot!
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 24, 2008 13:08:15 GMT -5
Nightkit, Snowkit, Barkkit, and Sunkit will be in the vid soon.
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 24, 2008 13:17:37 GMT -5
PS: Chapter 13 will be up soon!
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 25, 2008 0:59:59 GMT -5
AH! I cant see the pictures again! Maybe if u put them in the video? I cant wait for next Chptr! Man, I had to do speeches todays..........
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 25, 2008 11:45:57 GMT -5
No problem! I'll edit the first vid.
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 25, 2008 12:35:12 GMT -5
Okay, the vids all set! I'll try to post chapter 13 later.
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Post by Icestorm on Aug 25, 2008 23:10:02 GMT -5
Okay, FINALLY heres chapter 13
CHAPTER 13
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey join here for a clan meeting" Leafstar's voice echoed around the clearing. Rocktail, who had been sharing tongues with Cherrytail, got up and headed to the center of the clearing. Leafstar, Flame, and Silver were all standing there proudly. "Silver and Flame have decided to join SkyClan," she mewed. A ripple of approval spread through the cats. "I, Leafstar, leader of SkyClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down at these two cats. They wish to learn the ways of your noble code, and I commend them to you as warriors in their turn." She turned to Silver. "Silver, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend this clan, even at the cost of your life?" Silver looked deep into Leafstar's eyes. "I do." "Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Silver, from this moment you will be known as Silverstripe. StarClan trusts you will give all your courage and intelligence, and we welcome you as a full warrior of SkyClan." Leafstar rested her muzzle on Silverstripe's head and he gave her shoulder a respectful lick. Leafstar turned to Flame. "Flame, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend this clan, even at the cost of your life?" "I do," he meowed, his voice steady and strong. "Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Flame, from this moment you will be known as Flamestorm. StarClan trusts you will give all your bravery and compassion, and we welcome you as a full warrior of SkyClan." Leafstar once again rested her muzzle on his head, and he gave her shoulder a tender lick. "Silverstripe, Flamestorm!" the clan yowled. Once the noise died down, Leafstar continued to speak. "Flamestorm and Silverstripe will hold their silent vigil tonight. This meeting is over." As the clan broke apart, Clovertail padded over to Silverstripe. "Congratulations!" she purred. "I want you to meet some cats." She padded to Rocktail, who was talking with Cherrytail, and his brother and sister. "Silverstripe, these were my kits when you left the gorge. This is Rocktail, Tinywhisker, and Bouncefoot." Silverstripes eyes filled with happiness. He dipped his head. "I'm glad to see you," he mewed. "I haven't seen you in such a long time." Rocktail, Bouncefoot, and Tinywhisker dipped their heads back to Silverstripe. "We're glad to see you too," Tinywhisker purred. "Your very welcome in this clan," Bouncefoot added. Suddenly a yowl sounded from Patchfoot, who was keep watch. Leafstar, who was sharing tongues with Flamestorm, sprung up at the alarm. "What's wrong?" she hissed. Patchfoot glanced at her, eyes wild with terror. "Fox!"
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Post by Wildstar on Aug 26, 2008 1:32:36 GMT -5
Kool! Thankyou I will look at the vid now! =D
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