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Post by Rainstorm2 on May 22, 2009 17:45:34 GMT -5
YAYZ 4 U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Rainstorm2 on May 22, 2009 20:11:22 GMT -5
HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NEW PAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Icestorm on May 26, 2009 14:01:58 GMT -5
great! O.O
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Post by Icestorm on May 26, 2009 20:40:26 GMT -5
CHAPTER 3
Icekit opened her eyes, sticky with sleep. A gentle breeze blew through the camp. Icekit yawned, and got up to stretch her legs. They shrieked in pain, so badly that Icekit squeaked. She flinched, and sat down again. Icekit started to groom her messy pelt. It stuck out in clumps, and pieces of moss and soil stuck to her side. A foot step behind her told her that someone had approached Icekit. She turned around and nearly spat in disgust. There stood Coalfoot, the biggest jerk in all four clans. The black tom constantly taunted Lightningkit for his father, and taunted her for not being clan born. "What do you want, Coalfoot?" she growled. "Come to taunt us again?" The black tom narrowed his eyes. "No need to spit, Icekit," he mewed through his teeth. "Dovepaw and Dewfur sent me. They say Lightningkit is awake." Icekit jumped up immediately and zoomed passed Coalfoot. He hissed at her as she pushed him aside, but Icekit ignored it. Lightningkit was awake! Bursting through the entrance of the medicine den, Icekit meowed, "Lightningkit?" "Shh!" A voice hissed from the dark corner of the den. It was Dewfur. "I finally got him to go to sleep again." "Go to sleep? Why?" Icekit asked, confused. Dewfur sighed. "He was awake a few moments ago. He was in alot of pain. He couldn't move." Icekit's heart sank. "Didn't Coalfoot tell you that?" Icekit shook her head, anger bubbling in her throat. Dewfur sighed. "Figures. Well, Lightningkit is bound to be awake soon, because I only gave him one poppy seed for the pain. How about you fetch him a piece of fresh-kill you two can share and bring it for when he wakes up?" "Okay." Icekit silently slipped out of the den, her tail trailing in the dust. She located the fresh-kill pile, grabbed a vole, and was soon back in the medicine cat den. Icekit waited for her friend to wake once again. After what seemed like days the tiny tom's amber eyes flickered open. They fell on Icekit, who jumped up and ran to him. "You're here," he whispered hoarsely. "Of course I am," she purred, settling down beside Lightningkit, trying her best to ignore the terrible wound on his side. "I know it's bad," he rasped. "But it will be better before you know it." Lightningkit tried to lick Icekit's ear, but instead his head fell to the floor, and he was asleep once again. Icekit didn't move. She rested her head on her paws, and darkness swept over her like a wave.
Icekit felt a nudge in her side and opened her eyes. The sunset light glowed into the medicine den with an orange light. In front of her stood Dewfur. "It's time you went back to the nurcery," he mewed. Icekit didn't move. "No," she protested. "Lightningkit needs me. I'm not leaving." "Icekit-" "No!" she hissed. "He is my best friend. And I am not leaving until he is back on his paws, and I'm sure he will be okay." Dovepaw shouldered her way beside the ice-colored kit. "Icekit, he needs his rest. You have-" "I know what he needs! He needs his friend to be at his side and let him know that he is no alone. I remember the time when he was completely alone in this clan. I'm not letting that happen again because of an injury!" Icekit rested her head in her paws again and shut her eyes tight. Neither Dovepaw nor Dewfur bothered her again. Icekit felt guilt churn in her stomach. She knew she had been unfair and mean, but she couldn't leave Lightingkit. Not now. She knew now that it was her responsibility to protect him, and that one day it will be his responsibility to protect her. Like Bramblestar said- great change is coming. And somehow Icekit knew that it involved both her and Lightningkit.
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Post by Rainstorm2 on May 27, 2009 14:25:09 GMT -5
I love this chapter!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Icestorm on May 27, 2009 14:39:37 GMT -5
Thanks Rainy!! *gives rainy a cheeto*
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Post by Rainstorm2 on May 27, 2009 20:42:26 GMT -5
Mmmmmm...cheesy
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Post by Icestorm on May 27, 2009 21:01:29 GMT -5
I lurv cheetos... XD
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Post by Rainstorm2 on May 28, 2009 15:33:37 GMT -5
I love to like the cheese off my fingers!!!!!!<3<3
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Post by Icestorm on May 28, 2009 16:02:20 GMT -5
hehe me too. X3
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Post by Wildstar on May 29, 2009 3:39:03 GMT -5
Heheeheheeheh CHEETOS! Awesome chapters I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENZ!
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Post by Icestorm on May 29, 2009 14:44:09 GMT -5
thanks! Hopefully you won't have to wait long.
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Post by Rainstorm2 on May 29, 2009 15:05:10 GMT -5
UPDATE AFTER U DO FADING LIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Icestorm on May 29, 2009 15:56:40 GMT -5
OK!!! Rainy, you HAVE to read Wavefur's stories! (yes, she joined the site!) It's in epics called "A sparrow's story" ^^ Before you read that, read her other story, "Twilight rewrite" in one-shots (I think) She's an awesome writer as well as video maker!
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Post by Rainstorm2 on May 29, 2009 20:20:35 GMT -5
Okay!!I will now!!!
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