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Post by Rainstorm2 on Jun 22, 2009 17:45:41 GMT -5
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Post by Icestorm on Jun 22, 2009 22:09:06 GMT -5
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Post by Wildstar on Jun 23, 2009 0:23:19 GMT -5
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww well apparently I suck too and it doesnt stop me!
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Post by Rainstorm2 on Jun 23, 2009 8:18:25 GMT -5
NO!! YOUR STORIES DO NOT SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Icestorm on Jun 23, 2009 16:37:25 GMT -5
YOU DO NOT SUCK!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Wildstar on Jun 26, 2009 1:30:32 GMT -5
AWWW THANKIES GUYS U R SO NICE
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Post by Silvereye on Jun 26, 2009 1:47:59 GMT -5
It's good. Quite exciting. However, you're still getting the dot-dot-dots wrong! You keep doing this sort of thing: "Well, I don't know...maybe it's shoved up against the box?" This is wrong! There are three different ways you can do dot-dot-dots. These are the ways: "Well, I don't know... maybe it's shoved up against the box?" "Well, I don't know ... maybe it's shoved up against the box?" "Well, I don't know . . . maybe it's shoved up against the box?" I prefer the first one, and I think it's most common, although I could be wrong. Any of these versions are acceptable, but the what you did is grammatically incorrect. Other than that, love it.
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Post by Icestorm on Jun 26, 2009 10:35:07 GMT -5
Update soon! x3
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Post by Wildstar on Jun 26, 2009 15:54:44 GMT -5
OK I will TRY and update tonight!
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Post by Icestorm on Jun 26, 2009 16:32:22 GMT -5
YAY!!
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Post by Wildstar on Jun 27, 2009 15:37:05 GMT -5
I only got to do half a chapter last night! I'll try finish it today ;D
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Post by Icestorm on Jun 27, 2009 22:04:59 GMT -5
ok that's fine!
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Post by Icestorm on Jun 27, 2009 22:05:49 GMT -5
I know this is kinda random but... why isn't anyone looking at my warrior's story?
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Post by Wildstar on Jun 29, 2009 2:21:04 GMT -5
OMG I AM SO SORRY! You mean the one in the epics? I think its bacause you comment on that one and then you comment on this one last so my one shows up on the front page as last commented, and people kinda forget about your one! I go comment now!
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Post by Icestorm on Jun 29, 2009 11:02:39 GMT -5
XDDDD Yeah it's okay. XD
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