The Prophecy of Darkness }{ New Start on Fanfics

[Wildpaw]

TITLE: The Prophecy Of Darkness
AUTHOR: Wildpaw (*sigh* I wonder when my warrior ceremony will be)
RATING: PG-Battle scenes, not TOO graphic
PAIRINGS: .......
BETA: ME
COVER: How the heck do I do a cover?

AUTHORS NOTE: Hi guys (Yo Swiftclaw and Lightningstrike!) Sorry I haven't posted I had trouble findin this site again we got a new computer!! Any way next time you see me I'll be a member!! Awesome!! Enjoy!




PROLOGUE:

A splash from the river pierced the silent darkness. Blackstripe pricked her ears and raised her head. She heard a distant mew for help. She jumped to her feet and raced down to the Wildwaters. She skidded to a halt on the beach, spraying shingle into the air. She looked around desperately, searchin for a sign of life. She finally saw a head emerge from the water, and she ran and dived into the strong currents of the river. She swam strongly towards the figure in the water. She lunged for it and caught it by the scruff of the neck. She began pulling desperately towards the shore. She dragged the figure towards the bank and immediately the cat started coughing out water. It rose and turned to face her. She saw that it was an extremely tall tom-cat, and he was a pale yellow colour, like the sunlight at dawn. She saw his eyes were a deep green. but she noticed soething wrong. "You're blind".
He nodded and said, "Tell me, what is your name?"
"Blackstripe. What's your's?"
"Dawnfire."


Next Chapter coming if someone reveiws!! Has anyone here read Maximum Ride? You, and only you, will only know who Dawnfire is based on. If you don't, then let me ask you one question. Who is blind in Maximum Ride? For those who haven't read Maximum Ride, either suffer with not knowing or read it! (i'M NOT FORCING YOU TO DO ANYTHING!!!!!) ;D

[Minty]

Hi Wildpaw, nice to meet you! Somebody's going on this site. ;D Nice story!

[Wildpaw not logged in]

Hi Pouncer!! Do you know where everyone is?? Do you think people have got bored of this site? I have been a guest for like a year and there was loads of people on this site like Swiftclaw, Lightningstrike, (They were my friends on this site. I met Swiftclaw when people used to post questions on the protocol and we both answered each others questions at the same time! I was Lightningstrike's BETA) Are you new or have I just not seen you before? Anyway, thanks about the story!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

CHAPTER 1

Flyingpaw looked around the training field, trying to see some sign of her mentor. She spun around and yowled in fright as something large and dark cannoned into her. She pushed it away hard and saw that it was Fangpaw. "Fangpaw!" she hissed " You shouldn't be here! My mentor is supposed to be coming!"
"Yeah, but he's obviously not coming. You know what old Greytail is like. He almost forgot his own warrior ceremony! Anyway, my mentor didn't come either ." replied Fangpaw, his dark eyes boring in to her.
Flyingpaw purred in amusement, then looked up, alarmed.
"Don't worry" said Fangpaw "It's only Dawnpaw"
A tall pale yellow tom came out from the shadows of the long grass. "Hi, guys" he meowed.
"Hello Dawnpaw" we purred. "What are you doing here?"
"My mentor didn't turn up."
Fangpaw and I exchanged glances, which we didn't need to hide since Dawnpaw couldn't see them anyway because he was blind. He wasn't born that way, but when he was younger he had been in a fight with a fox and the fox had swiped him across the eyes.
"That's funny Dawnpaw" said Fangpaw "Because ours didn't turn up either!"
"Maybe......Someone's coming!" Did I mention that Dawnpaw has extremely good hearing and touch? We all jumped to our paws, but it was too late. A huge group of cats had surrounded us. We had no chance. "Come with us" growled one, obviously the leader.
"No!" growled Dawnpaw.
"Well, now you will see what happens to cats who disobey the mighty BoneClan" barked the leader, and the rest of the cats cheered.

DUN DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope you like it pouncer and any others!! ;D

[Minty]

Hey Wildpaw, yeah I don't know why everyone's leaving. I'm kind of new, I joined in December 07. Great story!

[Onyxfurr]

It's probably because there is another website for fanfictions now... Darn! there are so many good stories out there that are not being finished!

[Wildstar]

Well, looks like its just us three on this site!!! Wait.......... you are staying, right?? ?PLEASE STAY!!Hey, its kind of awesome just having us three! LETS TAKE OVER THE WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!
Ahem... Sorry!

[Wildstar]

Hi guys whats up with those stupid harry potter things I tried to read one and it just doesn't make sense! I hate spammers ruining our site. Anyway....... NEXT CHAPTER! This one is a short one, sorry!

CHAPTER 2 (I think)

The leader grabbed Dawnpaw by the scruff of the neck and pinned him on the ground with a forepaw. Dawnpaw struggled ferociously, but to no avail. Dawnpaw heard the leader leer down at him with a vicious snarl and his claws unsheathed. Dawnpaw yelped as the long claws dug into him. The leader jaw rushed towards his neck and adrenaline rushed through Dawnpaw. With a yowl of fury he flung the leader off him and pinned him down. He turned towards where he heard his friends cheering him. "Run!" he mouthed, and they took off into the bushes. The rest of the pack were too scared seeing there leader on the ground and they huddled together, looking terrified. Dawnpaw hissed into the leaders ear, "Don't bother me or my Clan again, because I will have my revenge". And with that he took off after his friends.

Sorry it is so short gotta go!!

[Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~*]

Awsome! And I read Maximum Ride too!

SPOILER: Click to show

Iggy

is blind right? ( and that Guest up there is me)
...It's really strange, basically being the only active members.. I've been a guest for a long time to, but I only recently started to post.

Edit: Darn. The Spoiler thingy isn't working. Does anybody know how to use it?

[Wildstar]

Yeah, Iggy is awesome!!! Sorry. Happy Membership ceremony to me and you!!!!!! I just joined like 3 days ago. When I try to use a spoiler or a bold etc. it never works and the same thing happens to me! I just realised Jaypaw is like Iggy..........................................................

[Minty]

Me too, whenever I try to use bolds or any of those it never works! Well, great story!

[Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~*]

I like Fang the best. Do you know about Fangs Blog, Wildpaw? fang updates in it alot and it just keeps you updated on stuff they do. Really funny.
I wonder why the bold/italics/spoilers etc. dont work...

[lazy wildpaw]

Thanks pouncer and onyxfur (I exalted both of you!!!!) Heres next chapter!

Back at camp, the apprentices looked around in horror. The camp was deserted and in a mess. "How could this have happened?" asked Flyingpaw in disbelief. "we were only gone for an hour!"
"It must have been BoneClan" stated Dawnfire. " That group must have been a distraction for us, while the rest of them came and attacked the camp."
"But why would they send a distraction party for just us three apprentices?" asked Fangpaw curiously.
"Maybe.........maybe there is something special about us" said Flyingpaw nervously.
"Well, who cares, lets go find the rest of FireClan!" exclaimed Dawnpaw, racing off. "Come on, I've found their scent!"
Fangpaw and Flyingpaw raced after Dawnpaw, pausing every so often to get their bearings. "Where are we?" asked Fangpaw.
"I think.. I think we are at Silverlake!" said Flyingpaw, looking at the sun shining down on the silver lake beneath them.
"You mean the place where Owlstar and Cheetahstar fought together against Lionstar and Tawnystar in the legends? That place isn't supposed to be real!" exclaimed Fangpaw.
"Well, it is now" murmured Dawnpaw.

Sorry it is short again! Hi Pouncer and Onyxfur and anyone else! ;D

[Wildstar]

Yeah I know about Fangs blog Onyxfur but the parental control *grumbles* blocks it. But my friend prints stuff off from it for me sometimes! Have you got any stories on this site? If you have I will review them!

[Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~*]

I have some storues, I might put them ip here or not.

[Onyxfur aka *~ AITCH~*]

Keep on making the stories please!